DIRECTION FOR CREATIVE
WRITING TEACHERS—
A HERMENEUTIC
PHENOMENOLOGICAL PERSPECTIVE
(MONOGRAPH NUMBER ONE) Ó
by
Dan Lukiv
B.Sc. (mathematics), The
University of British Columbia (UBC), 1976;
Teacher Training
(kindergarten to grade three), UBC, 1977;
Humber School for Writers’
Creative Writing Program (poetry), 1996;
Writer’s Digest’s Advanced
Novel Writing Program, 1997;
M.Ed. (creative writing), The University of Northern
British Columbia (UNBC), 2003
ÓDan Lukiv, 2006. All rights reserved. This work may not be reproduced in whole or in
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Table of Contents
Acknowledgements
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Chapter One: An Overview
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Chapter Two: The Participants
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Chapter Three: What Is Creative Writing and What Is a
Creative Writer?
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Chapter Four: A Few Words about Qualitative Research
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Chapter Five: Phenomenology—the Abstract and the Concrete
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Chapter Six: Qualitative Interview Data Is like a Poem
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Chapter Seven: A Suspended Literature Review
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Chapter Eight: Creative Writers Who Were Encouraged in
School—a Literature Review
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Chapter Nine: The Nature of Encouragement
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Chapter Ten: Narrative Style and the Research Question
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Chapter Eleven: Literature Related to the Teaching of
Creative Writing
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Chapter Twelve: Bracketing and Phenomenology
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Chapter Thirteen: Tying up My Own Biases
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Chapter Fourteen: Methodology
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Chapter Fifteen: Conclusions—What the Participants Did Not
Say
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Chapter Sixteen: Conclusions—Arthur’s Themes
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Chapter Seventeen: Conclusions—Thomas’ Theme
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Chapter Eighteen: Conclusions—Elizabeth’s Themes
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Chapter Nineteen: Recommendations with Respect to Arthur’s
Themes
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Chapter Twenty: Recommendations with Respect to Thomas’ Theme
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Chapter Twenty-One: Recommendations with Respect to
Elizabeth’s Themes
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Chapter Twenty-Two: Further Research—Hermeneutic
Phenomenology
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Chapter Twenty-Three: Further Research—Covering Theory
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Chapter Twenty-Four: Further Research—Survey Research
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Chapter Twenty-Five: A Checklist for Creative Writing
Teachers
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Chapter Twenty-Six: A Last Word
References
Appendix A: Ethics Information
Appendix B: An Interview Guide
Endnotes
Acknowledgements
I want to thank my wife, Julie, and
our daughters, Kim, Christine, Melissa, and Heather, for their patience with me
as I tried to add yet another ball—the writing of this monograph—into an
already tricky juggling act. As a husband, father, teacher, researcher,
creative writer, and elder in a congregation of Jehovah’s Witnesses, that
juggling act required all the patience, as I word processed word processed word
processed, that my family could muster. I also want to thank Arthur, Thomas,
and Elizabeth, the participants of my three hermeneutic phenomenological
studies. Their time and patience enabled me to complete studies that “found”
editors committed to publishing them. To Professor Max van Manen, Department of
Secondary Education, Faculty of Education, University of Alberta, I say thank
you for your many, many articles and insight about phenomenology. They helped
me find my way and make necessary “course” corrections as a researcher. Van
Manen speaks of “Dutch scholars who worked in the phenomenological tradition.
... [Their] work was either very good or
very bad” (van Manen, 1990, p. 3). I hope that Direction for Creative
Writing Teachers—A Hermeneutic Phenomenological Perspective is very
good.
I’d
say thank you to my Compaq Notebook laptop, a much-visited companion during my
writing of this manuscript, but that seems silly, don’t you think?
Chapter One: An Overview
In the hermeneutic phenomenological
tradition, I explored through interviews with each of three creative writers
(respectively: Arthur, a poet, Study I [MEd research], 2002b, 2003b, or 2003c;
Thomas, a poet, Study II, 2004b; and Elizabeth, a fiction writer, Study II [1], 2005b, 2005c, &
2005d) this research question: What, if any, experiences in school
encouraged [the participant] to become an adult creative writer? Many
literature and curriculum guides for Language Arts address how to teach poetry
and fiction writing (not surprising in view of many individuals’ thirst for reading
creative works [e.g., poetry, fiction]). If creative writing, therefore, stands
as a formal Language Arts ingredient, then direction for teachers about what
sorts of activities can encourage students to view creative writing seriously merits
attention.
One
might logically wonder: Do creative writing activities in school stand as
examples of lived school experiences[2] that encouraged the
participants? Consider “yes” to that question as a possibility. As a
poet, novelist, and short story writer, I naturally have thoughts and beliefs
about what activities or events in school encouraged me to become a creative
writer; therefore, I attempted, prior to each interview, to bracket out my
biases related to those thoughts and beliefs. I also attempted to bracket out
themes I had discovered in my template study (Study I) before my beginning
Study II. Likewise, I attempted to bracket out themes I had discovered in
Studies I and II before I began Study III.
Thus, prior to each interview, I attempted to bracket out possibilities—possibilities
that I had inadvertently come up with based on general reading, conversations
with colleagues, and deductive, inductive, and analogy-type reasoning that
suggested certain events in school could encourage students to take up writing.
Eight
themes emerged from the data of Study I, one theme from Study II, and five
themes from Study III about what lived school experiences encouraged each
respective participant. By emerged from the data I mean that “the
researcher [does not] try to enforce the excerpts into categories, and the
categories into themes that he or she already has in mind, [but] rather…let[s]
them develop from experience of the participants as represented in the
interviews” (Seidman quoted in Bennet, 1998, Uncovering Thematic Statements,
para. 2). Bracketing helps themes emerge, and recommendations based on
those themes provide direction for educators.
Chapter Two: The
Participants
I
conducted interviews (McMillan & Shumacher, 1997; Madjidi, n.d.; Patton,
1987; and van Manen, 1990) with three Canadian writers. All three studies
discovered school experiences that had encouraged the participants to become
creative writers, and the exploratory nature of the studies (McMillan &
Schumacher, 1997; Patton, 1987; and van Manen, 1990) sought to describe, in the
hermeneutic phenomenological sense (Myers, 1997), themes that emerged (Bennet,
1998) from those experiences (van Manen, 1990, and 2000p).
In
Study I, I interviewed a poet. His work has appeared in many of Canada’s elite
literary journals, and he has written a regular poetry column for an
established publication. He lives and works in a small Canadian city and has
obtained a formal university education at the bachelor and graduate levels. In
conversation, this witty individual repeatedly plays with words, “concoct[ing
new ones]…for deliberate humorous effect” (Portmanteau Words, 1993, p. 151),
speaking jabberwocky seemingly without effort, and yet his wordplays often
conclude with the emotional weight of a good poem. His impish smile and
twinkling eyes remind me that mischief and language sometime form a delightful
marriage. I call him Arthur to protect his anonymity.
In
Study II, I conducted interviews with another successful Canadian poet. To
date, he has had poetry collections published by major Canadian houses and, as
would be expected, many poems published in literary journals. He was awarded,
but declined, a Canada Arts Council grant to write and recite poetry. He lives
and works in a northern Canadian community, and he has obtained a formal
university education at the bachelor level. He is a perfectionist as a poet;
his work does not enter the public domain until he feels completely sure it is
worthy and substantial. His poetry possesses a definitive clarity that reflects
passionate, focused thought. As I spent time with him, however, I found other
passions quickly surfaced: his family and his horses. I call him Thomas to
protect his anonymity.
I
also interviewed a successful Canadian fiction writer (Study III). Canada’s
most prominent houses have published her work, and one of her books ranks as a
Canadian classic. Her poetry and non-fiction have appeared in several
magazines, journals, and newspapers, but she sees herself predominantly as a
writer of fiction. She lives in a rural
Canadian setting, surrounded by pine, spruce, poplar, and birch, where the
summer days are often hot and the winter days often cold. Her living-room
window overlooks a pristine lake, home of many ducks and trout. This nature
lover, this lady of many international hiking adventures, has a sparkle in her
eye and a warmth in her heart. She writes deeply humanistic fiction. She completed grades one through eight in a
one-room log school located in a small, northern, Canadian community. Directly
after her completion of grade eight, she commenced grades nine through eleven
through a provincial correspondence program and completed grade twelve over
three decades later as a grandma among adolescents at a modern high school.
Since that time, she has completed tertiary courses through BC’s Open Learning
Institute. I call her Elizabeth to protect her anonymity.
If I
am to call Arthur, Thomas, and Elizabeth creative writers, however, readers may
ask what I mean by that statement. They may want to know: 1) What is creative
writing?; and, 2) What is a creative writer?
Chapter Three: What is
Creative Writing and
What Is a Creative Writer?
Arthur,
Thomas, and Elizabeth provided me with rich interviews filled with memories of
relevant school experiences—relevant with respect to my research question, that
is. I speak of these experiences in terms of elementary and high school as
opposed to college and university. I speak of these participants as creative
writers, as individuals who produce what I will shortly define as creative
writing. Although somewhat circular in logic, that last sentence answers: “What
is a creative writer?” Mathematicians produce mathematics. Physicists produce
physics. Music composers produce musical scores. Dancers produce dancing. These
individuals stand defined by what they do.
So, then, what is creative writing?
Although I believe that
generally all writing is creative—in fact, I believe that generally all
thinking is creative (Smith, 1990)—I do not want to dwell on those ontological
premises. I define creative writing of poets, fiction writers, and dramatists
in the same way many others define it:
Creative writing is writing that
expresses the writer’s thoughts and feelings in an imaginative, often unique,
and poetic way. Creative writing is guided more by the writer’s need to express
feelings and ideas than by restrictive demands of factual and logical
progression of expository writing. (What is Creative Writing?, 1999)
In the words of distinguished novelist Ernest J.
Gaines, creative writing is “imaginative writing. ... Though the creative
writer draws from factual sources, sociology, psychology, politics, religion,
etc., ... he should use all of that information imaginatively—never factually”
(Gaines, n.d.). Creative writing, then, conveys feelings and personal ideas
more than information, as opposed to expository writing, which conveys
information more than feelings and personal ideas (What is Expository Writing?,
1999).
Now
that I have established what the participants have written as creative writers,
I will discuss the qualitative paradigm I applied to study them.
Chapter Four: A Few Words about
Qualitative Research
Generally,
research in the human sciences (Davis, 1997b)—referring to “the human as [a]
psychological being: What is he, what does he bring about, how does he
understand himself and the others and the world” (Institutes of the Human
Science Research, n.d., para. 1)—has proceeded on a structured, quantitative
course of experimentation, statistics, and “hard, real” (Cohen & Manion,
1994, p. 6) knowledge. Quantitative researchers consider this “hard” knowledge
as “objective and [statistically] tangible” (p. 6). This epistemological
assumption gives the researcher “an observer role” (p. 6). My qualitative
studies, however, focussed on knowledge as “a softer, more subjective ... kind,
based on experience and insight of a unique and essentially personal nature”
(p. 6; and Haig-Brown, 1993).
Rather
than choosing “from a range of traditional options—surveys, experiments, and
the like” (Cohen & Manion, 1994, p. 7), for the three methodologically
identical studies I chose “from a comparable range of recent and emerging
techniques—accounts, participant observation and personal constructs, for
example” (p. 7). I looked at “personal constructs” in terms of phenomenology,
in particular in terms of “the phenomena of experience rather than by external,
objective and physically described reality” (p. 20), as found in traditional,
quantitative research. My choices stood logically affixed to the
phenomenological nature of my research question.
What,
then, do I mean by phenomenology?
Chapter Five:
Phenomenology—the
Abstract and the Concrete (2003f)
In
terms of the human experience, phenomenology attempts to describe phenomena,
which could include a perspective, various perspectives, appearances, events,
actions, changes, or any occurrence, really, but generally does not attempt to
describe forces that produce such phenomena. Phenomenology attempts to describe
a phenomenon in terms of its essence with regard to the human experience
at hand. Phenomenological descriptions could include data from one or a variety
of individuals, or from other appropriate, non-fleshly sources, which could
include literary and philosophy texts, art, science, and research.
Phenomenology differs from ontology.
Phenomenologists concern themselves with what is the essence of lived
experience; ontologists concern themselves with what is reality for the
individual (Halliday, 1999; Ontology, n.d.). For example, ontologically, how
does the individual see the world (what is his or her reality?), or
parts thereof? Answers to that question could describe why some researchers
tend to do qualitative research (see, e.g., Chalip, Marshall, Thomas, &
White, 1998; Graham, 1997; Wilcke, 2002; and Studies I, II, and III), whereas
others tend to do quantitative research (see, e.g., Savicki, 2000). One
researcher may ask a research question best investigated through statistical
(quantitative) analysis (see, e.g., Boss & Taylor, 1989). Another
researcher may ask a different question best investigated through hermeneutic
phenomenological (qualitative) analysis (e.g., Studies I, II, and III). Doesn’t
each research question say something about the researcher who dreamed it
up (Siegle, n.d.b)?
Phenomenology, expressed in the form
of an article, explores phenomena through whatever information seems appropriate
(e.g., interviews, documents, literature, philosophy, experience: this may
refer to concrete sensory details and to time, place, physiology, spirituality,
and relationships). Often, methodology is not systematically described (see,
e.g., Altrows, 2000; Baldursson, 2000b; Bergum, 2000; Bottorff, 2000; Brooks,
2000; Burton, 2000; Clark, 2000b; Connolly, 2000; Davies, 2000; Davis, 2000;
Devine, 2000; Evans, 2000; Fahlman, 2000; Field, 2000; Flickinger, 2000;
Godkin, 2000; and Hawley, 2000).
Phenomenological research, on the other hand,
although it also explores phenomena through whatever information seems appropriate,
should follow a systematic methodology (see, e.g., Baldursson, 2000a; Clark,
2000a; Cull-Wilby, 2000; Ford, 2000; Hagedorn, 2000; James, 2000; Lukiv, 2002b,
2003b, 2003c, 2004b, 2005b, 2005c, and 2005d; Maeda-Fujita, 2000;
Montgomery-Whicher, 2000; and Winning, 2000) that, described fully, addresses
bias, gathering of data, analysis, interpretation, and, if necessary, ethical
concerns and sampling procedures (Studies I, II, and III). A systematic
methodology can establish a study’s validity (Lukiv, 2003e).
Traditional
quantitative research has attempted to establish validity through systematic,
rigid methodology (McMillan & Schumacher, 1997). Sometimes in
phenomenological research, however, the exploration of a phenomenon alters or
defines methodology needed along the way (Burch, 1991). In this circumstance,
methodology altered or formulated along the way can still be explicitly
described, thereby establishing its level of validity; however, when it is not
explicitly described, it does not, in my mind, merit the necessary labels of
valid and systematic.
Hermeneutic
phenomenology (van Manen, 1990), a marriage between interpretation and essence,
attempts, through explicit research methodology, to reduce data to its essence
as described in themes. But themes can form two categories: essential and
incidental (van Manen, 1990). The essential themes become the essence of the
phenomenon. In my hermeneutic phenomenological studies (I, II, and III), I
discovered 14 essential themes and eight incidental ones. Incidental themes are
generally discarded. Analysis investigates what the themes are; interpretation
defines which ones are essential through a process some refer to as free
imaginative variation (Chapter Fourteen: Methodology; Lukiv, 2005a; and van
Manen, 1990).
Philosophy from a phenomenological
point of view, however, attempts to describe phenomena through
reason/logic, conceptualization. Some influential phenomenological philosophers
include: F. J. J. Buytendijk, Jacques Derrida, Georg Wilhelm Friedrich Hegel,
Edmund Husserl, Jan Martinus Langeveld, Maurice Merleau-Ponty, Paul Ricoeur,
Max Scheler, Alfred Schutz, and Stephan Strasser. Abstractions often abound in
philosophers’ works (Kline, 1967), sometimes at levels that, for many, defy
comprehension (Trejo, 1993).
Philosophers
of this phenomenological camp, although diverse in their approach to their
disciplines, often try to answer questions such as what is lived experience?;
what is consciousness?; what does the essence of something mean?;
can there ever be an essence?; for an individual, what is the
experience of space, of his or her body, of time, and of relationships?
Perhaps you immediately see why philosophical abstractions accumulate in the
rhetoric of what some would call answers to these questions. But when
philosophers’ arguments include statements such as: if x, then y; if x, then
not y; if not x, then not y; if not x, then y; x if and only if y; not x if and
only if not y; not x if and only if y; if x, then only y; and if x = y and y is
the opposite of z, then x and z are opposites (a Socratic favourite of Plato;
see, e.g., The Dialogues, 2003), in which x or y really amount to nothing more
than personal opinion or even a so-called axiom (Kline, 1967), which may turn
out to be an incorrect assumption or a true statement only in unique
circumstances, then, frankly, the arguments might deserve space in the
libraries of Laputa (Swift, 1726/1985).
Plato,
for example, wrote philosophically about the immortality of the soul (Singer,
1999; and You Can Believe, 2003). Let x = the soul is immortal. But from
a Biblical point of view, according to Genesis 2:7 and Ezekiel 18:4, 20 (New
World Translation), a man or a woman is himself or herself a soul that can
die (You Can Believe, 2003). Therefore, I could follow with not x = the soul
is mortal. Anybody, then, who accepts x as true, and engages his or her
mind in if x, then y and likewise arguments could step into a world of
nonsense-rhetoric (New World Translation, 2 Timothy 6:4), no matter how
eloquent or creative or ingenious his or her thinking or writing.
The
phenomenological researcher may explore, rather than philosophical arguments or
constructs or premises or rhetoric, the lived experiences of people such as I
did through my research question when I asked Arthur, Thomas, and Elizabeth what,
if any, experiences in school encouraged them to became a creative writers? I
defined concretely, I should add, a lived experience through establishing an
interview guide2 (Appendix B: Interview Guide).
I did
not, then, trip into the coliseum of diverse philosophers expressing diverse
thoughts or theories about what is a lived experience. Does that seem
appropriate, to borrow a term from philosophy, but to define it according to my
own purpose? Yes, that does seem appropriate, to me, providing that my
definition presents useful data with regard to my research question. If you
believe, then, that my interview guide questions establish a useful sense of “what
happened” in events relative to my research question, then I have likely
satisfied your demand for an appropriate definition of lived experience, but
without an avalanche of abstract words. If you accept my description of essence
in terms of essential, not incidental, themes that are established through free
imaginative variation (see Chapter Fourteen: Methodology), then, likewise, I
have established a useful definition of essence without the abstraction dog
pile.
Interestingly,
poets, themselves phenomenologists of a sort, who also search for essences,
generally avoid abstract words—often Latinated
versions of root words (Saul, 1995)—in the hope of creating an emotional or
intellectual understanding or experience of a phenomenon for the reader. That
kind of understanding or experience usually comes surest with the most
concrete, the most non-Latinated words the poet can gather (Drury, 1991).
Concrete words tend to ground the reader in the five senses, whereas abstract
words tend to unground the reader. Anybody preoccupied with abstract words
could become the Duffy of my following poem:
THE ALPHABET (1999, p. 197)
In Dubliners,
Duffy “lived a little distance
From his body,”
Like a plucked brain,
Like a leaping Antaeus.
The touch of her hand
On his cheek
Might have cured him,
But he’d neither learned the alphabet
Of simple somersaults
Nor held the Roman torch:
Mens sana in corpore sano
(A sound mind in a sound body).
O Duffy Descartes:
“I think; therefore,
I am
[What?]”
As
the poem highlights, there can exist a certain ironic ungrounding in the
unnecessarily abstract. Studies I, II, and III avoided this irony by concretely
stating what I was looking for in terms of a lived experience and defining the
essence of the phenomenon as essential themes of my participants’ lived
experience. My studies, then, borrowed terms from philosophy, but grounded them
by defining them within an explicit, systematic methodology that produced
themes that are concrete in the sense of their being of practical value for
creative writing teachers.
The
language, then, of my phenomenology, is concrete, or as concrete as possible,
just as the language of much poetry is concrete. Just as meanings in my studies
lie implicitly in interviews and could lie in other data (e.g., relics [van
Manen, 1990]), meanings in much poetry lie implicitly in their texts.
Therefore, I can reasonably say qualitative interview data is like a poem. I
discuss that statement in some detail in the following chapter.
Chapter Six: Qualitative
Interview Data Is like a Poem (2003d)
Perhaps
you find the question how is qualitative interview data like a poem?
peculiar. Clearly, interview data, for qualitative research, is not “characterized
by the imaginative treatment of experience and a heightened use of language
more intensive than ordinary speech” ([Webster’s:] Poem, 1992, p. 749),
nor by “composition characterized by intensity and beauty of language or
thought” (p. 749). Outside the domain of human science, freelance writers,
reporters, and journalists may interview informants (Adamec, 2000; and Cool,
1987), and talk show hosts (e.g., Johnny Carson, from days past) may interview
guests, and these interviews, no matter how biased the interviewers, may
provide the information or entertainment sought. Some of these interviews may
actually possess poetic characteristics as just mentioned from Webster’s.
On a talk show, have you heard manic Robin Williams’ “imaginative treatment of
experience and ... heightened use of language more intensive than ordinary
speech”? Some might call his “interview” performances strangely poetic. But the
question remains: In the world of human science research, how is qualitative
interview data like a poem?
The
implicit nature of the data relates to the implicit nature of the poem. Whether
the poem is metaphysical, extranatural, narrative, lyric, dramatic, metrical,
rhyming, or free verse (Bugeja, 1994), generally the reader must analyse and interpret
the poem to find understanding. Meaning is generally not explicit, whereas it
often is in expository writing (van Manen, 1990). In poetry, the explicit often
bores the reader. He wants to figure the poem out for himself. In other words,
the poet must “show, not tell” (Drury, 1991, p. 30). Likewise in fiction,
generally the reader wants the author to show him meaning, to show, not tell,
what the characters, for example, are like (Knott, 1997). In this sense, often
fiction, like poetry, has implicit, not explicit, quality. Meaning is usually
not explicit in qualitative data either (van Manen, 1990). The researcher must
analyze and interpret the data to find understanding (Studies I, II, and III;
McMillan & Schumacher, 1997; Patton, 1987; and van Manen, 1990).
Just
as a Professor of Literature could analyze and interpret W. B. Yeats’ famous
poem “The Second Coming” (1922/n.d.), using tools his “trade” has taught him
(Leggo, 1997), a qualitative researcher could analyze and interpret data using
tools his studies in research have taught him. In my phenomenological studies
about what events in school had encouraged established writers to take up
creative writing seriously in adulthood, I applied rigorous procedures in the
name of validity (Arminio, 2002; Guba & Lincoln, 1982; McMillan &
Schumacher, 1997; Morse, Barrett, Mayan, Olson, & Spiers, 2002; and Siegle,
n.d.c) to analyze and interpret the data (van Manen, 1990), producing themes as
an end result.
The
data speaks, in the same sense that a poem speaks, about meaning, about
thematic statements. The researcher must find these, as they exist embedded in
the transcribed lines, perhaps related to categories, concepts, or other
understandings (Calloway & Knapp, 1995; Glaser, 2002; and Introduction to
Qualitative Tools, 1998). We recognize “that a text can ‘speak’ to us” (van
Manen, 2000u, para. 1). Logically, “the more vocative a text, the more strongly
the meaning is embedded within it” (para. 1). In some cases, the more “difficulty
that this [vocative text] presents ... [for the researcher] to articulate or
address this implicit [meaning, the more difficulty he or she will have to
express it] in explicit, reflective and cognitive terms” (para. 2). The above statement
relates to poetry. Van Manen asks, “How is meaning captured by or embedded in
poetic language? These concerns are methodologically relevant since they help
us become attentive to what can o[f]ten [sic] be important in phenomenological
inquiry and phenomenological writing” (para. 3).
The
qualitative researcher, or the person studying a poem, may consider methods
that “enhance the ... ‘lived sense’ communicated by a text. To achieve this,
begin by asking: What tone belongs to this text? ... Sober? Contemplative?
Ceremonial? Respectful? and so forth” (van Manen, 2000s, para. 2). These
methods may bring textual meaning, even interview data, “vividly into presence,
making it immediately or unreflectively recognizable” (van Manen, 2000r, para.
1). As van Manen, a phenomenological researcher, tells us:
There is no limit to the range of
approaches that one can use in bringing experience [as found in interview data]
vividly into presence. But the main aim of evocative inquiry is to listen to
the things that are before us, that have a hold on us through the mediating
function of the evocative text. (2000m, para. 1).
The
search for meaning can be fascinating, exhilarating: “When concrete things are
named in text ... a peculiar effect may occur: its textual meaning begins to
address us. We say: ‘this poem, [or] this text [qualitative data], speaks to
me!’” (van Manen, 2000o, para. 1). When I analyzed and interpreted my
phenomenological interviews, I found myself somewhat dizzy with excitement as I
actually found themes embedded in concrete statements (experiences/stories),
themes that through participant review (McMillan & Schumacher, 1997; and
van Manen, 1990, and 2000b) were verified as valid. I felt as if I were
entering the life experience of another, learning how school, in specific ways,
had encouraged each of my participants to become writers. I relate to van Manen’s
statement that
human science can not only increase
our understandings of the human world, it can also humanize this world by
transforming us and deepening our humanity. This sense of life meaning is not
necessarily found by looking more deeply into the innerness of our “selves.”
Meaningfulness is more likely found in the space that lies outside the self, in
the communal realm of the “other” [in the case of my studies, in the realm of
my participants]. (200l, para. 1)
The
interview data, as a text, speaks to the researcher about meaning, themes,
humanistic insights, just as a poem speaks to the reader. Humanistic insights
become a subset in “the realm of the ethical” (van Manen, 2000q, para. 2). The
data speaks implicitly about what is so, or what is humanistic; the poem often
does too. Some call this poetic truth (Bugeja, 1994). Some speak of truth
through research (Ewing, 2003; and Leggo, 2003). Philosophers also speak about
truth (Vanderstraeten & Biesta, 1998). In either of the three cases—poetry,
research, or philosophy—I find that the term truth can be misleading, because it requires a ruler that measures
truth according to a universal standard, but people tend to describe truth
according to personal, not universal, standards (Answering The Roman Governor’s
Question, 1965). One person calls the Theory of Evolution a fact (Gould, Luria,
& Singer, 1981), another calls it by its name—a theory (Lukiv, 2001c,
Chapter Five). One person believes the soul is immortal, another believes it’s
mortal (see Chapter Five: Phenomenology—The Abstract and the Concrete).
I
circumvent this subject about truth. I don’t want the philosopher’s What is
truth? labyrinth. Philosophical answers to such questions quickly become
abstraction dog piles (see Chapter Five: Phenomenology—The Abstract and the
Concrete). I prefer to speak of meanings and themes (call them humanistic
insights, if you like) that implicitly lie within both poems and qualitative
data. Those meanings and themes answer how qualitative data is like a poem.
In the next chapter, A Suspended Literature
Review, I discuss how meanings and themes from
studies as found in phenomenological or other qualitative or even quantitative
work can bias a researcher. Certainly bias threatens internal validity
(McMillan & Schumacher, 1997). The chapter describes one method I used as a
new researcher to reduce this threat.
Chapter Seven: A Suspended
Literature Review
At
the proposal stage of Study I, I planned not to conduct a comprehensive
literature review of sources that describe school experiences that had
encouraged people to become creative writers until after my completing an
analysis and interpretation of Study I’s data. I referred to this review as a suspended
literature review. I did not want, especially as a new researcher, to
inadvertently bias myself. In view of the hermeneutic phenomenological nature
of my study, I was following van Manen’s (1990) advice: “If one examines
existing human science texts [including their meanings and themes] at the very
outset then it may be more difficult to suspend one’s interpretive
understanding of the phenomenon. It is sound practice to attempt to address the
phenomenological meaning of a phenomenon on one’s own first” (p. 76). Some
qualitative researchers, on the other hand, conduct literature reviews “to
establish a ‘foreshadowed problem’ ... [to] provide direction and purpose”
(Qualitative Research Methods, n.d.), whereas I, as a hermeneutic
phenomenological researcher, established direction and purpose through my
defining the research question in my aforementioned proposal. (Note: That
proposal passed the University of Northern British Columbia’s Ethics Committee.1)
To not “suspend one’s interpretive
understanding” could increase the possibility of researcher bias, thereby
compromising internal validity, casting doubt on the truth of themes that
emerge from the data through researcher analysis and interpretation. Any
qualitative or quantitative study that told me what sorts of school events had
encouraged some people to become creative writers could have biased me as I
conducted Study I. Van Manen argues:
The problem of phenomenological
inquiry is not always that we know too little about the phenomenon we wish to
investigate, but that we know too much. Or, more accurately, the problem is
that our “common sense” pre-understandings, our suppositions, assumptions, and
the existing bodies of scientific knowledge, predispose us to interpret the
nature of the phenomenon before we have even come to grips with the
significance of the phenomenological question. (1990, p. 46)
Any
suspended literature review that I would conduct later in Study I that might
support or contradict relevant themes in the lived experience of the
participant, I decided, would appear throughout the completed study’s
conclusions and recommendations sections. That is common qualitative structure.
Often, qualitative researchers “present literature discussions and integrate
criticism of the literature into the text of a study” (McMillan &
Schumacher, 1997, p. 119) rather than present a literature-review-only section “because
the traditional format of qualitative research is that of a narrative” (p.
147); however, my suspended literature review during Study I revealed no
hermeneutic phenomenological studies that relate to my research question.
To date (2006), I have yet to discover other
qualitative or any quantitative studies that relate to my research question,
and yet, after completing Study III, I did locate sources that discuss or make
reference to experiences in school that writers remember as sources of
encouragement. I present these sources in the following chapter, Creative
Writers Who Were Encouraged in School, but not as phenomenological examples.
They lack the rigor (Morse et al., 2002) of empirical research, and yet I do
present those sources as evidence that the phenomenon I have investigated in my
three studies may exist at a widespread level amongst writers. Although,
admittedly, one Canadian novelist thought about my research question for about
three months, concluding that absolutely no experiences in school had
encouraged him to become a creative writer, I suspect rather than conclude that
he and others like him are anomalies, or, to use a statistical term, outliers.
Chapter Eight: Creative
Writers Who Were Encouraged in School
—a Literature Review
Please note that although there exists
many comments in articles, interviews, and biographies about creative writers
who were encouraged in school, few of these comments, according to my
literature searches, provide concrete details about particular ways these
writers were encouraged. S. Maxx Mahaffey’s high school teacher, Mrs. Laborde,
encouraged her to become a writer (About S. Maxx Mahaffey, n.d.). She grew up
to become a poet and fiction writer. But in what ways did Mrs. Laborde
encourage her? She apparently “saw [Mahaffey] as unique” (n.d., para. 1). What
does that mean in terms of encouragement? Only S. Maxx Mahaffey can say for
sure. Actually, doesn’t encouragement require a highly personal context, and
hermeneutic phenomenological interviews (Studies I, II, and III; and van Manen,
1990), quite frankly, provide a way to explore encouragement in that context.
I do not mean to say, however, that
encouragement requires a context so personal that what encourages one
person will not encourage another. The very premise of my research assumes that
what encourages one may encourage others.
Just as Mrs. Laborde’s encouraged
Mahaffey, Barbie Perkins-Cooper, playwright and screenwriter, received
encouragement to become a writer from a high school teacher (Barbie
Perkins-Cooper, n.d.). In what way(s)?
Rukhsana Khan, a Muslim from Pakistan who grew up from age three in Canada, had
an “eighth grade teacher who first discovered her creative abilities and
encouraged her to become a writer” (Khan, 2001, para. 2). Khan says, “My
English teacher told me I was a ‘poet’ and should become an author when I grew
up. The idea appealed to me because I absolutely loved books” (para. 5). If I
interviewed Khan, as I interviewed Arthur the poet, Thomas the poet, and
Elizabeth the fiction writer, using hermeneutic phenomenological methodology
(van Manen, 1990), perhaps a valid and reliable theme, or themes, describing
Khan’s teacher’s comments/influence/classroom events would emerge. If the
theme(s) proved to be essential (see Chapter Fourteen: Methodology), then
it/they would stand as part of or define all of the phenomenon of what lived
school experiences encouraged Khan to become a creative writer.
To
give the reader a clear sense of what I mean by essential themes that describe
the phenomenon, consider Arthur, Thomas, and Elizabeth’s themes as detailed
respectively in Chapters Sixteen, Seventeen, and Eighteen. These themes were
endorsed, through free imaginative variation, as essential to the phenomenon
for each participant. In a sense, essential themes relate to hermeneutic
phenomenology as core categories relate to grounded theory (Glaser &
Strauss, 1967; Glaser, 1992; Glaser, 1995; Strauss & Corbin, 1998 [I do no
refer here to the controversially diametric views of Glaser and Strauss]). Free
imaginative variation in a context of participant review, within the
methodological premises of hermeneutic phenomenology, helps establish essential
themes as valid and reliable; likewise, saturation (Glaser & Strauss, 1967;
Glaser, 1992; Glaser, 1995; Strauss & Corbin, 1998), within the
methodological premises of grounded theory, helps establish core or
significant-other categories as valid and reliable.
I
could, from a phenomenological point of view, speculate what one theme might be
for the aforementioned Khan with respect to my research question of Studies I,
II, and III: Khan’s eighth grade English teacher told her that she was
already a poet and that she should become a writer; that teacher’s belief in
her abilities encouraged Khan to become a creative writer. If I were to
meet with Khan, she, as a participant reviewer, could help me determine the
validity of that statement. Perhaps the theme is somewhat sound (or valid)
according to her experience, but needs some altering (in the spirit of
reliability). Participant review enables researcher and participant to
establish validity and reliability. Free imaginative variation enables
researcher and participant to establish a theme’s essentiality. Non-essential,
or incidental, themes are discarded as themes outside the phenomenon in
question.
Another writer, a poet by
the name of Barbara Juster Esbensen, found encouragement at school to become a
writer:
In the fall of 1939, ... Miss Eulalie
Beffel, at that time Barbara’s 10th-grade journalism, English, and creative
writing teacher, introduced her to the poets of the 1920s and 1930s. Esbensen
was surprised to discover that poems didn’t have to rhyme and that she was free
to put together incredible combinations of words. Miss Beffel took time to respond to
poems and other writing that Esbensen put on the teacher’s desk day after day.
Her little notes on the margins, especially “Barbara, you are a writer!”
encouraged and strengthened the young student’s progress. Miss Beffel, herself
a poet and former journalist, was the perfect mentor. (Rasmussen, 1994,
Beginnings as a Writer, para. 4-5)
In the name of speculation, here is a theme based on
this quote: One 10th-grade journalism, English, and creative
writing teacher encouraged Esbensen to become a poet by introducing her to
avante guarde poetry of the 1920s and 30s, and by praising her writing efforts
with comments such as, ‘Barbara, you are a writer!’” Esbensen passed away
in 1996; therefore, I cannot through interviewing her and through participant
review verify this theme’s validity; likewise, I cannot find precise wording
that truly reflects her experience, thereby establishing reliability; I cannot
through free imaginative variation determine the theme’s essentiality. The
rigorous, systematic nature of hermeneutic phenomenology requires participant
review and free imaginative variation, not to mention bracketing researcher bias
(see Chapter Twelve: Bracketing and Phenomenology; and van Manen, 1990). The
reader can understand, then, that good phenomenological research requires more
than researcher speculation.
Phenomenological
research, such as found in my Studies I, II, and III, must “ground” itself in
data, not speculation; grounded theory must do the same. Grounded theorists
look for confirmation or dis-confirmation of categories, especially a core
category (Glaser & Strauss, 1967; Glaser, 1992; Glaser, 1995; Strauss &
Corbin, 1998) that is “grounded” not in speculation/conceptualization but in
data from a variety of sources. The confirmation or dis-confirmation of a core
category that also comes from a variety of sources may suggest its modification
or rejection. I do not, however, criticize the use of speculation in some types
of research; for example, action research can be “a sort of [theoretical]
speculation, a form of playing with possibilities, of recognising and working
with uncertainty” (Winter, 1997, para. 3). Rather than criticize, I simply
assert phenomenology’s need to establish what is essential, not what is
speculative.
Given
this phenomenological need does not, however, mean I cannot speculate or
that I cannot consider what writers say, or what others say about them,
with respect to experiences in school that encouraged them to become writers.
As a literature review, this chapter refers to such experiences as one proof
that school can be a place that encourages some students to choose
creative writing as a vocation. This review, then, adds weight for my
conducting further methodologically identical hermeneutic phenomenological
studies based on my research question, and for my conducting a study that will
synthesize the findings of these studies into theoretical direction for
teachers (see Chapter Twenty-Three: Further Research—Covering Theory). In Chapter
Twenty-Three, I call the method for synthesizing the findings Theory from Phenomenology.
So many teachers, I have
discovered, have directly encouraged some of their students to become writers!
Carol Ann Duffy, a poet, was encouraged at St. Joseph’s convent school in
Stafford, UK, by a teacher named June Scriven, and by another teacher, James
Walker, at the Stafford High School for girls (Koymasky & Koymasky, 2005).
A nun encouraged French-Canadian Robert Cormier to become a writer while he
attended a Catholic school (The Chocolate War, 2005). He became a
novelist. So did Elmer Kelton of San Angelo, TX, encouraged to become a writer
by Paul Patterson, his teacher, who was a also a novelist (Novelist Still
Telling His Stories, 1999). Romaine Moreton, a performance poet from New South
Wales, was encouraged by several high school teachers (Romaine Moreton, 2002).
A seventh grade teacher encouraged Jeanne Wakatsuki Houston, who was raised in
the USA by her Japanese parents, to become a writer (From Farewell to Manzanar,
n.d.). Mr. Stolee, a grade nine English teacher, praised a poem by Regis
Auffray. Mr. Stolee told Regis he should become a writer (Auffray, n.d.). He
became a poet. Mary Anne Huddleston, who became a poet, says a high school
English teacher encouraged her to write poetry (Sister Mary Anne, 2005).
One commonality in the
previous paragraph: with regard to Duffy, Cormier, Kelton, Moreton, Houston,
Aufrray, and Huddleston, each person’s becoming a writer is apparently a
result, at least to some degree, of some sort of encouragement that he or she
received from one or more teachers. The life story of each writer in the
following list reflects that same commonality:
1. Fred D’Agular, poet (Hyppolite,
2004)
2. Charles Griffith, poet (Charles Griffith,
2003)
3. Tracy Wilson, playwright (Walker, 2004)
4. Jesse Stuart, novelist, short story writer,
poet (Jesse Stuart, n.d.)
5. Dave Roskos, poet (How it all Started, 2001)
6. Elizabeth Jennings, poet (Elizabeth Jennings,
n.d.)
7. Kobayashi Yataro, haiku writer (Cool
Melons, 2005)
8. Priscilla Lee, poet (Travis-Murphree, 2000)
9. Nan Witcomb, poet (Australian Poet, 1999)
10. Arthur Rimbaud, poet (Deese, 1999)
11. Sandra Cisneros, poet (Talent Development,
n.d.)
12. Journey Light, poet (Journey Light, n.d.)
13. Dennis Kim, spoken word poet, (Banerjee, 2001)
14. Laurence Yep, novelist (Laurence Yep, n.d.)
15. Walter Satterthwait, novelist (Heller,
1998)
16. George Lamming, novelist (George Lamming, 2002)
17. Ron Terpening, novelist (My Life as a Writer,
n.d.)
18. James Welch, novelist (Mclellan, 2003)
19. Robert J. Sawyer, short story writer, novelist
(King, 1993)
20. Terry
Bisson, short story writer, novelist (Gevers, 2004)
The question, for me: In what ways did
teacher-student interaction encourage these people as students to become
creative writers later in life? To encourage means “to inspire with courage and
hope” (Encourage, 1994, p. 251). But, again, in what concrete sense? One
concrete sense could be a set of themes that emerge from (Bennet, 1998)
interviews with the 20 writers listed above—interviews phenomenologically
driven by my research question, “What, if any, lived school experiences
encouraged [each participant] to become a creative writer?”
So
many possible themes could exist. Rita Dove, poet, says in an interview:
I loved to write when I
was a child. I wrote, but I always thought it was something that you did as a
child, then you put away childish things. I thought it was something I would do
for fun. I didn’t know writers could be real live people, because I never knew
any writers.
The first inkling that
maybe it was a possible thing happened in my last year of high school. I had a
high school teacher who took me to a book-signing by an author, John Ciardi,
and that’s when I saw my first live author.
Here was a living,
breathing, walking, joking person, who wrote books. And for me, it was that I
loved to read but I always thought that the dream was too far away. The person
who had written the book was a god, it wasn’t a person. To have someone actually
in the same room with me, talking, and you realize he gets up and walks his dog
the same as everybody else, was a way of saying, “It is possible. You can
really walk through that door too.” That was the important thing. (Rita Dove,
1994, para. 3-6)
A possible theme: In grade 12, a teacher took Rita
Dove to see a book signing by an established writer (John Ciardi), and that
experience taught her that writers are real people like herself, and that if
John Ciardi could be a writer, then she could be one too. That experience
encouraged her to become a poet.
The truth, of course, of
how valid and reliable this theme is would require systematic rigor in the context
of my chosen qualitative methodology. Bracketing, peer debriefing (McMillan
& Schumacher, 1997; and State of the Art, 1998), participant review, free
imaginative variation, objectivity, which refers to the researcher’s remaining
true to the research question (van Manen, 1990) and the whole interview guide,
and subjectivity, which refers to him or her remaining true to the meaning in
the data (1990), must take their places in the research.
Frances
Dowell, novelist and poet, also relates in an interview experiences that could
be turned into a theme. He says, “I had a wonderful English teacher in sixth
grade, Mr. Lee, and another one in eighth grade, Mr. Pierce, who praised my
writing and gave me confidence as a writer” (Reichard, 2004, Section 2: Interview).
With regard to other experiences that could be turned into a theme, consider
what Spencer Reece, a poet, interviewed in The New Yorker, says,
I had an amazing English teacher, and
I’ve been calling her recently; we’re still friends. She introduced me to
Chaucer. I said, “Isn’t it funny that after all these years this should come
back in such a specific and important way?” And I have her to thank for that.
Writing poetry, I guess, goes back to when I was seventeen or so….I did love
Chaucer in prep school. I also loved Sylvia Plath’s “Ariel” and J. D. Salinger
and F. Scott Fitzgerald and Shakespeare. Those were the first people. (Quinn,
2003)
Is there a theme here? If so, does it relate to Arthur’s
Themes One (events in school that promoted the joy and wonder of silent reading
of poetry and fiction) and Two (events that promoted the exhilarating freedom
of choice of reading material [see Chapter Sixteen: Conclusions—Arthur’s
Themes])? Without my interviewing Reece, how can I say for sure? How can I step
beyond speculation to a more desirable foundation of validity and reliability?
Speculative themes stand as
curiosities (my previous comments about speculative theory and action research,
however, still stand). During my empirical, rigorous, systematic research, I
could not indulge myself by entertaining curiosities, just as I could not
indulge myself by allowing my biases to turn interviews into curiosities. From
a research point of view, interviews must be free of interviewer bias if the
participant’s comments are going to be useful. If I or my peer reviewer found I
had asked a biased question or made a biased comment in any interview I had
conducted with a participant (see Chapter Twelve: Bracketing and
Phenomenology), then all his or her comments related to that bias would have
been deleted from the data, in the name of protecting internal validity.
Therefore, the kind of themes I try to
formulate in my studies, bolstered by respectable degrees of validity and
reliability (acceptable degrees of internal validity), should arm teachers with
considerable trustworthy, credible, direction about how to interact with
students and what sorts of activities to create in the hopes of encouraging
some of them to grow up to become creative writers. If certain lived school
experiences encouraged Arthur, Thomas, and Elizabeth, then the same experiences
may encourage others, even though each of the three is, of course, uniquely
individual (Zunker, 1998). Rather than speak in terms of generalization
(McMillan & Schumacher, 1997), then, I speak in terms of extrapolation
(1997), or, if you prefer, an extension of findings (1997). These
extrapolations or extensions would reflect the nature of encouragement as found
in my phenomenological themes. In a more general sense, I discuss the nature of
encouragement in the next chapter.
Chapter Nine: The Nature
of Encouragement
I
could speculate from a conceptual point of view, as opposed to my conducting
phenomenological research that “allows” themes to emerge from data, about the
nature of encouragement. I could attempt to answer the question: Encouragement
is what? I could attempt to avoid sinking into a philosophical quagmire filled
with abstraction (see Chapter Five: Phenomenology—the Abstract and the
Concrete). The reader will find, in Chapters Sixteen, Seventeen, and Eighteen,
that Arthur, Thomas, and Elizabeth concretely answer that question in specific
ways through their themes. But, conceptually, what is the answer? I could refer
to the literature. Lance (n.d.) says:
Merriam-Webster’s Collegiate
Dictionary (1993) defines “encourage” as “to inspire with courage, spirit or
hope; to spur on” (p. 381). Every day teachers at all levels encourage their
students with words of praise, hope, direction, and courage. They communicate
to students belief in the students’ abilities and progress. (Chapter One: An
Introduction to Encouragement, para. 1)
This does not, however, define what encouragement is.
At least, not really.
Lance
(n.d.) also says:
Carl Rogers (1961) promotes this
concept of unconditional positive regard. He states, “It is an atmosphere which
simply demonstrates ‘I care’: not ‘I care for you if you behave thus and so’”
(p. 283). The focus is on the welfare of the student. It is an approach which
recognizes the student as an individual, as a “separate person” with his or her
own feelings and experiences. (Chapter One: An Introduction to Encouragement,
para. 3)
Lance (n.d.), in his discussion about encouragement,
adds: 1) “Teachers and leaders encourage students by providing opportunities
for individual growth” (para. 4); 2) “Educators must value their students. They
must know them, care about them, and communicate with them” (para. 5); and, 3) “The
teacher believes in the fundamental and inherent worth of the student” (Chapter
Two: Fundamental Principles of Encouragement, Strategies for Individuality,
para. 2).
Do
the quotes in the two previous paragraphs help us define what encouragement is?
Could they mislead a person sincere about his or her desire to encourage
students but who tries to “not according to accurate knowledge” (New World
Translation, Romans 10:2)? For example, could a person, a teacher, get the
sense from the comment that “every day teachers at all levels encourage their
students with words of praise” that praise in general encourages students?
Praise and Encouragement
Praise
may in some instances encourage, yet not in others (see, e.g., Teacher as a
Researcher, n.d.). Lance (n.d.) says that Nathanial Branden, in his 1994 book
entitled The Six Pillars of Self-Esteem, warns us with regard to praise
and encouragement:
Praise used
inappropriately is as damaging as praise used not at all. There are two
fundamental mistakes people often make in utilizing praise. The first is that
people often use a blanket approach. They praise everything another individual
does, regardless of its merit or difficulty. This results in a feeling of
invisibility and decreases the value of praise. The second is that many people
attach judgment to their praise. For instance, an instructor may say “keep up
the good work,” when a student paints a beautiful picture. However, this can
create in the artist a sense of anxiety, dependence and ... defensiveness.
Instead, the instructor should be specific in his or her praise. For instance,
the teacher may instead say, “The detail in this painting is wonderful. It is
obvious you put much of yourself into it. I enjoyed it immensely.” The student
knows then that the praise is specific and genuine, because it can be
immediately traced to his or her work. (Brandon, quoted in Lance, n.d., Chapter
Four: Learning and Encouragement, The Individual Person: Self-Esteem, para. 4)
My experience as a teacher tells me that is good
advice. Now, taking that advice one step further: Even well-meaning staff who
praise students through award days, honour rolls, and principal rolls, may find
their praise discourages rather than encourages.
Awards Days,
Principal’s Roll, And Honour Roll
Alfie Kohn, in Beyond Discipline:
From Compliance to Community, says:
When
administrators proudly tell me how caring their teachers are, I am apt to
reply, “That’s great. But
do you have awards assemblies?” If things have been set up so that ... the
school sets children against each other in a race for artificially scarce
recognition [praise], then nice teachers can accomplish only so much. (1996,
pp. 105-106).
If students are presented with
awards, a form of praise, for achievement, based on genetically-endowed gifts
they possess to a greater degree than other students, “then nice
teachers can accomplish only so much.”
A sperm unites with an egg, each with its own ladle of
DNA, to create an individual with, say, a genetically-endowed gift in art,
creative writing, or mathematics. The zygote grows into a student. Should a
teacher praise a student by giving him or her an award for inheriting such a
genetic force? If a teacher does, won’t this award, given before the
watchful eyes of other students, for special recognition divide a class into
Those With versus Those Without? Could the award discourage Those Without?
Could the award teach Those With that their worth as human beings depends on
the awards or praise others in authority deem they are worthy of receiving? Is
such teaching encouraging?
Add to the genetic forces in children’s circumstances.
One child has a private, Pentium-equipped study area at home, whereas another
shares a mouldy bedroom (study centre) with four screaming siblings and
urine-stained mattresses. Should a teacher reward or praise the child with the “good” genes and the
right circumstances through Principal’s Roll recognition? Again, would that
praise discourage Those Without, even discouraging Those With by teaching them
that praise and worth come synonymously and only “come” if an
authority figure says that worth = praise is warranted? In the spirit of
conjecture, you be the judge, but first consider more of Kohn:
Here’s a[n] ... exercise
worth trying out at a faculty meeting:…ask everyone to think of the most
effective ways by which a community can be destroyed [or people can be
discouraged]….Don’t
be surprised if participants nominate competition [praise through recognition
is implied herein] as the number one community destroyer [or force for
discouragement]—not only awards assemblies but spelling bees, charts
that rank students against each other [Those With the praise versus Those
Without], grading on a curve, and other things that teach each person to regard
everyone else as obstacles to his or her own success. (1996, p. 106; see, also,
Lewis, 2003)
John Taylor Gatto (1992), in his Dumbing us Down: The
Hidden Curriculum of Compulsory Schooling, speaks similarly:
If ... [obtaining]
an A average is accounted the central purpose of adolescent life [rather than
acquiring “community” (humanistic)
values of friendship, loyalty, integrity, compassion, and empathy]—the
requirements for which take most of the time and attention of the aspirant—and the worth
of the individual is reckoned by victory or defeat in this abstract pursuit,
then a social machine [our traditional system of scholastic achievement (again,
praise through recognition is implied)] has been constructed which, by
attaching purpose and meaning to essentially meaningless and fantastic
behaviour, will certainly dehumanize [and discourage many] students. (1992, p.
62)
Is the word “dehumanize” too strong?
Not if we realise that our advertising this traditional system of scholastic
achievement, or concept of praise, especially at high-profile awards days,
reinforces that a student’s worth stands directly proportional to the merit
someone else (a teacher) bestows on him or her. Self-worth (W) = Merit Bestowed
(M). W = M. Not even “nice teachers” who work
hard to make students feel good about themselves because of their humanistic
qualities can completely erase this equation from those students’ concepts of
self-esteem or from their psyches. No wonder Gatto calls traditional grading a
system of “one-upmanship” (1992, p.
70).
This machinelike system divides students just as the
Rocky Mountains divides southern British Columbia from southern Alberta.
Consider some divisions: Principal’s Roll, Honour Roll, nothing (i.e.,
no praise). First, second, third, nothing (i.e., no praise). I remember
teaching grade two class in 1978. Sports Day had ended, and although some
chests boasted many ribbons (another form of praise), others had none or very
few. The class had returned to my classroom before they could leave for the
day. Those with few or no ribbons (about seven students, I recall) cried. I
still feel sick as I remember that day, as I visualise those sad faces.
I asked the unhappy seven, “Do your
parents love you because of who you are, or because of how many ribbons you
have?”
They didn’t
seem to know the answer. I told them, “Your parents love you because of who
you are, not because of how many ribbons you have.” I’m not sure
they believed me. I wonder, too, if the children with ribbons were left with
the sense that their ribbons were a direct reflection of their personal worth
in the eyes of the Sports Day judges.
If you don’t believe
that competition, with its praise for those who shine (for Those With),
divides, or, as Gatto says, that such competition “dehumanize[s]” (1992, p.
62), then ask yourselves—honestly—how students who receive no awards
(Those Without) on awards day feel, and ask yourselves—honestly—if Those With
the praise, the awards, do not feel that in some ways or in many ways their
personal worth has been judged? If you’re the principal of a school staff
and you don’t
believe that praise based on competition divides, at the next staff meeting
give out a Principal’s Roll award (praise) for the “top” teacher and
give out an Honour Roll award (further praise) for the next-best teacher. Then
ask Those Without to tell you how they feel. You might want to wear armour
before you ask. Ask Those With if they feel personally judged. If they say no,
will you believe them? If you’re a husband eating lasagne that your loving wife
has prepared for you, you probably shouldn’t tell her that it’s not a good
as Aunt Martha’s,
unless, of course, you firmly believe that praise and even criticism based on
competition unites people.
First Nations (in North America) have long understood
that praise based on competition divides and dehumanises.
Solidarity
and loyalty to the group is likely to be contradicted by learning practices
which encourage competition [along with its praise for Those With and its lack
of praise for Those Without] rather than cooperation. Any demonstration of
individual superiority is avoided because it is seen as demonstrating the
inferiority of others. A competitive classroom atmosphere therefore produces
conflict in [many] First Nations students who are disposed to learn
cooperatively in groups rather than competitively as individuals. (Maina, 1997,
p. 304).
Traditional First Nations don’t like to
divide people into Those With versus Those Without. Neither do I, actually.
In this
discussion, basically conceptual (I don’t claim it is
based on, or grounded in, data as are my Studies I, II, and III), I have explored,
in part, the possible adverse effects of some forms of praise along the theme
of sometimes those praised feel personally judged in terms of their worth as
human beings and those not praised don’t feel good
about themselves. Praise, given by well-meaning adults to
children, may actually discourage rather than encourage. I am brought back,
logically, then, to that question I already asked:
What is
Encouragement?
Isn’t encouragement that which encourages? I could
further conceptualise, arguing that encouragement differs from motivation. For example, if
to encourage means “to inspire with courage and hope” (Encourage, 1994, p.
251), and to motivate means “to provide with a motive” or to “impel” (Motivate,
1994, p. 480), then doesn’t that imply that often encouragement refers more to
personal attention than motivation. Don’t people often inspire people,
whereas stimuli often impel them?
A
phenomenological article (see Chapter Five: Phenomenology—the Abstract and the
Concrete) could evaluate this previous paragraph in light of the themes of
Studies I, II, and III. For example, Arthur, the reader will discover (see
Chapter Sixteen: Conclusions—Arthur’s Themes), found teachers as sources of
encouragement with respect to his Themes Two, Four, Five, Six, Seven, and
Eight. Thomas (see Chapter Seventeen: Conclusions—Thomas’ Theme) found one
teacher a paramount a source of encouragement. Elizabeth (see Chapter Eighteen:
Conclusions—Elizabeth’s Themes) found teachers as sources of encouragement with
respect to her Themes One, Two, and Three. That amounts to 10/14 = 71% of
themes relate directly to people as sources of encouragement. Does that
surprise you? Probably not.
I
could consider encouragement theory. Evans (2005) says:
Encouragement is founded in Third Force
Psychology and Adlerian principles, a hopeful, phenomenological, humanistic,
perceptual, and purposive psychology (Evans, 1989; Evans, 1997; Meredith &
Evans, 1990). Adlerian psychology has been demonstrating and using the
principles and practices of encouragement for more than 55 years.
According to Adlerian psychology, encouragement is the process of developing a
child’s inner resources and providing courage to make positive choices. (What
is Encouragement, para. 3)
I could also consider motivation theory. For example:
cognitive theories such as Atkinson’s expectancy x value theory; Rotter’s locus
of control theory; Weiner’s attribution theory (Stipek, 1998); extrinsic and
intrinsic motivation theory (1998); and Eccles’ expectancy x value theory
(1998). I could, from the literature, compare and contrast encouragement and
motivation theory. Conceptualizing for all my grey matter is worth, I could
assemble an answer to the question,
What is encouragement?
But
such a process betrays the grounded (interview) data research approach of my
hermeneutic phenomenological studies (Glaser, 1992; Glaser, 1995; Glaser &
Strauss, 1967; and van Manen, 1990), which define encouragement from the point
of view of the participants (Bennet, 1998) rather than from my conceptual—and
no doubt biased—logistics. Perhaps you have noticed some of my biases in this
chapter. The valid and reliable themes of Studies I, II, and III will prepare
me to use my Theory From Phenomenology (see Chapter Twenty-Three: Further
Research—Covering Theory) methodology to synthesize the grounded data of my
studies into a theory that teachers can use to encourage some students to
become creative writers. A further study (see Chapter Twenty-Four: Further
Research—Survey Research) could survey a sample of established writers about
experiences, if any exist, that encouraged them to become creative writers.
Themes that describe those experiences may modify or extend the theory (Glaser,
1992; Glaser, 1995; and Glaser & Strauss, 1967).
Although
Studies I, II, and III don’t provide generalizations, partly due to purposive
sampling (Patton, 1987; see, e.g., Arnold & Ketter, n.d.) (note, too, the
nonrandom sampling for the survey I propose in Chapter Twenty-Four will
eliminate the future possibility of my forming generalizations), nevertheless,
my series of studies (Stebbins, 1995) presently provide a foundation of
information in terms of what experiences (lived experiences) in elementary and
high school encouraged the participants to become creative writers. My research
series, termed “concatenated exploration” (p. 21), consists of a “set of field
studies that are linked together [like] a chain leading to…inductively
generated theory” (p. 21) that will be based on that foundation.
That foundation of information, by
the way, does not offer “generalizability” (McMillan & Schumacher, 1997, p.
18) for another reason. Stated succinctly, in each study the theme or themes do
not stand as a tool or tools “to predict” (p. 18) because of the sample size of
n = 1 (Patton, 1987). In terms of “population external validity” (McMillan
& Schumacher, 1997, p. 190), each study can not “be generalized ... to
other people who have the same, or at least similar, characteristics” (p. 190)
as its respective participant because the “psychological,
sociological, educational, physical, economic” (Zunker, 1998, p. 7) and
spiritual sides
of each participant are unique. That said, the themes of Studies I, II, and III
can nevertheless be extrapolated, which I will discuss shortly.
For now, let me says that the
trustworthiness (Guba & Lincoln, 1982) or validity (McMillan &
Schumacher, 1997) of the studies ranks high due to many thorough participant
review sessions, peer debriefing, and my bracketing in possibilities and bias
(Chapter Twelve: Bracketing and Phenomenology). Therefore, the themes of
Studies I, II, and III define a valid starting place. That said, educators
could reason, in view of “the accuracy” (McMillan & Schumacher, 1997, p.
584) of the studies’ themes, that certain events in school might encourage some
students to become creative writers. As I said already, if certain lived school
experiences encouraged Arthur, Thomas, and Elizabeth, then the same experiences
may encourage others.
That
is not a generalization, rather it serves as direction for extrapolations
already referred to, which “extend known experience ... to arrive at a
useful [mode of practise]” (McMillan & Schumacher, 1997, p. 7). Some
researchers prefer the term extension of findings over extrapolation. An “extension
of findings…enables [teachers] to understand [or create] similar situations
[classroom activities]” (p. 411). These activities would stand on “logical ... [but]
not statistical ... extensions” (p. 412).
A Last Word on Encouragement
My
phenomenological studies define through data—grounded (i.e., interview)
data—rather than through conceptualizations—such as if x, then y and related
reasonings—the answer to the question what encourages some people to become
writers? Teachers, in the business of teaching, are likewise, or should
likewise be, in the business of encouraging. No doubt teachers or a teacher
encouraged you at one time. Perhaps you “appreciate[d] [an encouraging] word of
appreciation or an [encouraging] expression that [gave you] hope” (Strength
Imparted Through Encouragement, 1963, p. 424). Perhaps you agree that “timely
encouragement can fortify ... and comfort” (Have You Encouraged Anyone Lately,
1995, p. 21).
You may even agree that “encouragement
is founded on love” (Giving Encouragement to Others, 1963, p. 430). I know that
Thomas (Study II; see Chapter Seventeen: Conclusions—Thomas’ Theme) would agree
with that comment, perhaps even with encouragement “imparts confidence”
(Gaining Strength by Mutual Encouragement, 1964, p. 414). Do you feel as I do,
that encouragement is a gem (Comfort and Encouragement—Gems of Many Facets,
1996)? I consider the themes from my studies as gems, and I suspect the
participants views their theme(s) similarly. Do you also, like me, feel that if
we are to encourage students to become writers, or encourage students in other
ways, then we need to “give serious thought to our way of dealing with [them]”
(Would You Extinguish a Smoldering Wick?, 1995, p. 22).
My studies should provide direction,
or substance, for “serious thought” about how to encourage students. I hope the
narrative style of reporting the phenomenological studies provides for readers
a sense of immediacy that they would find while reading a good story. I refer
to that narrative style, and my research question, in the next chapter.
Chapter Ten: Narrative
Style and the Research Question
That narrative, or narrative river,
as found in the conclusions for Studies I, II, and III (see Chapters Sixteen,
Seventeen, and Eighteen), does not travel between the banks of a foreshadowed
problem that forks into the specific, a narrower trough—a condensed problem
statement. Many qualitative researchers “begin with foreshadowed problems ... ,
anticipated research problems that will be reformulated during data collection”
(McMillan & Schumacher, 1997, p. 102; see also, e.g., Latterell, n.d.; and
Tobin, 2003). Some call foreshadowed problems general goals (see, e.g.,
Interactive Lecture, n.d). Reformulated research problems may become a
condensed problem statement that “focuses the entire report” (McMillan &
Schumacher, 1997, p. 103). Hermeneutic phenomenology, however, allows for no
forks in the narrative river. That means that I did not ask other valid
research questions such as “Were there any lived school experiences that
discouraged you from taking up creative writing later in life?” My research
question helped me focus on a concept, or phenomenon, not multiple ones.
McMillan
and Schumacher (1997) tell us that phenomenology, given birth to by Husserl
(van Manen, 1990), “provides an understanding of a concept from the
participants’ views of their social realities” (p. 395). I wished to study “a
concept,” the possibility that lived school experiences had encouraged
individuals to take up creative writing later in life. The reader likely
readily sees that “phenomenological questions are meaning questions.
They ask for the meaning and significance of certain [italics added]
phenomena” (van Manen, 1990, p. 23). The research question became my study’s
foundation in the sense that I selected “appropriate research methods,
techniques, and procedures for a particular problem or question” (p. 30). My
selections helped protect me from “temptations to get side-tracked or to wander
aimlessly and indulge in wishy-washy speculations, to settle for preconceived
opinions and conceptions, to become enchanted with narcissistic reflections or
self-indulgent preoccupations” (van Manen, 1990, p. 33).
My goal to get to the essence of the
research question became a matter of my methodological security. I had to stand
“constantly mindful of [the] original question and thus to be steadfastly
oriented to the lived experience[s]” (van Manen, 1990, p. 42) of the
participants. Methodology and the research question became, in a sense, congruent.
In other words, “it is methodologically important to keep one’s fundamental
research question foremost in mind” (p. 166 [emphasis added]).
Sometimes,
the topic of research “formulates a problem” (McIntyre, n.d., Topic and
Problematic, para. 1) that merits investigation, and that problem is “turned
into a question” (Gerbner, n.d., para. 1); however, the exploratory nature
(McMillan & Schumacher, 1997) of my studies did not require the existence
of a problem. In terms of hermeneutic phenomenology, the studies explored and
interpreted “how things appear[ed]” (van Manen, 1990, p. 180). I explored, “became
familiar with[,] the basic facts [(participants’ lived school experiences)]”
(Neuman, 2006, p. 32), leading to “a detailed, highly accurate picture [a thematic
picture]” (p. 32). The studies took me
on an intellectual journey from exploration to description, a common journey
for researchers (2006). The very nature of this kind of phenomenology created
suspense, or wonder, for me. I hope it creates the same for the reader:
In his or her phenomenological
description the researcher/writer must “pull” the reader into the question in
such a way that the reader cannot help but wonder about the nature of the
phenomenon ... .One might say that a phenomenological questioning teaches the
reader to wonder, to question deeply the very thing that is being questioned by
the question. (van Manen, 1990, p. 44)
This phenomenological questioning describes “the more
subjectivist ... approach” (Cohen & Manion, 1994, p. 7), from which the
researcher sees “the social world as being of a much softer, personal and
humanly-created kind” (p, 7), whereas traditional social science describes “an
objectivist ... approach” (p. 7), from which the researcher sees “the social
world ... as being hard, real and external to the individual” (p. 7). Davis
(1997b) explains the difference this way: “Psychological research based on a
natural science [objectivist/positivist] model focuses more on behavior while
human science focuses more on [subjectivist/personal] experience” (para. 1).
As a
teacher of creative writing, I have tended to see the world through a
subjectivist lens. In view of a review of the literature on hermeneutic
phenomenology that has turned up nothing about creative writing, I believe that
interviewing participants, a subjectivist approach, has enabled me to establish
first-hand a body of useful direction for teachers. That direction relates to
activities in school that may encourage some students to become poets and
fiction writers. I discuss that direction and pedagogical implications in my
recommendations (see Chapters Nineteen, Twenty, and Twenty-One), but first I
wish to report my review of literature that establishes traditional direction
for students and teachers of creative writing.
Chapter Eleven: Literature
Related to the Teaching of Creative Writing
The
British Columbia Ministry of Education (hereafter, The Ministry) deems the
teaching of creative writing a relevant topic to which it refers repeatedly,
either implicitly or explicitly, in three of its Language Arts curriculum
guides (1996a, 1996b, 1996c). For example, The Ministry (1996a) implies
relevance when it states, “It is expected that [kindergarten and grade one]
students will enhance the precision, clarity, and artistry of their
communications by using processes that professional authors ... use to appraise
and improve their communications” (p. 24), and The Ministry (1996b) explicates
relevance when, for grade nine students, it states “students will ... create a
variety of personal [and] literary ... communications, including poems [and]
stories” (p. 48).
With implicit and explicit ministry
directives in mind, publishers of Language Arts programs, motivated by profit
to sell their texts, produce teachers’ handbooks. Often publishers display
their wares at teachers’ district-wide professional development days.
Charismatic salesmen/women, often quick to relate that they too were
once teachers, set up colourful displays of texts for sale, behind which they
convincingly orate to wide-eyed teachers and administrators about the great
worth of their curriculum handbooks.
In Study I, I reviewed seven Language
Arts curriculum handbooks, endorsed by a majority of elementary school teachers
and administrators in the district in which I work, that cover Language Arts
programs from grades one to seven (Best, et al., 1998; Bogusat, et al., 1999;
Booth, Booth, Phenix, & Swartz, 1991; Jeroski & Dockendorf, 2000;
Sterling & Toutant, 1999; Tuinman, Neuman, & Rich, 1988; Tuinman, Neuman,
& Rich, 1989). All reflect ministry directives. For example, the Nelson
Language Arts: Teacher’s Guide: Levels B and C, for grade one, directs
teachers to help student writers to become “familiar with a wide variety of
genres and forms” (Sterling & Toutant, 1999, p. 29), which brings to mind
The Ministry’s (1996b) requirement that “students will ... create a variety of
personal [and] literary ... communications, including poems [and] stories”
(p. 48). The Nelson Language Arts: Teacher’s Guide: 6, for grade
six, directs teachers to help student poets to focus attention on their “thoughts,
feelings, ideas, and personal experiences” (Best, et al., 1998, p. 33), which
reminds me of statements such as students need to “respond to ideas, feelings
and knowledge ... creatively” (The Ministry, 1996a, 1996b, 1996c, p. 5). I
wondered, before starting each study, if each respective participant would
describe lived school experiences that relate to this information.
Before my starting the first Study I
interview, I reviewed a variety of Web sites, how-to writing books, and other
sources that contain a wealth of direction for students and teachers of
creative writing (see Chapter Twelve: Bracketing and Phenomenology), but rather
than my simply synthesizing for the reader the information from these sources
into a statement (e.g., traditionally, creative writing stands as a relevant
topic in the world of Language Arts, and much direction exits in the
literature for creative writing students and teachers), I want to offer the
reader possibilities about what school experiences might encourage
individuals to take up creative writing. For example, did Arthur, Thomas, and
Elizabeth describe lived school experiences that relate to the wealth of
information I reviewed?
This
type of presentation is not unusual in hermeneutic phenomenological studies. As
pointed out in the previous chapter, phenomenological questioning should teach “the
reader to wonder, to question ... the [research] question” (van Manen, 1990, p.
44). Van Manen adds, “sometimes this involves avoiding posing the question
outright because such straightforward approach would [could] lead the reader to
... underestimate its probing nature” (p. 44). I posed the question outright
(see Chapter One: An Overview), but I encourage the reader not to “underestimate
its probing nature” by wondering about related questions such as this one: Do
writing activities in school that motivate students to write creatively
encourage some to pursue creative writing?
In
the tradition of hermeneutic phenomenology, my discussion tries to prompt the
reader to wonder, then, about possibilities. To prompt the reader, however,
implies that I prompt myself. Could such prompting bias a researcher, such as
myself, colouring his interview questions, analyses, and interpretations?
Readers familiar with qualitative research know the answer: Yes! How do
researchers protect the integrity, the internal validity, the credibility, the
trustworthiness (State of the Art, 1998; Lincoln & Guba, 1985; see, also,
Siegle, n.d.b) of their research? One element of this protection: bracketing. I
discuss this element in the next chapter.
Chapter Twelve: Bracketing
and Phenomenology (2003a)
People
being what we are, we may find our hearts and minds great farms for cultivating
how we think something might be, or, on particularly cloudless days, how we
think something should be. If I translate cloudless days into days—or
weeks, or even months—the researcher feels outrightly or inadvertantly cocky,
then he or she could drive the study’s conclusions rather than the
research question driving the research design (see Chapter Twenty-Three:
Further Research—Covering Theory) driving a systematic, bias-reducing
methodology driving the conclusions (Barnett, 2002). Herein lies the
conscientious researcher’s worry: “In every experiment [or program of
qualitative research], there is a possibility that an investigator’s bias may,
in some way, skew the data” (Pilgrim, 1984, para. 12). In a nutshell, then, a
foundation of bias can lead to an invalid study with faulty conclusions
(Scientists, 1994); likewise, sand makes a poor foundation for a building (New
World Translation, Matthew 7:26).
If one side of a coin reads biased
research and refers to problems of internal validity troubles, then the other
side that reads unbiased research may have its own troubles too. For example,
if some impetuous researchers/critics discredit unbiased research, erroneously
charging it with non-valid results (see, e.g., Pilgrim, 1984) due to perceived
but non-existent bias, then the discredited researcher may find his or her life’s
work overlooked, even maligned and shelved in Neverland. The wise researcher
does what he or she can to address internal validity to such a degree that bias
and other confounding variables do not mess up his or her research. In such a
circumstance, “loud” critics become gainsayers—albeit gainsayers who may harm
the reputation of a good researcher.
Actual
and perceived bias, then, concerns me. Aptekar (1992), no doubt, would relate
to my concern. He questions the validity of his own ethnographic study about
Colombian street children. Why? He regrets that in that study he hadn’t
considered his own childhood experiences and how they might have biased how he
saw the children he studied, especially in view of the emotional trauma he, at
six, and his mother had suffered when his father had died of cancer. Given that
statement, his addressing how he viewed the independence, vulnerability,
strengths, and weaknesses of the street children would have added weight, or,
in strictly qualitative language, trustworthiness (Guba & Lincoln, 1982),
to his study’s validity,
Looking those views, or (actual) biases, in the eye, so
to speak, addresses objectivity, helping the researcher focus on the interview
guide’s questions and the experiences of the participants, rather than on his
own bias-generating experiences or, for that matter, conjectures. Researchers
call this bracketing (see Chapter Thirteen: Tying up My Own Biases).
Mathematicians keep symbols, numbers, and operations within brackets;
researchers attempt to keep biases inside brackets in the mind, thereby
increasing the possibility for objectivity. Barritt (1992) refers to the
objectivity of historians, which helps them write neutral histories, but are
those histories really neutral if the writers of those texts have not
addressed—bracketed—their biases with regard to peoples, cultures, causes and
effects, and all the –isms, -ologies, -archies, and -cracies that inhabit their
minds? Likewise, qualitative researchers need a process through which they too
acquire and maintain objectivity.
Bracketing exists as such a process, through
which I explicitly listed my biases in my phenomenological studies (see Chapter
Thirteen: Tying up My Own Biases), a practice that other researchers do not
necessarily engage (see, e.g., Barritt, Beekman, Bleeker, & Mulderij,
1983). My motive: concreteness and validity. Our biases in the public domain
might at times embarrass us, but they make us, as researchers, real people,
concrete individuals, with flesh-and-blood points of view, albeit points of
view we need to bracket by placing them mentally in a corner to mind their own
business. Wouldn’t you find explicit descriptions of bracketing, revealing the
researcher’s concentrated attempts to “see” his or her own biases (van Manen,
2000e, 2000i, and 2000n), far more faith inspiring, in the name of validity,
than a blanket, implicit statement such as “the researcher bracketed his
biases”? Do you find that too impersonal and too general? I know I do.
I
helped my biases mind their own business (Brook, 2005; Byrne, n.d.; and van
Manen, 1990). Many experiences in school had encouraged me to become a creative
writer. These experiences define highlights in my education (see Chapter
Thirteen: Tying up My Own Biases), but, simply put, they could, during an
interview, influence me to ask biased questions. Through my use of free
imaginative variation (see Chapter Fourteen: Methodology), I expressed those
experiences in each of my three studies in terms of one essential, broad theme
(see Chapter Thirteen: Tying up My Own Biases). That said, my peer debriefers3
(McMillan & Schumacher, 1997) for the studies looked for my biases in my
interview questions, in my analyses, and in my interpretations that spoke of me
rather than of Arthur, Thomas, and Elizabeth.
Bracketing bias helps prevent biased
questions or probes from leaving the researcher’s lips. Bracketing helps a
researcher avoid making assumptions. Assumptions may simply not reflect
reality; for example, some teachers disallow students to chew gum in class,
based on the premise, the bias, that gum chewing distracts students from their
work, and yet recent research suggests that gum chewing may actually enhance
students’ ability to focus on their work (Steffenhagen, 2004).
With
regard to bracketing, however, I did not stop there. I went much further. If
bracketing is a process for “suspending one’s various beliefs” (van Manen,
1990, p. 175) or biases, then bracketing in possibilities, a term I
coined, is a process that considers possible participant responses. My
readings brought to my mind possibilities—experiences that I wondered might
have encouraged the participants. I referred to some of these possibilities (i.e.,
“I wonder if…” sorts of statements) in Chapter Eleven: Literature Related to
the Teaching of Creative Writing. The great length of references later in this
chapter testifies to the great volume of literature that could have biased my
interview questions and comments, as well as my analyses and interpretations.
Further
still, bracketing in possibilities could also include thoughts the researcher
comes up with through conversations with colleagues, through deductive,
inductive, and analogy-like reasoning (Kline, 1967), through epiphanies, and
through lateral-thinking ecstasy (Lukiv, 2000; 2001a, Chapter Seventeen;
or 2001c, Chapter Seven). Perhaps new, although, in the long run, not
necessarily ingenious, thoughts have smacked you in the psyche while you have
spent a little time on the pot, or while you have sat bolt upright in bed at
2:00 a.m., saying “Aha!” Explicitly listing those thoughts—that relate to the
research question—could help a researcher bracket them.
More
about possibilities: In the previous chapter, I referred to creative writing
Web sites, which contain essentially the same sorts of activities as do print
materials (see, e.g., About Teens, n.d.; Horner & Khan, n.d.; Love,
n.d.a; and Shiney & Shiney, n.d.). In my experience, many teachers look to
the myriad number of excellent Web site activities for teaching creative
writing. With regard to bracketing in possibilities, before I began each of my
three studies, I respectively wondered if Arthur, Thomas, or Elizabeth would
refer to the kinds of activities found on Web sites.
As for creative writing Web sites and
print materials, some provide very specific examples of creative writing
activities (see, e.g., Strom, Ingraham, & Dunnett, 1993 [print materials];
Creative Writing, 2005 [Web site direction]). During each pre-study stage, I
respectively wondered if Arthur, Thomas, or Elizabeth would describe any
creative writing activities that were very, very specific as ones that had
encouraged him or her to take up creative writing.
I, like many others, have written a
creative writing course available in print (Lukiv, 1997) that presents many
assignments that show students how to develop various creative writing skills.
Would Arthur, Thomas, or Elizabeth refer to assignments similar to the ones in
my course?
Many books for students of creative
writing provide excellent suggestions about how to make characters in poetry or
fiction seem “alive” (see, e.g., Leavitt, 1970, p. 15). Others present how-to-use-point-of-view
exercises (see, e.g., Leavitt & Sohn, 1979). Some books create programs
that work so well that many of the students “have consistently won prizes in
top writing competitions and been published in national magazines and books”
(Thornley, 1976, back cover). Other texts provide a wealth of excellent how-to
direction for creative writing students and teachers of creative writing (see,
e.g., Bates, 1980; Bickham, 1996; Block, 1979; Bryant, 1978; Bugeja, 1994;
Cassil, 1975; Clark, Brohaugh, Woods, Strickland, & Blocksom, 1992; Dessner,
1979; Dickson & Smythe, 1970; Drury, 1991; Fredette, 1988; Hall, 1989;
Irwin & Eyerly, 1988; Jones, 1978; Powell, 1973; Roberts, 1981; Seuling,
1991; Wakan, 1993; and Wyndham, 1972). Would Arthur, Thomas, or Elizabeth, I
wondered, mention excellent how-to direction as examples of activities that had
encouraged him or her to continue learning the art and craft of writing?
Jerome (1980) and Birney’s (1966)
rich and deep analyses of what poetry is has kept me rereading their texts.
Would Arthur, Thomas, or Elizabeth describe rich and deep analyses of creative
writing in school as examples of experiences that had encouraged him or her?
Hodgins (1993) describes a school experience of being read to by a teacher,
thereby encouraging him to become a writer of fiction. I relate to that
experience because I had similar ones (see Chapter Thirteen: Tying up My Own
Biases). Would Arthur, Thomas, or Elizabeth describe similar ones too?
Birney
(1966), however, suggests school discourages some potential creative writers.
In some cases they feel forced, he says, to drop out of high school to learn
elsewhere the art and craft of creative writing. Is it not ironic that Language
Arts curricula that are supposed to teach creative writing might frustrate
potential creative writers? With that question in mind, would Arthur, Thomas,
or Elizabeth say that no school experiences encouraged him or her to
take up creative writing later in life? Frankly, I did not think that would be
the case. Before writing up my proposal for Study I, I had already approached
two creative writers separately to ask, “Did any experiences in elementary and
high school encourage you to become a creative writer?” Both had immediately
said, “Yes!” Although one Canadian writer whom I spoke to between my completing
Study II and starting Study III answered no to that question (see Chapter
Seven: A Suspended Literature Review), his answer seems anomalous.
At
any rate, I wondered what lived school experiences might have discouraged
people from becoming creative writers. I wondered if The British Columbia
Ministry of Education’s approved resources for senior high school students that
mechanistically chop up stories into bits of escapism, interpretation, plot,
theme, character, point of view, symbolism, and irony (see, e.g., Perrine,
1966; and Ball, 1969) or into bits of subject, verb, verbal, adverb, adjective,
noun, pronoun, conjunction, preposition, phrase, clause, antecedent, sentence
fragment, object, infinitive, and punctuation (see, e.g., Hart & Heim,
1982; and Shaw, 1986), or if teachers who likewise chop up poems into bits of
literary terminology such as alliteration, assonance, caesura, dactyl,
enjambment, feminine rhyme, free verse, metaphor, and onomatopoeia (to refer to
only a comparatively small number of terms [see, e.g., The Virtual Classroom,
2003]), discourage students from becoming poets and fiction writers. But my
wondering did not preclude Arthur, Thomas, or Elizabeth from saying that
mechanistically chopping up stories, language, and poems had been just the sort
of activity that had encouraged him or her to take up creative writing.
Knott (1977) discusses how to submit
writing to an editor (see, also, Adamec, 2000; and Cool, 1987). I used Knott’s
excellent book as a text in 1978 and 1979 to teach two adult creative writing
courses through the Quesnel (BC) School District’s Continuing Education
Department. I wondered, would Arthur, Thomas, or Elizabeth mention school
activities that had taught him or her how to go about sending submissions to
editors?
I
also wondered about classroom publishing opportunities. For example, many
teachers have motivated students to write in school through publishing
adventures (see, e.g., Lamb, 1984; Love, n.d.b; Lukiv, 1996, and 2002a). Would
Arthur, Thomas, or Elizabeth say that classroom publication had motivated him
or her to write and that that experience had encouraged him or her to further
study creative writing?
I
recently developed Story Day: A Theoretical Model for Teaching Creative Writing
in the Elementary Grades (Lukiv, 2002a, Chapter Two of Home-Grown Publishing)
based on elements of social constructivism (McCarthy & Raphael, 1992; and
Ruddell & Unrau, 1994) and Vygotskian theory (Berk & Winsler, 1995;
Hicks, 1996; and Vygotsky, 1978). Twenty-eight years ago, as a primary teacher,
I developed the genesis of that chapter. My primary students knew that I was a
published creative writer, and although I instinctively knew that, as Jobe
(1982) says, “classroom teachers can have more influence on their students’
reading habits by showing that they themselves are active readers,” I could not
say with conviction, all those years ago or even at the proposal stage of Study
I, that the same applies to writing. But I have learned from Spandel and
Stiggins (1997) that “research shows that teachers of writing, if they wish to
be effective, must write themselves” (p. 170). I wondered, was Arthur, Thomas,
or Elizabeth encouraged through contact with teachers who were creative
writers?
In
addition to my Story Day: A Theoretical Model for Teaching Creative Writing in
the Elementary Grades, much literature attempts to motivate students to write
poetry and fiction (see, e.g., Cleveland Public Schools, 1968; Dyson,
1987; Matthews, 1981; Pennsylvania State Department of Education, 1975; and
Potter, McCormick, & Busching, 2001). Amabile (1985) found poetry written
through extrinsic motivation is much less creative than poetry written through
intrinsic motivation. I wondered, would Arthur, Thomas, or Elizabeth mention
activities that had addressed intrinsic motivation (Stipek, 1998) as examples
that had encouraged him or her to take up creative writing?
That question, and other questions
and thoughts I refer to in this chapter, helped me bracket in possibilities.
They focused my attention on participants’, not my, experiences, and they
helped, in an objective sense, to highlight my research question: What, if
any, lived school experiences encouraged [the participant] to become a creative
writer? I listed these possibilities for my peer debriefers, and they
searched for bias effects in my interviews, analysis, and interpretations.[3] I’m happy to say they
found none, which means that my bracketing worked for me.
If I were to conduct the next study,
say IV, to explore the lived school experiences of another successful Canadian
writer, through my original research question and methodology, again, I would
need again to bracket in my biases and “possibilities.” Those possibilities
could arise through my conversations with colleagues, readings, or divergent
(Jansen, 2002b) or convergent thinking (Jansen, 2002a), or other types of
thought processes, as mentioned earlier in this chapter. If I were to complete
a further succession of studies, to create an abundance of thematic statements
of direction for creative writing teachers, I would have to bracket more and
more themes and possibilities along the way.
Bracketing, then, and bracketing in
possibilities, tools to “control” biases, so that the researcher can
objectively, or as objectively as possible, study research questions and
interview data/lived experience in the qualitative/phenomenological arena,
allow for a disciplined subjectivity that does not allow the researcher to “step”
beyond the themes, concepts, or categories of the interview data.
Whether you are a historian,
ethnographer, or phenomenological researcher, this chapter should provide the
reader with a method for “tying up” biases. Untied biases are somewhat like
untied horses that roam about trampling that new garden. Don’t let biases trample
a study or a history book. Aptekar (1992) feels he allowed that to happen in
his study of Colombian street children, and that study, he says in different
words, suffered for that trampling. In short, his untied biases destroyed some
of his study’s validity.
Chapter Thirteen: Tying up
My Own Biases
Have
you wondered about what forces in your past encouraged you to pursue particular
interests? Did any experiences in school encourage you to pursue your line of
work, whatever that might be? I’m a poet and a fiction writer, and I have
wondered about what, if any, experiences in school encouraged me to take up
creative writing as a past-time and as a profession. I have discovered several
in my mindscape, several that stand like great trees on a somewhat barren
landscape (Lukiv, 2002c).
I’ll
begin with an experience from primary school. I clearly remember my grade three
teacher asking us, her students, to read a story that showed how much fun and
how interesting looking at the world from a different perspective could be. In
the story, the farmer-husband and the housekeeper-wife each complained about
his or her workload and lot in life. Each decided the other had life easy, very
easy, and so each traded places. The husband became the housekeeper, and the
wife became the farmer. The result was hilarious, because each was hopelessly
incompetent in their new positions. That farm and the home became a kind of
bedlam filled with burnt food and unmilked, mooing cows. I looked at
housekeeping through the eyes of the farmer, and I looked at farming through
the eyes of the wife. I became hysterical with laughter.
From
the day of my reading that story, I have never forgotten how much I enjoy
looking at the world from different, unusual perspectives. I believe that story
has encouraged me to dream up bizarre people in fantastic circumstances. I
refer to some of my characters—Hooper Quirk, Booger Jimm, Professor Hamburger,
Dr. Dewknob, and Miss Snapdragon—in the time travel adventure of my Quibils
and Quirks (1997, 1998, 1999).
Now I’ll
step into grade four: I vividly recall an experience that introduced me to the
joy of creative thought. I wrote of the experience in chapter seven of my The
Master Teacher: A Collection (2001c) titled “How Big Is the Universe?” I have included it here.
How Big Is the Universe?
The
school year: 1962/63. I was in grade four, attending Sir Wilfred Grenfell
Elementary School in East-side Vancouver, BC. That formal-sounding name
perfectly juxtaposed the formalistic schooling I had already experienced there
for over three years. I relate perfectly to Neil Sutherland in his “The Triumph
of ‘Formalism’: Elementary Schooling in Vancouver from the 1920s to the 1960s.”
On school days, from 9:00 a.m. to 3:00 p.m., I lived in a world of precision,
of upper case versus lower case, of names of capitals and provinces, of reading
comprehension questions, of phonics reviews, of math drills, of multiplication
facts, and of fact-based quizzes, quizzes, quizzes. Sutherland says, “Teachers
would lead the class in chanting a ‘drill’ for the spelling, or the times
table, or the number facts, or the capitals of provinces” (1995, p. 107). And
what made a good teacher? “If a teacher, so parents believed, ‘drills
incessantly on the formal parts of grammar and arithmetic or the facts of
history and geography, he is ... a good teacher’” (p. 101).
I
knew no other schooling system, so those hours at school actually seemed normal
to me: “It was a [normal] system
based on teachers talking and pupils listening, a system that discouraged
independent thought, a system that provided no opportunity to be creative”
(Sutherland, 1995, p. 106). But one day in grade four, still in the clutches of
a century of formalism, learning briefly changed for me. Our usually-stern,
aloof, precisely-accurate teacher surprisingly said, “We’re going to do
something different today. We’re going to talk about the universe. I’m going to
ask you a question, but there is no right or wrong answer. Now then: How big is
the universe? Does it go on forever, or does it stop? And if it does stop, how
does it stop? Remember, now, there are no wrong answers.”
Our
teacher worked hard to encourage us to allow our imaginations no limits. I (and
my fellow classmates) slowly recovered from the shock of being invited to
participate in such an unorthodox assignment. I believe I felt my brain turning
on. Perhaps new-found numbers of neurotransmitters had jumped to life. My brain
seemed to soar across a chasm filled with 5 x 4 = 20 and other apparently-for-the-moment,
unimportant facts to an expanse, a landscape, on which any thinking would do.
What
a day! Fifteen years later I learned in UBC-teacher training classes that my
fellow students and I were brainstorming, creatively dreaming up ideas, and about
ten years after that I learned that some people call it lateral thinking.
Comments leapt from our grade four-mouths:
“Maybe
it never ends.”
“How
can something never end?”
“Maybe
it starts all over again.”
“Maybe
it ends at a brick wall.”
“Could the universe be a circle? So
wherever you go, like in a spaceship, you end up
back where you started?”
Our teacher, who I remember looked
delighted, continued encouraging us to dream up as many possible answers to her
“How big is the universe?”question, until we literally ran out of ideas. How
different from lessons I had digested daily at school—lessons for which “teachers
conducted individual or group drills of number facts or the times tables”
(Sutherland, 1995, p. 106) or conducted arithmetic-races that determined
winners and losers. I thought about those possible, and according to our
teacher, anything-will-do “universe” answers for hours after that class, in
which no one, that I can recall, won or lost. Each time I ran those answers
through my mind, I felt exhilarated.
Unfortunately,
thereafter the daily program of formalistic schooling didn’t often offer the
luxury of brainstorming—brainstorming within a framework of open-ended
discussions (another term I learned about during my UBC-teacher training). Such
discussions, for me the food of lateral-thinking ecstasy, or call it sublime
creative thought, killed the boredom that Sutherland aptly describes:
Pupils freed themselves from the
bonds of [tedious] routine as best they could. Some learned to talk to
neighbors in such a way that they were rarely seen or heard, or to throw balls
or wads of paper when the teacher was not looking. Some “mastered the skill of
copying ... without ever needing to comprehend” and were thus able “to dream
outdoor matters while rarely missing a word.” Others travelled to the pencil
sharpener as frequently as they felt they could get away with the practice.
This activity was especially popular in classrooms where the sharpener was on
the bookcase under a window; then one “could have a look out of the window.”
(Sutherland, 1995, p. 109)
This opportunity for creative thought, this total
acceptance of my ideas by my teacher: The experience made me feel drunk with
joy.
So did my playing the guitar for my
grade five class. We had been studying about the lives of master composers like
Beethoven, Mozart, Mendelssohn, and Brahms, and about the musical instruments
of their day. I told my teacher I played the guitar, and she asked me to bring
it to school the next day to perform for the class. The exhilaration that next
day of entertaining those students was almost more than I could stand. “We’ll
have to call you Elvis,” one boy teasingly said afterwards. To look at the world from different
perspectives, engage in creative thought, present ideas that are appreciated,
entertain others: a pattern of what I liked was welling up inside of me.
In grade six our teacher took us to
the Queen Elizabeth Theatre in Vancouver to hear the Vancouver Symphony
Orchestra play fully-orchestrated pieces. I could feel the music vibrate right
down to the bones of my skinny body. I said to myself, “The people who compose
this kind of music are deep thinkers.” To my pattern of what I liked I added to
do something that requires lots of concentration.
Although
I had no focussed direction of creative pursuit, I continued to discover what
made me feel passionate. In grade seven our teacher read aloud A Christmas
Carol (1843/2000) by Charles Dickens. The first page remains alive in my
mind. The atmosphere of death Dickens created by referring to Scrooge’s dead
friend Marley intrigued me and filled me with wonder:
Marley was dead: to begin
with. There is no doubt whatever about that. The register of his burial was
signed by the clergyman, the clerk, the undertaker, and the chief mourner.
Scrooge signed it: and Scrooge’s name was good upon ‘Change, for anything he
chose to put his hand to. Old Marley was as dead as a door-nail.
Mind! I don’t mean to say
that I know, of my own knowledge, what there is particularly dead about a
door-nail. I might have been inclined, myself, to regard a coffin-nail as the
deadest piece of ironmongery in the trade. But the wisdom of our ancestors is
in the simile; and my unhallowed hands shall not disturb it, or the Country’s
done for. You will therefore permit me to repeat, emphatically, that Marley was
as dead as a door-nail. (Dickens, 1843/2000, Stave 1, Marley’s ghost, para. 1-2
)
I remember saying to myself, “I don’t know who this
Dickens guy is, but he sure knows what he’s doing.” I wanted to know how one
goes about using the printed word to evoke emotions in others. The wonder of
that grew inside me through junior high school. Teachers, and students who were
good readers, read aloud The Red Pony (1945/1993) and The Pearl
(1947/2000) by John Steinbeck, The Old Man and the Sea (1952/1999) by
Ernest Hemmingway, and The Chrysalids (1955/2001) by John Wyndham. We
students silently read Animal Farm (1945/1996) by George Orwell, Moonfleet
(1896/1951) by John Meade Faulkner, and Hiroshima (1946/1989) by John
Hersey. I recall how words in all those books seemed to hang like clouds in the
air, clouds coloured by emotions such as grief, despair, helplessness, terror,
heartache, horror, fear, sadness, confusion, joy, excitement. I wanted to know
how one writes words that induce people to feel so deeply that they cannot
forget the stories.
The
wonder of how to do that remained passionately alive in my blood, but it was not
until grade twelve, in English 12, that I realized I wanted to write, to be a
writer, to be someone who writes creatively, to be someone whose works are
appreciated, to be someone who entertains others, to be someone who thinks
hard, and to be someone who thinks and sees through other perspectives, other
points of view. A substitute teacher for our English 12 class asked us to do
something novel, like my grade four teacher who asked how big the universe
might be. The substitute asked us to write a poem about absolutely anything
that we wished to write about. A poem of our choice! I wrote all right. And he
read it.
He
looked at me after he had finished reading the poem and smiled. He smiled! “I
don’t know what it means,” he said, “but it’s interesting.”
As I
looked up at him leaning over my desk, I was spellbound by his interest. I had
actually written something that although my teacher found it confusing he
nevertheless found it interesting! It actually had value! I wanted to be a
writer from that day forward.
That
desire grew even stronger when I, as a student creative writer, received, from
a successful writer, regular, personal attention in Fiction 497 at the
University of British Columbia.
I had handed in my first short story for the tutorial
course, in which Professor Harlow met privately with me for about an hour each
week to discuss my latest efforts (Lukiv, 2001b). I sat before his cluttered desk, and he
looked over his black-rimmed glasses, somewhat apprehensively, at me:
“Dan,”
he said, “I read your story…It’s awful, Dan. I only marked up the first three
pages, because after that I couldn’t stand it any longer. I mean, I read it
all, but…it was just awful.”
I
didn’t shrink like Alice. I didn’t die of humiliation, although my heart sank
like a millstone in the sea. But I knew that expression of his. He was trying
to help me. He was trying hard. “Awful?”
“Yes.
This isn’t a story, Dan.” He looked at me over the upheld story-pages as if
they were a chasm between us that he was trying to eliminate.
Not
a story.
I was definitely thinking about that. But I had lots of knowledge about the
elements of fiction! Plot. Scene. Transition. Theme. Protagonist. Antagonist.
Conflict. I could even write clear prose, or so my English 303 composition
teacher had told me. But, somehow, according to Professor Harlow, I had not
written a story.
“Not
a story?”
“No.
A story is about somebody with a problem that gets worse and worse, until some
sort of resolution takes place. What you have written is not a story.” Again,
he was looking over his glasses at me. He was looking for a spark of understanding.
Then he made sure I understood what he meant. He provided examples of stories
we both knew. He spent a lot of time reasoning with me, helping me understand
those examples.
That
event was like a revelation, silly as that might sound until one reads the
often-inept products of neophyte writers who don’t understand that Harlow was
helping me “construct” as knowledge. That discussion enabled me to leap ahead
in my progress as a creative writer. On my own, I might have taken a looooong
time to gain the same understanding.
That
personal attention burned a tattoo in my psyche: I want to be a writer.
These
experiences define highlights in my education. Through my use of free
imaginative variation (see Chapter Fourteen: Methodology), which has helped me
root out incidental themes which I won’t bother to relate, I express those
highlights in terms of one essential, broad theme: Events in school that
promoted my looking at the world through “different” eyes; that promoted the
wonder of creativity; that promoted the joy of my thoughts being
appreciated/valued; that promoted the excitement of entertaining, or
emotionally moving, others; that promoted the excitement of focussed thinking;
and that promoted the joy of understanding how to write have encouraged me to
become an adult creative writer.
Chapter Fourteen:
Methodology
Van
Manen (1990) helps us understand hermeneutic phenomenological research as an
intensive writing activity (van Manen, 2000j, and 2000v) that helps the
researcher explore the unique phenomena of lived experience (see, e.g.,
Vandenberg, 1992). It is a method of understanding the person (van Manen,
1990). As a writer and a teacher, this methodology fits my interest in creative
writing, in what people think and feel (Siegle, n.d.b), and in effective
teaching methods, but, in particular, this methodology fits my interest as an
education researcher in what lived experiences in school have encouraged people
to become creative writers (see, e.g., Barnett, 2002; and Chalip et al., 1998).
I could map my research logic as follows: The topic (creative writing) led to
the research question, which led to a paradigm (qualitative research), which
led to a methodology (hermeneutic phenomenology), which led to my researching
the lived experiences of three creative writers over three studies. Not
surprisingly, then, I employed purposeful sampling (McMillan & Schumacher,
1997) as a method to choose information-rich participants (Barnett, 2002).
In
a sense, the variety of participants—Arthur, Thomas, and Elizabeth—relates to
multi-site qualitative studies, which establishes conclusions and
recommendations through standardized interviewing, analysis, and interpretation
(Firestone & Herrioit, n.d.). My studies, standardized through my
phenomenological procedures (with regard to research question, interview guide,
analysis, and interpretation) provide a forum for comparisons between
participants as multi-site qualitative studies provide a forum for comparisons
between sites (n.d.).
Sampling
I
studied the participants’ experiences. In view of hermeneutic
phenomenology’s focus on the individual, on his or her lived experiences,
purposeful sampling of one participant per study seemed sensible and
appropriate. In addition, I considered Bogdan and Biklan’s (1992) comments that
single-participant studies are more manageable than those with
multiple-participants.
My
goal, of course, was to employ a systematic approach, a systematic methodology,
to study the lived experiences of Arthur, Thomas, and Elizabeth.
A Systematic Approach
Hermeneutic phenomenology
focuses on the individual (van Manen, 1990), through the systematic (see, e.g.,
Baldursson, 2000a; Clark, 2000a; Cull-Wilby, 2000; Ford, 2000; Hagedorn, 2000;
James, 2000; Maeda-Fujita, 2000; Montgomery-Whicher, 2000; and Winning, 2000)
and the explicit; however, much phenomenological so-called research does not,
from my point of view, reveal its methodology enough to merit the use of the
word systematic (see, e.g., these phenomenological, so-called, research papers
(I prefer to call these articles): Altrows, 2000; Baldursson, 2000b; Bergum,
2000; Bottorff, 2000; Brooks, 2000; Burton, 2000; Clark, 2000b; Connolly, 2000;
Davies, 2000; Davis, 2000; Devine, 2000; Evans, 2000; Fahlman, 2000; Field,
2000; Flickinger, 2000; Godkin, 2000; and Hawley, 2000). That said, my research
was systematic. It used specific modes of questioning for data collection
(McLean, Myers, Smillie, & Vaillancourt, 1997), of analyzing, and of
interpreting. In this chapter I discuss each of those modes and refer once
again to my systematic use of bracketing (see Chapter Twelve: Bracketing and
Phenomenology) as a fundamental means for bias control. These modes define much
of my methodology. As for explicitness, hermeneutic phenomenology is explicit
through its listing of discovered themes (van Manen, 1990, and 2000p).
Modes of questioning,
analyzing, and interpreting, according to hermeneutic phenomenological
tradition, must protect the researcher’s objectivity and subjectivity. In terms
of objectivity, “the researcher becomes in a sense a guardian and a defender of
the true nature of the object [(the participants’ lived experience)]” (van
Manen, 1990, p. 20). But the researcher must remain true not only to the nature
of the participants’ lived experience; he must remain true to the solitary
research question.
By
subjectivity, I refer to the researcher’s remaining true to the meanings of the
data (1990). Van Manen refers to subjectivity by saying it means that:
one needs to be as perceptive, insightful,
and discerning as one can be in order to show or disclose the object in its
full richness and in its greatest depth. Subjectivity means that we are strong
in our orientation to the object of study in a unique and personal way—while
avoiding the danger of becoming arbitrary, self-indulgent, or of getting
captivated and carried away by our unreflected preconceptions. (p. 20)
Questioning Techniques
Researchers, “primarily driven
by the need for information” (Taylor, 1990, p. 83), but sometimes driven in the
qualitative sense by the need for “knowledge as personal, subjective, and unique” (Cohen &
Manion, 1994, p. 6) and sometimes driven in the phenomenological sense by the
need for “experience
taken at face value” (p. 29), often gather data through a “conversational interview” (van Manen,
1990, p. 66). My studies, designed to gather personal, face-value information,
employed what I would call controlled conversational interviews (van Manen,
2000d).
They required depth
interviewing and probes (Patton, 1987). To help me stay focused on the research
question, I kept an interview guide (1987) at hand. Really, it contained
direction that helped the participants address the reality of their experiences
and avoid what some call participant-folklore (Borgatti, 1996b). Some might
argue that if “our world is perceived through ... [our senses, and] is
transformed through conceptualization into perception” (Pines, 1985, cited in
Snively, 1995), then words like perceived/perception, transformed,
and conceptualization imply that the reality of events could be called
the folklore or creative construction of events.
Haig-Brown (1988)
addresses what I call participant-folklore as “the possible distortion ... of
memories over time” (p. 153). She admits that “selection of material presented
is a problem encountered with any documentation of fact or history,” but she
adds that “memories which survive over time in people’s minds are usually those
of the more salient experiences” (p. 153). That sounds like a reasonable conclusion.
In fact, “rather than seeing time as distorting, we might consider it as a
filter which allows clearer vision of the matters of importance in a person’s
life” (p. 153). That sounds reasonable too.
My comment on
participant-folklore stands as follows: No research is perfect. All research has inherent limitations
(McMillan & Schumacher, 1997); therefore, the researcher does what he or
she can to maximize internal validity. I did what I could. I used my interview
guide as a sort of reality check (see Appendix B: An Interview Guide).
Why
did I conduct an interview as opposed to having a participant write to me? Van
Manen (1990) warns that “writing forces the person into a reflective
attitude—in contrast to face-to-face conversation in which people are much more
immediately involved” (p. 64). I chose not to create a situation in which “this
reflective attitude together with the linguistic demands of the writing process”
placed “certain constraints on the free obtaining of lived-experience
descriptions” (p. 64). I chose instead to use well-established interview
methodology.
The foundation of my
interview guide was a question: “Are there experiences in school that
encouraged you to become a creative writer in your adult years?” I included
probes, to be used if necessary, to draw out the experience in concrete terms
of who, what, where, when, why, and how (Patton, 1987). Other questions
established participants’ past and present engagement as a writer (1987), the
answers of which I present in language that protects their anonymity.
Sensory questions in the
interview guide were to be used, if necessary, to probe into what the
participants had seen, heard, tasted, smelled, and touched (Patton, 1987).
Feeling questions in the Carl Rogerian tradition (Egan, 1998) probed in order
to discern participants’ emotions (Patton, 1987). For example, a
Rogerian-style question would be: “Do you mean that you felt (_______) about
that experience?” I wanted an empathic understanding of the participants’
emotional reaction to their experiences (Siegle, n.d.b).
All of these interview
guide questions helped participants focus on facts—the facts of their lived
school experiences—rather than on folklore constructions of events. In
participant review, Arthur, Thomas, and Elizabeth told me that the interviews
stayed so rigidly affixed to my interview guide that I was at times a boring
interviewer. I chuckle that I sometimes came across in that way, but I remain
thankful that my rigidity—in terms of my conducting controlled interviews—helped
establish as much truth as possible about the participants’ lived school
experiences. In short, my interview guide helped me minimize the folklore, the
creative memory, of events.
Another
word on my interview questions: I attempted to keep them singular, not
confusing (Patton, 1987). One problem in interviewing is that “interviewers
often throw several questions together and ask them all at once ... .This is
confusing and places an unnecessary and unfair burden of interpretation on the
interviewee” (Patton, 1987, p. 124). Hilbert (1998) in her article “The
Pain/Pleasure of the Interviewing Process” asks several questions in succession
(p. 10). This, I discovered, is a difficulty hard to avoid. In the words of E.
Facey, one of my supervisors and peer debriefers for Study I, asking several
questions at once is “a good example of how hard some of these dictums are to
follow when one is in the live situation of interviewing, caught up in the
excitement of hearing what the Other has to say” (Personal e-mail, April 18,
2002). I wanted the participant to feel at ease, to be relaxed and reflective,
and not to worry about a volley of upcoming questions. I felt impelled to establish a professional,
humanistic—ethical (Cohen & Manion, 1994; McMillan & Schumacher, 1997;
Patton, 1987; and van Manen, 1990)—forum for neutrality and rapport.
Rapport and Neutrality
Patton (1987) explains that “rapport
means that I respect the person being interviewed, ... that the respondent’s
knowledge, experiences, attitudes, and feelings are important” (p. 127). Patton
adds that “neutrality means that the interviewer listens without passing
judgment” (p. 127) and the interviewer asks questions that do not have “a
built-in response bias that communicates the interviewer’s belief” (p. 129).
Neutrality asserted itself through my lack of judgement, no matter what Arthur,
Thomas, and Elizabeth said (1987). To be neutral, Patton (1987) tells us, in
part means not to ask leading questions. During Study I, I coined a phrase,
bracketing in possibilities (see Chapter Twelve: Bracketing and Phenomenology),
which helped me address biases that could have affected my neutrality and
interview skills. Without bracketing, any possibility I expressed in Chapter
Twelve could have turned into a leading question that reflected my belief about
an experience that participants should have had, thereby trading neutrality for
judgement and/or bias.
Leading Questions
To enlarge on this problem
of leading questions, I borrow language from quantitative research. McMillan
and Schumacher (1997) explain that “experimenter [or qualitative researcher]
effects refer to both deliberate and unintentional influences that the
researcher has on the subjects [(participants)]” (p. 188). The point, according
to Patton (1987), is that even unintentional influences in questions would have
“a built-in response bias that communicates the interviewer’s belief” (p. 129).
To borrow language from Quantum Mechanics, namely the term the Heisenberg
Uncertainty Principle, if certainty of observation becomes a certainty of
uncertainty (Guldvog, 2001; and Wassermann, 2001/2002), even in the most
variable-controlled quantitative setting possible, then my biased presence as a
qualitative researcher would definitely affect participant response.
Bracketing in bias and possibilities, then, helped me “establish neutrality”
(Patton, 1987, p. 128) as an interviewer and helped me keep leading questions
at bay.
Another
tool, besides bracketing, also helped me as a researcher: tact. As I already
mentioned, I wanted to establish a professional, humanistic, ethical forum for
research, and tact, I believe, helped me as an interviewer to establish that “right”
human touch.
Tact, for the Researcher (and the
Educator)
Do you (let’s say you’re a teacher)
sometimes grow too concerned to get the job done? The bell will ring soon, and
you need the students to complete that worksheet before that happens, but
Ursula asks a question that, if you answer it fully, will rob you of time
needed to explain to the whole class the last section of the worksheet, which
is somewhat confusing.
Do
you say, “Ursula! Why do you always interrupt me while I’m trying to teach the
class? Why don’t you ask your parents to teach you some manners?”
Tactful?
Even if Ursula does interrupt you often, would you resort to this tactless
response?
That
first interview you (let’s say you’re a researcher) want to conduct for your
latest qualitative study is to begin in five minutes. You scheduled an hour
with the learning assistant to ask her about how she deals with a lack of
resources in a school with many students who have problems in reading. Four
minutes left. The principal, to whom you
introduced yourself as you met him in the hallway, keeps blabbing on about his
school. Now he’s giving you a grand tour of the art room.
“Notice
how clean the room is?” he says. “The children clean it up before the end of
each class, and at the end of the day—look!—the custodian has hardly a thing to
do!”
Do
you, in no uncertain terms, inform him that you came to his school to conduct
an important interview and he is wasting your precious time?
I’m
putting a humorous twist to this important subject of tact, which is, according
to Webster’s: “A quick or intuitive appreciation of what is fit, proper,
or right; fine or ready mental discernment shown in saying or doing the proper
thing, or especially in avoiding what would offend or disturb” (Tact, p. 982).
Therefore, a tactful person has “the ability to appreciate the delicacy of a
situation and to do or say the kindest or most fitting thing” (as qtd. in
Learning the Art, 2003, p. 29). You might see logic in the word tact once
referring “to touch. Just as sensitive fingers can perceive if something is
sticky, soft, polished, hot, or hairy, so a tactful person can sense the
feelings of other people and can discern how his words or actions affect them”
(p. 29). Clearly, the tactful person feels a “genuine desire to avoid hurting
others” (p. 29).
Max
van Manen tells us that tact “is a particular sensitivity ... to situations,
and how to behave in them” (2000h, para. 1). We might believe that “every
professional practitioner (such as a teacher, nurse, physician, or a clinical
psychologist) carries socially and personally constructed ‘theories’ or ‘philosophies’
in their minds” (para. 3). Cognitivists and social constructivists sometimes
conduct research to “retrieve these theories in order to find out what makes a
good practitioner behave in certain ways” (para. 3). As researchers they may
study “the behaviors, reflections, memories, and meaning-constructs of ‘excellent’
teachers in order to determine the knowledge that underlies their exemplary
practices” (para. 3). Whatever conclusions and recommendations they make, the
common denominator for all tactful action is thoughtful, intuitive,
intentional, perceptive, kindly action.
As an
element of tact, perceptiveness provides us with “a keen sense of what to do or
say in order to maintain good relations with others” (as qtd. in van Manen,
2000g, para. 2). A tactful person, then, knows how to “act quickly ... and in
an appropriate manner with quite complex or delicate circumstances” (para. 2).
He or she interprets “inner thoughts, understandings, feelings, and desires
from indirect clues or evidence such as gestures, demeanour, expressions, and
body language” (van Manen, 2000c, para. 2). He or she would have a sense of how
to deal with “shyness, hostility, frustration, rudeness, joy, anger,
tenderness, grief (etc.) for particular persons in concrete situations” (para.
3).
Tact,
then, is not selfish. Some call it pathic: “It allows one to grasp the
situation from the other’s point of view” (van Manen, 2000f, para. 2). The
tactful person addresses individuals in “difficult” situations with a certain
confidence, and “the more thoughtful and reflective a person stands in life,
... the more likely that this person will be able to act confidently in
situations marked by contingency and uncertainty” (van Manen, 2000k, para. 3).
Some situations may call for a social, cultural, and ethical awareness.
Although “the notion of tact is inherently a factor of personal style of
individuals, it is also at the same time inherently an intersubjective, social,
and cultural ethical notion” (para. 2).
The
word ethical brings to my mind morality. Perhaps you agree that “tact seems to
be characterized by a moral intuitiveness” (van Manen, 2000t, para. 2). The
tactful teacher, researcher, or anybody, really, “seems to sense what is the
good or right thing to do” (para. 2). The tactful teacher is able to “see what
goes on with children, to understand the child’s experience, to sense ... pedagogical
significance, ... to know ... what to do, and to actually do something right”
(para. 2). Van Manen calls tact “a kind of practical normative intelligence
that is governed by insight while relying on feeling” (para. 4).
Armed
with this understanding, we might realize why “as teachers, we sometimes catch
ourselves about to say something but then hold back before we have completely
committed ourselves to what was already ‘on our lips’” (van Manen, 1995, para.
10). Tact, in a sense, channels our thoughts, words, and actions along a route
of what is best for the student—or for whomever we are dealing with. During one
of my phenomenological interviews with Thomas, I sensed he was growing weary of
my questions and needed a break. He did not admit this when I asked him if he
needed a break, but then I asked if he minded stopping for a while because I
needed to regroup my thoughts. I did not lie. That was how I felt, although I could
have kept the interview going. As it turned out, he almost jumped at the
chance to stop the interview for a while. Once he seemed refreshed by a general
discussion about what makes a good poem, he got back to being interviewed with
a newborn energy. Was I being a tactful interviewer? You be the judge.
Tact
acquires itself inside of us, one might say, through experience and reflection
that focuses on the needs of others; however, I often find tact feels
like a thinking, feeling entity within me that makes up its mind about what to
do or say without my actually reflecting on what would be best. I relate to van
Manen’s statement that “usually, the teacher does not have time to distance
himself or herself from the particular moment in order to deliberate
(rationally, morally, or critically) what he or she should do or say next”
(1995, The Epistemology of Tact as Practical Acting, para. 4). There are, of
course, situations in which speed is not of the essence. They provide us the
opportunity to reflect on what tactful response or word would be best.
The
point is that when we employ tact we may find ourselves rejoicing over the good
results: “A man [or woman, whether he or she be a teacher, researcher, or
someone else] has rejoicing in the answer of his mouth, and a word at its right
time is O how good!” (New World Translation, Proverbs 15:23). Stated
differently, such a person’s words that are “apples of gold in silver carvings”
(Proverbs 25:11) can encourage, inspire, strengthen. I marvel when I see that
tactful teachers spur on—encourage—students to want to keep trying in spite of
difficult circumstances—and many of the troubled students at my secondary
alternate school, McNaughton Centre, Quesnel, BC, have difficult circumstances.
These
students need tactful teachers.
Now
then, would you call this a tactful reply?: “Ursula, that’s an interesting
question [assuming it is]. After I finish helping the students with the last
section of this worksheet, I’ll answer that question.” Would you call this a
tactful statement to the principal who is so proud of his school?: “Thank you
for the tour, but I have a meeting in a few minutes with Mrs. [ ]. After I’m finished, could you give me
the rest of the tour?” Would that encourage good relations? Sometimes school
staff feel animosity towards so-called “ivory tower” (Neuman, 2006, p. viii)
researchers who, given to brusqueness, ask voluminous questions, do esoteric
quantitative analysis, or generally take up time (McEwan, n.d.). Theresa
Dallavalle, portrayed as a lawyer in the movie Erin Brockovich (Shamberg
& Soderbergh, 2000) who likes to avoid “sentimental embellishments,” could
stereotypically define this sort of researcher.
How can researchers break
down this animosity? Tact doesn’t hurt—no doubt not simply because we catch a
lot more flies with honey than with vinegar, but because tact defines the
ethically appropriate point of view. Doesn’t tact tower over brusque words and
demeanour as humanistically superior?
In
the spirit of your answer to that last question, do you imagine the tactful
teacher as positive? When he or she has great optimism, great energy in the
classroom can result! Even given the challenges found in the poem called “An
Elementary School Classroom in a Slum,” by Stephen Spender (1967, pp. 101-102),
the tactful teacher tries to find the “word at its right time” for the benefit
of all his or her students. Undaunted by “[the] tall girl with her weighed-down head” (exhausted or ill?), “the
paper- / seeming boy with rat’s eyes” (thin, hungry, and weak?), “the stunted
unlucky heir / Of twisted bones, reciting a father’s gnarled disease” (an
inherited disease or disability?), and “[a boy’s] eyes [that] live in a dream”
(a mental illness?), the tactful teacher will never cease trying to encourage,
inspire, and strengthen them all. The tactful teacher is pathic and selfless,
with the interests of his students deep in his heart. He becomes a humanistic
model for students and colleagues alike (Horwood, 2003). The tactful researcher
is nothing less to those he or she meets in his or her research
journeys/adventures. Also, the tactful researcher creates an ethical forum for
discussion, especially when he or she establishes rapport (which “means … [to]
respect the person being interviewed, … that the respondent’s knowledge,
experiences, attitudes, and feelings are important” (Patton, 1987, p. 127) and
neutrality (which “means that the interviewer listens without passing judgment”)
(p. 127).
Now I
would like to move from these ethical concerns that relate to the researcher’s
relationship with his or her participants to internal validity concerns that
relate to the epistemological worth of a study. I will start first with the
analysis of data.
Analysis of Data
Analysis immediately after data
collection—i.e., after each interview (see, e.g., Galen, 1997/1998; and Lesson:
Qualitative Research, 1998)—enabled me to find themes in the data, whereas
interpretation, which I discuss later, enabled me to define themes as essential
or incidental. Analysis grew, in part, from my study of transcribed interview
data and field notes (Bloch, n.d.; Patton, 1987; and Text Analysis, 1998), and
from my contact summaries (Miles & Huberman, 1994). My goal remained to
truly “listen” to the data, to fully immerse my critical eye (van Manen, 2000a)
in the lived experiences. The analysis also grew from memos that I had written
to myself (Miles & Huberman, 1994), ongoing participant review, and
synthesis of the data (McMillan & Schumacher, 1997). Themes emerged
(Bennet, 1998). Van Manen (1990) refers to participant review—some researchers
at the pretesting stage of their surveys employ a related process called respondent
debriefing or respondent confirmability (Arminio, 2002; see, also,
How to Conduct Pretesting, 1997)—as an ongoing dialogue between the researcher
and participant, designed to confirm or reject the researcher’s findings.
Participant review, in terms of participant-researcher agreement, relates to
qualitative research, or more specifically to hermeneutic phenomenology, as
reliability, in terms of a reliability quotient (McMillan & Schumacher,
1997), relates to quantitative research.
The
analysis also included peer debriefing. My peer debriefers ensured rigor (Morse
et al., 2002) along the way of the studies by their helping me to not overlook
themes in the data. Although some researchers prefer other terms in place of
rigor, one being goodness (see, e.g., Arminio, 2002), I like the sense of
exactness that “rigor” brings with it, an exactness that my peer debriefers
helped me attain.
They helped me in other
ways too. They searched for examples of bias in my analyses, in my
interpretations, and in my questions as found in the transcribed interview
data. I found their “bias control,” if you do not mind that term, invaluable in
the sense that although they found no statements of bias, their “presence,” or
participation, in the study made me constantly aware that I must at all times
bracket my bias.
Each
element of analysis mentioned in this sub-section helped me attain a robust
level of internal validity, an acceptable level of epistemological worth. The
elements of interpretation, discussed next, likewise helped me attain the
same.
Interpretation of Data
Interpretation relates to the word
hermeneutics (Byrne, n.d.), derived from the Greek god, Hermes (Bennet, 1998),
whose task it was “to communicate messages from Zeus and other gods to the
ordinary mortals” (van Manen, 1990, p. 179). Hermeneutics, an intermediary of
words, finds a counterpart in Cambodian cosmology in the form of the dances of
Asparas. These celestial female dancers “serve as intermediaries between the
sacred and the secular through their dances” (Hamera, 1996, p. 201). In other
words, Asparas relates to interpretation.
Patton
(1987) says the researcher interprets qualitative data by searching for
patterns and relationships. In this interpretive sense, phenomenology provides
possible insights, through the wonder of exploration (van Manen, 2000j),
through the critical-eye search for essential themes in lived experience (van
Manen, 1990, and 2000a). This search occurs after the researcher has analyzed
the data and developed, through participant review, a list of themes.
By the way, whether the
researcher is at the analysis or interpretation stage, each participant review
session affords the participant an opportunity to clarify the precise wording
of each theme. A change of one word may alter a theme’s meaning. This
opportunity is very important, helping the researcher arrive at the best
truth of the participant’s experience (Geelan & Taylor, 2001).
Interestingly,
another tool of interpretation is the researcher’s writing of the themes. Van
Manen (1990) tells us that “writing teaches us what we know, and in what way we
know what we know” (p. 127). The researcher’s/writer’s goal is insightful
writing, but this sort of writing “cannot be accomplished in one
straightforward session. Rather, the process of writing and rewriting
(including revising or editing) is more reminiscent of the artistic activity of
creating an art object that has to be approached again and again” (p. 131).
Vandenberg (1992) says:
Van Manen’s ideas about writing are
corroborated by the material conditions of my own research. I do not know what
I think of an educational problem until I read about it and then write a paper
that includes all relevant things conceptualized in a vocabulary drawn from
phenomenological discourse. Now I know why my final editing does not obviate
the need to type the final draft myself: blue pencilling after the draft has
gone cold objectifies it and enables one to see what it says to someone else,
but this is merely rereading. Rewriting is necessary to become fully engaged in
the matter, resubjectifying it so it becomes more truly disclosive of what is
intended. (Significance of Writing, para. 1)
In short, in terms of interpretive
precision, “writing and rewriting [of themes] is the thing” (van Manen, 1990,
p. 132). But phenomenological interpretation involves more. It “involves
attaching meaning and significance to the analysis” (Patton, 1987, p. 144) in a
very particular way. I mean to say that although analysis determines what
themes exist, interpretation determines what themes are essential. Van Manen
(1990), and phenomenological researchers in general, some philosophers too,
call this process free imaginative variation. This process steps far away from
the methodology of researchers who consider interpretation their sole,
uncollaborative responsibility (Galen, 1997/1998).
Free Imaginative Variation
What change or changes to a circle
make it into something else? In other words, when is a circle not a circle
(Circle, 2003)? When is an ellipse not an ellipse (Ellipse, 1999)? A hyperbola
not a hyperbola (Hyperbola, 1999)? A line not a line (Kline, 1967)? An elliptic
(or hyperbolic) paraboloid not an elliptic (or hyperbolic) paraboloid
(Paraboloid, 2005)? Is a chair still a chair if it has only three legs instead
of the usual four? Polt (n.d.) discusses the form of “a triangle [that] makes
it be a triangle, rather than any other sort of thing—its triangleness” (para.
3; see, also, Boeree, n.d.a, n.d.b). Polt speaks about free imaginative
variation in terms of a technique, a way to “imaginatively subtract one
feature, then another, discovering in the process which features are essential
and which are not [i.e., which are incidental]” (para. 6). Some know about this
technique through their studies of Husserl, the mathematician and
phenomenologist (see, e.g., van Manen, 1990).
Mathematicians
describe the essential features of circles, ellipses, hyperbolas, lines,
elliptic and hyperbolic paraboloids, and other geometric figures in their one,
two, or three dimensional domains. Mathematicians even describe the essential
features of figments of their imaginations, such as n-dimensional hyper-spheres
defined by formulas of the form x12 + x22
+ x32 + … + xn2 = r2. I
invite the reader to begin listing the essential features of a chair. He or she
may find this difficult. Phenomenologists, faced with similar difficulties,
describe essential features that define phenomenon (van Manen, 1990). In the
arena called hermeneutic phenomenology, as a research methodology, researchers
often use free imaginative variation to help them determine essential versus
incidental themes (1990).
My
three hermeneutic phenomenological studies explored what lived experiences in
school had encouraged three different individuals to become creative writers.
Free imaginative variation helped my participants and I to establish “what to disregard”
(Polt, n.d., para. 28). Through hermeneutic phenomenology as a research
methodology (van Manen, 1990), which included the analysis of taped interviews,
the drawing up of themes, and then participant review to alter and/or verify
wording of those themes, my three studies produced 22 themes; however, I was
not able during the interpretation stage of free imaginative variation—a
specialized form of participant review—to label all the themes of all three
studies essential.
Only essential themes (Boeree, n.d.a,
n.d.b; and Steiner, 1986) defined the essence of the phenomenon (Phenomenology
as Method, n.d.) of what experiences in school had encouraged my participants
to become creative writers. The reader unfamiliar with free imaginative
variation may wonder how it helped participants and myself disregard themes,
deeming them incidental, yet deeming others essential. I will show how I used
it as an explicit (n.d.) and fundamental tool.
In Study I, Arthur helped me hone
eight themes through several participant review sessions (see Chapter Sixteen:
Conclusions—Arthur’s Themes). They are, approximately, the eight themes that I
had found in the interview data. Arthur found these themes valid products of
his interviews, but he changed, during participant review, a word here, and
phrase or clause there, to make sure each theme correctly—or as
accurately/reliably as possible—reflected his experiences in school. My peer
debriefers found them valid and free (or as reasonably free as possible) of my
bias.
Then, during an interpretive,
specialized form of participant review that I have referred to as free
imaginative variation, I helped Arthur to think about the significance of each
of his eight themes. I began with Theme One:
“Arthur, can you remove this theme from the set of themes of all school
experiences that encouraged you to become a creative writer—in the sense that
this theme is not all that important?” In the
case of each theme, he felt he absolutely could not. He felt in each
case that doing so altered the phenomenon. He could not imagine the phenomenon
intact with any of the eight themes removed, i.e., he could not label any of
the eight incidental. What school experiences had encouraged him to become a
creative writer defined, for him, eight essential themes. Not seven. Not six.
If the phenomenon is defined by a set of circles, then no theme is an ellipse,
triangle, square, or anything but a circle.
This discussion of Study I helps to
show that essential themes remain unremoveable from the phenomenon, but a
discussion of Study II helps to show why some themes, although valid products
of a researcher’s analysis of interview data, stand as incidental. I found
seven themes in the data in Study II. My peer debriefer found them unbiased
products of my analysis. Thomas (Study II), through participant review,
considered them valid in terms of the data (interview), but changed words here
and there to ensure the themes reliably reflected his experiences; however,
through another participant review session, using free imaginative variation as
an interpretive tool, Thomas did not say those themes were all
essential. On the contrary, he found six incidental, leaving only one
essential. Then he felt he needed to further alter that theme over succeeding
participant review sessions to ensure it, to an even greater degree, reliably
reflected his experiences. Call the final draft of that theme a parallelogram.
The six incidental themes, then, are of different “geometric” categories.
For
example, consider teachers who expressly appreciated Thomas’ efforts to
write encouraged him to become a creative writer (Incidental Theme One).
This theme is not essential because Thomas felt that it had not mattered much
what people had thought about his writing. During his school years, he decided
to write whether or not people appreciated his efforts. If the essence of the
phenomenon of what school experiences encouraged Thomas is a set of
parallelograms, then Incidental Theme One is not one; it is simply something
else.
Incidental Theme Two,
which says opportunities to hear his own written words spoken aloud
encouraged him to become a creative writer, is not essential because
although he enjoyed hearing his own words spoken aloud, he did not need them to
be. This theme is not a parallelogram. Likewise, Incidental Theme Three, exposure
to great literature encouraged Thomas to become a creative writer, is not
essential (not a parallelogram). Thomas would have found great literature to
read if none had been presented at school. He had access to great literature at
home, and through that exposure he would have found more and more.
Incidental Theme Four states: Opportunities
to write, under most circumstances, even as a punishment, encouraged Thomas to
become a creative writer. This is not essential because he found his own
opportunities to write without looking for them in school. The irony for
Thomas, however, was that writing as a punishment was in reality a reward; he
loved to write! Incidental Theme Four, in short, is not a parallelogram. Neither
is Incidental Theme Five: Opportunities to show off his writing ability to
peers encouraged Thomas to become a creative writer. This theme is not
essential because as much fun as showing off his talent to his peers was,
Thomas did not require peer approval of his writing. Incidental Theme Six, opportunities
to express himself freely through the use of literary techniques of his choice
encouraged Thomas to become a creative writer, is also not essential
because although he deeply enjoyed expressing himself freely through his choice
of literary techniques, he did not require these opportunities at school. He
made his own opportunities outside of school. Incidental Theme Six is not a
parallelogram. One essential theme remains (see Chapter Seventeen: Conclusions—Thomas’
Theme).
In Study III, Elizabeth
helped me finalize seven themes. I had analyzed the interview, discovering
seven themes, which my peer debriefer had deemed unbiased. Elizabeth considered
them valid products of the interview. She tinkered with these themes during
participant review to ensure they were, in the final draft, reliable products
of her experiences in school. Through free imaginative variation, Elizabeth
labelled two of the themes incidental. My peer debriefer considered the themes
after each participant review, and even after my use of free imaginative
variation, to make sure that my biases were not driving researcher-participant
discussions. For Studies I and II, I had followed the same process.
Not surprisingly,
Elizabeth’s themes listed alongside Arthur and Thomas’ reveal her
distinctiveness. Like Thomas, however, she did not believe that all the themes
I discovered were essential, whereas Arthur remained convinced that all eight
of his themes were definitely essential. She discarded this theme: Several
teachers encouraged her to enter Federal- and Provincial-level writing
contests, which she sometimes won (Incidental Theme One). She did not feel,
through free imaginative variation, that this theme warranted essential status
because her father, not any teacher, had been the first adult to encourage her
to enter these contests. If, on the other hand, my research question had been, What,
if any, experiences in school or outside of school encouraged [her] to
become an adult creative writer?, likely her Incidental Theme One, modified
to reflect her father’s influence, would have ranked as essential. Study III,
however, remained objective, as did Studies I and II, by remaining bounded by
its single research question. If the essence of the phenomenon of what school
experiences had encouraged Elizabeth is a set of spheres, then Incidental Theme
One is not a sphere.
She
discarded another theme as incidental: Teachers frequently asked her to help
other students with writing assignments, and also asked students to approach
her about writing problems they were encountering (Incidental Theme Two).
Through free imaginative variation, she believed that this theme could be
removed from the “school” phenomenon. Although the theme, through my analysis,
came out of the interview data, Elizabeth saw it as nonessential. Incidental
Theme Two is not a sphere. With Incidental Themes One and Two discarded, then,
the essence of Elizabeth’s lived school experiences, with regard to the
research question, is five themes (see Chapter Eighteen: Conclusions—Elizabeth’s
Themes). They are five spheres.
The 14 Essential themes
define the essence of the phenomenon I explored in my three studies. In a
sense, discarding incidental themes is hermeneutic phenomenology’s method of
dealing with what some researchers call rival hypotheses (Miles & Huberman,
1994), negative or discrepant results (Project Methodology, n.d.), or
disconfirming evidence (Lesson: Qualitative Research, 1998); however,
incidental themes are discarded only if the participant, through the free
imaginative variation process, labels them as nonessential to the phenomenon,
whereas rival hypotheses, negative or discrepant results, or disconfirming
evidence challenges conclusions or other insights a researcher comes up with.
In terms of a specific example, those challenges may modify or extend grounded
theory (Glaser, 1992; and Glaser & Strauss, 1967).
The process of free
imaginative variation within a context of participant review ensures that the
essential themes exist as a valid and reliable interpretation of the
participant’s lived experience. In a nutshell, during the process each of my
participants thought about this question: If he or she erased [theme x] from
the list of themes, would the phenomenon of what encouraged him or her be
altered? If the answer is yes, the theme stands as essential. If the answer is
no, the theme is discarded as incidental. Critics of free imaginative variation
might say, “But the researcher may have discarded an essential theme because
the participant couldn’t engage his or her powers of concentration concretely
enough to see the theme’s importance in the phenomenon.” Other critics might
make an opposite argument: “The participant could have concluded that theme x
is essential, when in fact, it isn’t.”
Van Manen (1990) himself
admits controversy over free imaginative variation exists. My reply: 1) the
researcher must exercise patience, giving the participant every opportunity to
evaluate each theme’s essential or incidental relevance to the phenomenon and
every opportunity to change his or her mind; and 2) no research is perfect.
Every methodology has limitations (McMillan & Schumacher, 1997). At the end
of any free imaginative variation session, however, the participant should feel
100% convinced, in the name of internal validity or credibility (Siegle,
n.d.c), that the essential themes are indeed valid and reliable, that they
define the essence of the phenomenon (van Manen, 1990). That’s the best a
researcher can do.
The term interpretation,
or hermeneutics, however, may still make one wonder about validity. Although
free imaginative variation, bracketing, peer debriefing, participant review,
objectivity, subjectivity, field notes, contact summaries, and memos addressed
validity issues, a few other considerations remain.
Other Considerations
McMillan and Schumacher
(1997) discuss validity in terms of the degree that the researcher’s discovered
phenomenon match reality, i.e., the degree that the themes I discovered matched
the realities of participants’ lived experience (see, e.g., Siegle, n.d.a). To
that end, I needed to conduct quality interviews. Hence, I conducted the
interviews in the comfort and familiarity of places participants chose
(McMillan & Schumacher, 1997). Arthur chose a room at his workplace, Thomas
a table on his veranda, and Elizabeth her kitchen table. Further, I spoke in
the language of the participants as an indigenous-insider (Banks, 1998), as a
fellow creative writer.
Not in the geographical sense, but in
the intellectual sense, I am an “indigenous-insider” (Banks, 1998, p. 8) as one
who “endorses the unique values, perspectives, behaviors, beliefs, and
knowledge of his or her indigenous community and culture and is perceived by
people within the community as a legitimate community member who can speak with
authority about it” (p. 8). I am a published poet and novelist. Therefore, the
use of “low-inference descriptors” (McMillan & Schumacher, 1997, p. 406)
was a simple matter. By low-interference terms I refer to “those used and
understood by the participant” (p. 406). Those terms stand “in contrast to the
abstract language of a researcher” (p. 406). The ethical thing, in terms of
respect and good communication, is to “consider your audience” (Theocratic School
Guidebook, 1971, p. 112). Understandably, my studies contain “verbatim
accounts of conversations and precise descriptions of actions by [the]
participant[s]” (McMillan & Schumacher, 1997, p. 406).
My
efforts as referred to in the last two paragraphs resulted in good
communication and understanding between the participants and me, and my efforts
to use low-interference terms in this text should promote reader comprehension.
Readers often find themselves confused by statistical applications and concepts
in studies (see, e.g., Steel & Ovalle, 1984). These statistical descriptors
can definitely cloud communication from the researcher to any reader with no
formal knowledge of probability and statistics; however, even a reader with no
training in quantitative or qualitative educational research should find my
studies and this monograph relatively easy to understand.
Participants’
language, as quotes from transcribed tape recordings of interviews (McMillan
& Schumacher, 1997), is an important element of this monograph and my
research process. Other important elements also deserve mention. I kept field
journals (containing field notes, contact summaries, and memos), which recorded
my comments about the trustworthiness of the data (1997). The journals also
recorded my thoughts, reactions, and questions related to the entire research
process of the three studies (1997). An audibility file, however, on a far
grander scale, contains more than these thoughts, reactions, and questions;
such a file contains a comprehensively recorded trail of decisions (1997; and
Davis 1997a). During each study, I compiled an audibility file. The three files
were available to my respective peer debriefer(s), who provided frequent checks
for rigor, frequent pro-active checks, designed to address threats to
validity along the way (Morse et al., 2002).
This
pro-active approach addresses triangulation of a sort (Myers, 1997). If a
variety of informants in action research addresses the spirit of triangulation
(Arminio, 2002; and Dick, 1999), then agreement between participant,
researcher, and peer debriefer in a phenomenological study addresses the same
spirit. Really, if “both an interview and a survey can be used to provide
convergent validity information” (Pogson, Bott, Ramakrishnan, & Levy, 2002,
p. 2), then all three of researcher analysis and participant review (a sort of
survey, albeit, one-to-one/researcher-to-participant) and peer debriefing can
provide convergent validity, just as both researcher interpretation (another
sort of survey, in the context of free imaginative variation) and peer
debriefing can provide the same.
Before
I rest my argument in defense of my study’s validity, I will discuss a few
ethical considerations.
Ethics1
Prior
to the collection of data for the studies, I printed off letters of
introduction and information and Informed Consent Forms (Appendix A) that were
provided to the participants (Research, n.d.). The letters of information
detailed potential benefits and risks to the participants; sampling criteria;
what the participants would be asked to do; who would have access to the
participants’ responses; how anonymity would be addressed; how confidentiality
would be addressed (Ethics, 1998); and how long data would be stored and when
and how it would be destroyed. Studies that do not report how their researchers
dealt with anonymity/confidentiality issues (see, e.g., Bowman, Manoogian,
& Driscoll, 2002; Chairs, McDonald, Shroyer, Urbanski, & Vertin, 2002;
Comer, 2002; Mark, Daniel, & Parcell, 2002; and Rohs, Stribling, &
Westerfield, 2002) attract criticism from readers. Researchers who address
these issues in their published studies (see, e.g., Hare & Skinner 1999)
promote good research habits in the academic community.
Chapter Fifteen: Conclusions—What
the Participants Did Not Say
Many
events in school encouraged Arthur to become a creative writer. Few encouraged
Thomas. Quite a few encouraged Elizabeth. I describe many of these events and
the themes that they support, but first I would like to discuss what the
participants did not say.
What Arthur Did Not Say
I
wondered if Arthur would describe creative writing activities as examples of
lived school experiences that had encouraged him to become a creative writer.
Interestingly, he mentioned none. Does that mean teachers offered no creative
writing activities? During one participant review session, Arthur said teachers
had very rarely asked students to write poems or stories of fiction. In my
elementary and high school experience, teachers seldom set up creative
writing classes, although I do recall one of note. As I related in Chapter
Thirteen: Tying up My Own Biases, my grade 12 English substitute teacher asked
us students to write a poem about absolutely anything that we wished to write
about. My poem confused him, but his genuine interest in and validation of my
work convinced me I wanted to be a writer from that day forward. Margaret
Atwood also relates a grade 12 English creative writing event as significant,
although in the context of finally she was beginning to shine as an English
student. Her teacher said, “This must be a very good poem, dear, because I
can’t understand a word of it” (Polanyi, 2002, p. 62).
Arthur
did not refer to the kinds of creative writing activities I have found on Web
sites (see Chapter Twelve: Bracketing and Phenomenology) and did not describe
any specific creative writing activities that had encouraged him. He did not
refer to assignments similar to the ones in my creative writing course (Lukiv,
1997), although he did mention significant writing assignments, which I refer
to later (Chapter Sixteen: Conclusions—Arthur’s Themes). He did not mention
school activities about his sending submissions to editors, nor did he mention
classroom publication activities that encouraged him to further study creative
writing. He mentioned no encouragement through contact with a teacher who had
been a creative writer.
But
Arthur did mention several examples of events in school that had encouraged him
to take up creative writing later in life. I describe the themes that those
events support in Chapter Sixteen: Conclusions—Arthur’s Themes.
What Thomas Did Not Say
Thomas
did not say that many events in elementary and high school encouraged him to
take up creative writing later in life. I was, therefore, not surprised, during
participant review, that he fully agreed with Birney (1966), who says school
can discourage some potential creative writers. In some cases they feel forced,
Birney says, to drop out of high school to learn elsewhere the art and craft of
creative writing. Another study could explore events that discourage students
from taking up writing seriously. Study II, however, explored the opposite.
Unlike Arthur’s and Elizabeth’s essential
themes, Thomas’ essential theme does not refer to specific Language Arts events
as sources of encouragement. It does not refer to comments by teachers about
his writing nor to his contact with a teacher-writer, nor to freedom of choice
of reading material, nor to specialized events such as films, live plays, or
Christmas concerts.
What Elizabeth Did Not Say
Arthur is unique. So is
Thomas. So is Elizabeth, in terms of what psychological, sociological,
biological, spiritual, educational, physical, genetic, economic, and other
forces drove her (Zunker, 1998). Not surprisingly, her themes listed alongside
Arthur’s and Thomas’ reveal her distinctiveness.
She
did not speak about events in school that had promoted the joy and wonder of
silent reading of poetry and fiction (Arthur’s Theme One). She did not use
words such as joy or wonder in her themes. She did not refer to events (Arthur’s
Theme Two) in which teachers had read poetry and fiction or led the students in
singsongs. She did not speak about events that had promoted the wonder of uninterrupted
language experiences (Arthur’s Theme Three). She did not speak about events
that had promoted the intrigue and wonder of flights of imagination fuelled by
the connotative and imagistic value of words (Arthur’s Theme Four).
Neither
did she use the word intrigue. Her themes do not celebrate imagination in the
same way Arthur’s Theme Four does. Clearly, however, she had put her
imagination to work to write creatively (e.g., poems, stories, and plays). She
did not use words such as connotative and imagistic. I’m not surprised. Arthur
is a poet, Elizabeth, predominantly, a fiction writer. My experience tells me
that poets need first a deep understanding of the connotative, evocative, and
imagistic value of words (Drury, 1991), whereas fiction writers need first a
deep understanding of character and drama (Block, 1979).
Elizabeth did not refer to
events that had promoted the excitement of verbally punning and joking and of
informing others about what she had read and learned (Arthur’s Theme Five).
Arthur spoke of events that had promoted the joy and exhilarating freedom of
his writing down his thoughts and feelings based on poetry and fiction read and
having those thoughts and feelings valued by teachers (Arthur’s Theme Six).
Elizabeth did not use words such as “joy” and “exhilarating freedom” when she
spoke about her writing experiences.
Elizabeth enjoyed a
variety of reading experiences, but she did not refer to events that promoted
the exhilarating freedom of choice of reading material (Arthur’s Theme Seven).
Neither did she refer to events that promoted the satisfaction and excitement
of receiving sound direction about how to write well from compassionate
teachers (Arthur’s Theme Eight); however, three of her themes imply that some
of her teachers had valued her work (Themes One, Two and Four).
Like Arthur and Thomas,
she did not mention school activities that had involved teachers’ sending her
creative writing to editors or publishing her work in print. Neither did she
mention encouragement through a teacher who had been a creative writer,
although one of her themes refers to an established writer, not her teacher,
who had encouraged her.
She
did not say that any teacher had demanded the best of her as a human being
(part of Thomas’ broad, single theme). She did not say that any teacher had
valued her as a unique person, or had encouraged her to be the best that she
could be (also part of Thomas’ theme).
Chapter Sixteen:
Conclusions—Arthur’s Themes
1)
Events in school that promoted the joy and wonder of silent reading of poetry
and fiction encouraged Arthur to become a creative writer. 2) Events that
promoted the joy and wonder of listening to poetry and fiction fluently read
aloud and of listening to songs encouraged him.
3) Events that promoted the wonder of uninterrupted language experiences
and 4) that promoted the intrigue and wonder of flights of imagination fuelled
by the connotative and imagistic value of words encouraged him. 5) Events that
promoted the excitement of verbally punning and joking and of informing others
about what he had read and learned encouraged him and 6) so did events that
promoted the joy and exhilarating freedom of writing down his thoughts and
feelings based on poetry and fiction read and having those thoughts and feelings
valued by teachers. 7) Events that promoted the exhilarating freedom of choice
of reading material and 8) that promoted the satisfaction and excitement of
receiving sound direction about how to write well from compassionate teachers
encouraged Arthur to become a creative writer. Words in these themes such
as “joy,” “wonder,” “intrigue,” “excitement,” “exhilarating,” and “satisfaction”
describe feelings Arthur had. I chose those words through my analysis of the
data and through repeated participant reviews. Each of those “steps” helped
establish the themes’ validity and reliability. Really, no word, including the
aforementioned “feeling” words, remained in the themes unless they were Arthur’s
words in the sense that in each case he could say, “Yes. That’s exactly how
that theme should read.”
I
will now discuss those themes and events that support each of those themes.
Theme One.
Arthur was encouraged by events in school that
promoted the joy and wonder of silent reading of poetry and fiction. The words “joy”
and “wonder” show he enjoyed “the benefits and pleasures of ... reading” (The
Ministry, 1996a, 1996b, 1996c, p. 1). The Ministry’s three guides refer to
those benefits and pleasures repeatedly. In fact, Arthur remembered “reading
more than writing.” He spoke about how he had become “intrigued with literature
... .Books…were important, ... always intriguing ... because ... people ... in literature, in writing, ... in
poetry, and in adventures” were more intriguing than, he felt, himself.
I asked
if reading in one grade stood out from another. He said no. He had loved “literature.
Poetry,” especially “poetics ... .Even though I was reading, say an adventure
story [like Tarzan], the poetic imagery that came through was important
to me.”
He
remembered other specific reading texts. He said, “I took English 91 which I
think is [now] called English 12 or Lit 12,” and he recalled reading Beowulf
in class. He had loved “silent reading” opportunities of such fine
works. He recalled feeling intrigued by great writing such as the work of Ralph
Waldo Emerson and the fiction of D. H. Lawrence. The imagery of their texts, of
a myriad of good texts, had intrigued him to the point of fascination.
That
fascination had transcended the arousal of curiosity found in intrigue. In
participant review sessions, Arthur described feelings of joy and wonder rather
than just intrigue as the most accurate emotions that had often filled him as
he read in school. On reflection, I relate to his feelings. I too felt joy and
wonder during silent reading of many texts in school. I felt such a wide and
powerful range of emotions while reading that I wanted to know how people can
write with such expertise (see Chapter Thirteen: Tying up My Own Biases).
Theme Two.
Events in school that promoted the joy and wonder of
listening to poetry and fiction fluently read aloud and of listening to songs
encouraged Arthur to become a creative writer. Although he frequently used the
word intrigued during his interviews, he substituted joy and wonder for it
during participant review. He said, “I remember songs ... that we used to sing.
I was intrigued with the words. ... ’Put your left foot in, put your left foot
out.’ ‘I’m a little teapot.’ Things like that. I can remember the words of
stories. ... I was intrigued ... by the teacher who would read to us. I loved
listening to the voice.... I fell in love with the voice.... Loved listening.”
Although these singsong events helped establish a “resource-rich learning
environment” (The Ministry, 1996a, p. 8; 1996b, p 9; 1996c, p. 10) for Arthur,
The Ministry’s three guides do not specifically encourage Language Arts
teachers to consider the benefits of singsongs.
“The
fun part of language ... was,” for Arthur, “always ... the intriguing ... .sound
that words made.” Sometimes he didn’t know the meaning of a “word, but [he] was
just intrigued with the sound, how it would move through [his] ear, how it
would sound when [he] said it, and then putting ... words together.” Arthur
distinctly recalled an early intermediate experience of his teacher reading
aloud a Pauline Johnson poem and how the words had opened up “wonderful
feelings” inside of him while he had been “swept along by the reading.” He had “loved
the sound of the word in poetry, and he had “loved music too, but ... hearing
the words really, really clearly ... was always the intriguing part for
[Arthur].”
He
did not recall participating in the singing of songs, most often sung in the
primary grades; however, he did recall “listening, and being very cognizant of
this.” One of the feelings he had while the students sang was “isolation, being
alone, but being brought into the classroom by the sound of ... music and the
words.” That made him “feel happy, ... inclusive.”
For Arthur
there was a certain musical quality to poetry read aloud. As he said, “What came through to me was the
word: the cadence, the music, ah, poetry reading, ... listening to the teacher
read out loud.” But he loved to hear fiction read aloud too. He mentioned, “In
grade eight the teacher read Treasure Island ... .I was intrigued by
the sound of the words and the way they fit into the picture I was building.
Even though the language is really difficult, I didn’t know all of the words,
... [and] that didn’t upset me.” Again Arthur referred to “the sound. It
was beautiful. It was ... like ... parrots. Colourful parrots flitting about
... .That was the feeling I had with the language. Colourful parrots just
flitting about. Moving. Moving. Intriguing.” [Arthur moved his hands about as
if the parrots were flitting about before him.] The joy and wonder he had felt
in school clearly filled him during the interview.
I,
too, had an experience in school, in grade seven, in which our teacher read
fiction aloud, and that experience, like Arthur’s, encouraged me to become a
writer. My grade seven teacher read aloud A Christmas Carol by Charles
Dickens. As I mentioned in Chapter Thirteen: Tying up My Own Biases, I remember
saying to myself , “I don’t know who this Dickens guy is, but he sure knows
what he’s doing.” I wanted to know how one goes about using the printed word to
make others feel emotion. The wonder of that grew inside me through junior high
school. I wanted to know how one writes words that make people feel so deeply
they cannot forget the stories.
Jack
Hodgins (1993) also had a somewhat similar experience. In his A Passion for
Narrative: A Guide for Writing Fiction, he describes a teacher reading to
his class as an example of a school experience that encouraged him to become a
writer of fiction:
Books were forms of magic,
once you could read them. From the moment I’d learned to read, I wanted to be
one of those people who put magic between the covers!
In high school, the young
English teacher who had introduced us to the poetry of Robert Frost and the
essays of Roderick Haig-Brown persuaded the school board to buy five copies of The
Old Man and the Sea for the school library. Then—perhaps he wasn’t sure we’d
make use of them otherwise—he read one of those copies aloud. Something during
that reading—which he strung out over several days, as I recall—a longing that
had been with me all my life suddenly took on sharper focus: I would devote my
life to the writing of serious fiction. (1993, p. 13)
Arthur,
like Jack Hodgins and me, was encouraged to take up creative writing, in part,
because of being read to in school. The Ministry says “the learning environment
should ... foster enjoyment of language in all its aspects” (1996a, 1996b,
1996c, p. 2). For Arthur, his being read to fostered such enjoyment. The
Ministry’s (1992) Primary Program: Resource Document says, “Resource
implications emphasize ... reading to children” (p. 182).
Because
of the flowing nature of being read to, generally an uninterrupted flow of
words, Theme Two relates to Theme Three.
Theme Three
Arthur was encouraged to become a creative writer
through events in school that promoted the wonder of uninterrupted language
experiences. These experiences allowed him to truly consider himself in relation
to others and the environment, and to consider his own thoughts and feelings
without having to step out of his considerations to answer teachers’ questions.
For Arthur, these experiences were definitely beneficial and encouraging. The
Ministry (1996a, 1996b, 1996c) does refer to many videos—plays and movies—and
to much reading material that could serve as excellent resources for
uninterrupted language experiences.
Arthur
said:
“The very first experience I had was
a film, and it was in grade one, and I was five years old, and it was a film
about a milkman. [Laughs.] And I was intrigued by the images on the screen, but
also by the voice. I remember it almost seemed like one of those CBC announcer’s
voices ... .There was a guy named Morry Westgate that used to be the voice for
the NHL hockey games. I think he would sell ESSO oil or something. But I loved
his voice. And I’m sure it was his voice, or someone like that, a very trained
... CBC radio voice. And I could just hear the cadence, you know, rise and fall
of the language. Of course I was turned on by the visual because I am visual
too, but I was also turned on by what I was hearing. And so, the voice ... describing
this milkman’s ordinary day ... wasn’t mundane for me. Hearing the words and
the language and the cadence and the rhythm ... .I can remember being intrigued
by the sound.”
When Arthur used the word intrigued, as he often did,
he often implicitly referred to wonder as part of the experience. In fact, in
participant review, Arthur chose the word “wonder” as opposed to “intrigue” as
the emotional element of Theme Three. Wonder takes the curiosity of intrigue
and adds surprise, even astonishment.
When
Arthur discussed Theme Two and Theme Three with me in participant review, he
agreed with me that both are related through sound-based events. But he
believed that Theme Three needs its own category apart from Theme Two. Theme
Three does not require any sound-based events, as in the case of uninterrupted
reading events.
Arthur
created a clear picture of his grade one uninterrupted experience by filling in
many other details:
“We were all taken down to this kind
of basement. It was very damp ... .I was aware of dampness and ... sounds and
... people’s movement—and smells ... .It was like going down into a dungeon in
a way ... .And it was a dark place. And those metal chairs ... would make that
scraping sound on the cement down below ... .I was intrigued. I was very
intrigued ... .I was definitely paying attention and I was into myself. Like I
knew there were people around me, and I knew I was part of a crowd. But I was
... one with the film and the experience ... .I was alone in a way. I was there
with other people, but I was kind of alone ... .Alone and experiencing things
... I had a feeling that other people weren’t around me because I was hearing
and seeing and smelling.”
This
uninterrupted experience allowed Arthur to be swept along with the sensory
information the event presented. In grade ten he watched Romeo and Juliet
during a class visit to The Queen Elizabeth Theatre in Vancouver, BC, and that
uninterrupted event also encouraged him to become a creative writer. He
revelled in the sound of the words and the imagery. They swept him along. The
wonder of the experience lives with him now. He had the same experience when
his teacher read a Pauline Johnson poem, and when his grade eight teacher read
aloud Treasure Island—the whole novel—over several classes. Arthur had
great lengths of time to create pictures in his mind and to revel in and wonder
about the imagery.
These
uninterrupted language experiences likely relate to flights of imagination
fuelled by the connotative and imagistic value of words, but in Arthur’s mind,
confirmed through participant review, these flights are elements of Theme Four.
Theme Four
Events in school that promoted the intrigue and wonder
of flights of imagination fuelled by the connotative and imagistic value of
words encouraged Arthur to become a creative writer. Sometimes those events
were simply Arthur left alone by his teacher to “daydream,” to play with words
in his head that a poem or story brought to his attention. He said, “[I] looked
out the window, formed pictures in my head.” Sometimes Arthur had been left
alone by the teacher to experience intrigue over the “connotative meanings and
the association with the rest of the sentence and the paragraph” that the
teacher and class had been considering.
These
were imaginative events for Arthur. Sometimes those events were a result of “teachers
that were ... focused ... on ... imagination” who respected Arthur’s need to
sit and daydream and imagine and play with the connotative and imagistic value
of words in his head from poems and stories considered in class. The Ministry,
in effect, supports such events through comments such as “the learning
environment should stimulate students’ imaginations” (1996a, 1996b, 1996c, p.
2). Arthur’s intrigue lay in the ability of those events “to arouse and hold
[his] interest or curiosity” (Intrigue, 1992, p. 514), and his wonder lay in
the ability of those events to create “a feeling of mingled surprise and
curiosity” (Wonder, 1992, p. 1132).
Theme Five
Arthur was encouraged to become a creative writer by
events in school that promoted the excitement of verbally punning and joking
and of informing others about what he had read and learned. The logic of
placing “punning,” “joking,” and “informing others” together in this theme
rests in their verbal expression. This logic states Arthur’s view as he
expressed himself in participant review. Direction related to this theme from
The Ministry comes from the following: Students need “to manipulate language
for ... expression. ... [And] students should ... have frequent opportunities
to talk ... about what they have learned ... from a variety of stories, poems,
essays, documents, and other media” (1996a, 1996b, 1996c, p. 3).
Arthur
said, “I remember punning as early as grade ... two or three. ... I was
twisting the language to suit myself and making jokes.” By grade six, he “was
becoming the class clown.” He explained, “I was quite funny. I would play on
what the teacher said, made fun of that. I would make fun of what people said.
So I became a little comedian.” Teachers who had allowed him, within reason, to
pun and joke, where actually furthering his “intrigue with language.”
Arthur
had been sharing a humanistic part of himself that others had showed
appreciation for through laughter. His sense of the ludicrous and incongruous,
his “humorous use of a word in a way that suggest[ed] two or more
interpretations” (Pun, 1994, p. 591), and his celebration of “the foibles and
inconsistencies of human nature” (Wit and Humor, 1993, p. 217) had brought him
reinforcement that he had thoroughly enjoyed, that he had found exciting. “There
was great humour,” he said about a senior English teacher’s class. “[My
teacher] encouraged humour in me. She encouraged me to say things. Because I
would often say weird things and get the kids laughing.” I asked, “So her
validation of humour: You feel that encouraged you to become a writer?” “Yes.
... I think that writing involves a huge sense of humour. Humour is a sense of
the world.”
He
broke down, emotionally overcome, when he related how in grade ten English he
had shared his knowledge in class. “I was putting my hand up,” he related, “and—irrelevant
information. I had just tons of it. I was reading dictionaries, encyclopaedias.
Ah, ... I’m just emotional right now.” He had to stop to compose himself. The
experience of informing others had created a wonderful sense of accomplishment
in Arthur.
Arthur’s
punning, joking, and informing has a definite entertainment value that I relate
to. In grade five, I played my guitar for my class (see Chapter Thirteen: Tying
up My Own Biases). The exhilaration of entertaining those students was almost
more than I could stand. For me, events in school that promoted the excitement
of entertaining others encouraged me to become a creative writer. This broad
statement does not focus on the entertainment value of only words. For Arthur,
however, Theme Five draws squarely on the excitement of punning, joking, and
informing through the use of words.
Theme Six
Events in school that promoted the joy and
exhilarating freedom of writing down his thoughts and feelings based on poetry
and fiction read and having those thoughts and feelings valued by teachers
encouraged Arthur to become a creative writer. This theme draws support from
The Ministry through many statements. For example, “As students come to
understand and use language more fully, they are able to enjoy the benefits and
pleasures of ... writing. ... Students should ... feel that their ideas are
valued. ... An English Language Arts program should encourage students to ... communicate
effectively in written ... forms” (1996a, 1996b, 1996c, pp. 1-2).
Many
events that support Theme Six had come from Arthur’s English classes in grades
10 to 13. Arthur spoke of “writing about the poem, ... elucidation ... .paragraph
work ... .some essays.” I asked, “Would you say that writing about poems
encouraged you to become a writer?” “Yes. ... Because one of the things it did
is it helped me to figure out my own processes in writing. ... It was a
learning thing.”
His
grade 13 English teacher “was fantastic. ... We’d write,” he said, “about ... our
feelings. ... It was, how did you feel about ...? What did this make you think
about ...?” I added, “And to write about how you felt, to write about your
thoughts—” “Encouraged my feelings,” Arthur said, “to write about me and my
feelings. So that led to my writing and my poetry. My sense of writing as a
writer.”
He
recalled how, in general, other students had complained about writing
assignments based on their thoughts and feelings. But Arthur’s reaction had
been “Yippee! ... Here is a chance to express myself, not just verbally.” He
laughed. “I got A’s for saying things on paper! ... I was getting great
encouragement.” He spoke about how the English teachers for grades 10 to 13 had
said, “You’ve expressed this really well.” “And that encouraged me,” he said, “even
further to want to go on to express myself on paper more and more. ... If I
hadn’t had that encouragement, I might have become stultified as a writer. ... Perhaps
only gone so far.”
He
contrasted these teachers to others who had appeared to expect only limited
quality or limited depth of writing. These teachers had encouraged in Arthur an
unlimited quality and depth, an unlimited exploration of “language and
feelings.” They had encouraged him “to explore feelings with language. To
explore poetry. Especially poetry.”
These teachers “were all lovers and proponents of poetry, and great lovers of
... literature.” “They encouraged you,” I asked, “to express your feelings and
your thoughts about what you read?” “Not just orally,” he answered, “but ... on
paper. ... That expression on paper as a writer began to take hold. It’s ... like
... little drops from above that nestle down and ... if they’re immediately
noticed and encouraged, ... then great things come. But if I hadn’t been
encouraged, those drops would have ... just evaporated. And perhaps I wouldn’t
be where I am today.”
These
writing events promoted joy along with a sense of exhilarating freedom for
Arthur to express himself; also, teachers valued what Arthur had to say, and he
recognized that they valued it. My grade 12 poem-writing experience, described
in Chapter Thirteen: Tying up My Own Biases and Chapter Fifteen:
Conclusions—What the Participants Did Not Say, carries, to at least some
degree, joy and a sense of freedom, but I consider that experience more, much
more, as one of the events that promoted the joy of my ideas being appreciated,
or valued.
In view, then, of the thorough classroom
discussions Arthur had experienced that preceded his writing down his thoughts
and feelings, I have to say Arthur did describe rich and deep analyses of
creative writing in school as examples of experiences that had encouraged him.
I referred to the possibility of such experiences in Chapter Twelve: Bracketing
and Phenomenology. Simply put, these notable analyses
of poetry had helped germinate the thoughts and feelings Arthur included in his
writing—writing that his teachers had valued.
These
teachers created “frequent opportunities [for students] to talk and write about
what they [had] learned about themselves and others from a variety of stories
[and] poems” (The Ministry, 1996a, 1996b, 1996c, p. 3), providing their “students
greater self-awareness and a deeper appreciation of the richness and complexity
of human experience” (1996, p. 3; 1996b, p. 3; 1996c, p. 4).
Classroom
discussions, however, that focus on rich and deep analyses of creative writing
might prompt the reader to wonder if The Ministry’s approved resources that
chop up stories into elemental scraps of escapism, interpretation, plot, theme,
character, point of view, symbolism, and irony or into other scraps of subject,
verb, verbal, adverb, adjective, noun, pronoun, conjunction, preposition,
phrase, clause, antecedent, sentence fragment, object, infinitive, and punctuation,
or if teachers who chop up poems into bits of literary terminology such as
alliteration, assonance, caesura, dactyl, enjambement, feminine rhyme, free
verse, metaphor, and onomatopoeia (to refer to a relatively small number of
examples) were included in Arthur’s school experiences (see Chapter Twelve:
Bracketing and Phenomenology). Arthur mentioned discussions of poetics in his
senior English classes, which had included interpretations of and his personal
reactions to poetry, and likely had included discussions of literary terms, but
he mentioned nothing about chopping up stories, language, and poetry into
elemental or grammatical (or even literary) bits. I am not surprised, in view
of a place in one interview: He said, “The thing that I wasn’t good at was ... the
parsing of sentences and things like that.” “The grammatical?” I asked. “The
grammatical,” he said with certainty.
Theme Seven
Events in school that promoted the exhilarating
freedom of choice of reading material encouraged Arthur to become a creative
writer. The great variety of reading sources mentioned in The Ministry’s three
guides (1996a, 1996b, 1996c) provide ample freedom of choice for today’s
students.
Arthur
experienced Theme Seven’s exhilarating freedom of choice one day after school
when he was allowed to stay in his grade ten English classroom and read
whatever he wished from his teacher’s class library. “Four o’clock in the
afternoon, and I’m sitting there. I’d been sitting there ... since the end of
the bell for an hour. And on [my teacher’s] shelf there were a whole series of
books that I’d never heard of. I picked off the shelf Biccaccio’s Decameron.
... It was written in the ... plague years, and considered a bit of a naughty
book. ... [My teacher] was a very liberal lady. And that’s part of my intrigue
here.”
He
continued:
“The story is that [this] group of
people trying to escape the plague went up to a villa in Italy, where ... there
were no rats that carried the plague. ... It was a thick book. I’d never heard
of it before and it’s sitting on the shelf there. I ... was intrigued by the
title. I’ve always been intrigued by titles. This was ... the Decameron.
I thought, ‘Decameron? What could that be?’ So I picked it up and turned
to the middle, and I was reading a passage that was a bit naughty. ... Each of
these people in this village had to tell a story to keep themselves
entertained. So I think there’s ten times ten days, a hundred stories or
something like that. Each of them three or four pages long. At any rate, I’m
getting right into this. A ... boy with testosterone.”
The experience had allowed him to revel in and wonder
about the sexuality of male-female relationships, and to wonder about his own
adolescent sexuality. “I’m reading the stuff. I’m right into it. I’m totally
oblivious. I ... couldn’t even hear a sound. There was nobody else in the
world. And all of a sudden I looked up and there was [my teacher].”
I was captivated by his story and his
intensity. He said, “Now I’d expected because of my deep conservative religious
upbringing to be berated. That’s what my dad would have done. Or my mum ... .But
she just smiled and she sat down and she said, ‘What are you reading?’” Arthur
grew too emotional to continue. He needed time to “collect himself.” “It was
... a pivotal point for me. A really important point. My appreciation of not
just the word, but the freedom that comes with me and the word. ... It’s me and
the word and the word and me ... and it’s very inclusive.”
I
wondered: “Do you mean that you learned something in that experience about
language that you didn’t know before?”
“Oh, phenomenal. Phenomenal. Not so
much language, but, ... the freedom. This is the feeling I have. The freedom to
explore words and associations and thoughts and processes. Unbidden. Completely
free. Completely free to associate. To think. To read a word, to understand it,
to put words together. No constrictors. Nobody saying, ‘That’s bad. You can’t
do that. You can’t think that.’ I found that freedom in literature. I didn’t
find it at home. I didn’t find it in the…Church. I didn’t find it in school
generally because school generally was very logical, linear. But I found that
freedom that day. Well, many days, you know. There were experiences before
that, but that was a pivotal day for me. And I tell you, I thank [my
teacher]. ... That was just phenomenal. ... I’m ... still emotional
today about it. It was just mind-blowing.”
For
Arthur, the exhilarating freedom of his choosing Biccaccio’s Decameron
to read had translated into a Joycean epiphany—”the sudden awareness ... caused
by a simple, casual event that takes on a new and intense meaning” (Epiphany,
1993, p. 70). During one participant review session, Arthur described that he
believed the strictness of Catholicism, the strictness of home rules, and the
logical precision of math and science had formed a backdrop for encouraging him
to, in a sense, break out and enjoy the freedom of language expression, such as
the “naughty” anecdotes of Biccaccio’s Decameron. His teacher had not
criticized his choice of reading material. That had validated his choice. His
epiphany had told him that he could reach into the universe of literature and
choose what he pleased.
He
recalled his going out to buy Lady Chatterly’s Lover simply
because he had not been allowed to read it according to the Church and his
parents. In school, his freedom of choice of reading material became
exhilarating choices that introduced him to a vast and enchanting world of
language expression, some of which bore him up to question mainstream standards
of morality, ethics, religion, and politics.
Theme Eight
Arthur was encouraged to become a creative writer
through events in school that promoted the satisfaction and excitement of
receiving sound direction about how to write well from compassionate teachers.
He referred to English teachers from grades nine to thirteen who likely would
have agreed with The Ministry’s following comments:
By reflecting on their ideas and
using language to express them, students become more adept at expressive [and]
artistic ... thought and broaden their foundation of written ... use ... .Feedback
from others ... helps students assess their own language development. This
awareness motivates students to ... manipulate language for ... expression. (1996a,
pp. 2-3; 1996b, pp. 2-3; 1996c, p. 3)
“There were times when I didn’t
express things well,” Arthur said, “which of course was probably more important
as a writer. To be told that this wasn’t effectively said. Or this went
nowhere. They [(his teachers)] weren’t afraid to say those things. But all of
that was still encouragement as a writer. Because they were encouraging me
through their critiques to write better, to write more effectively, to write
more cogently, to write with feelings, to write with the whole mind and heart
and soul. … In other words, they weren’t Polly Anna in their encouragement.
They weren’t saying oh that’s fantastic … in everything I did. No, no. They ...
would take something of what I did, critique it, and then ask for something
better. So there was always this directional thing happening.” Arthur had found
these times of direction satisfying and exciting, but they stood out in
particular because of the compassion his teachers had showed him.
I too
have had compassionate teachers who have given me sound direction. One was
Canada’s Professor Harlow, who taught me fiction writing in 1976 at the
University of British Columbia, another was England’s D. M. Thomas, who taught
me poetry writing in 1996 at the Humber School for Writers, and another was the
USA’s Paul Bogdan, who taught me novel writing in 1997 at the Writer’s Digest
School of Writing. Arthur’s grade nine to thirteen English teachers encouraged
him to become a creative writer. These three teachers encouraged me to continue
learning my art and craft.
I
wondered in Chapter Twelve: Bracketing and Phenomenology if Arthur would
mention specific direction about how to write as an example of an
activity that had encouraged him to learn the art and craft of writing. In view
of Theme Eight, excellent direction from teachers clearly had encouraged him,
but he mentioned no specific how-to-writing direction. I also wondered in
Chapter Twelve if writing activities in school that motivate students to write
creatively encourage some to pursue creative writing. I cannot discuss this in
reference to Arthur because although his senior English teachers had encouraged
him to write down his thoughts and feelings about poetry and fiction he read in
class, he did not say the writing assignments had been designed to motivate him
to write creatively (What is Creative Writing?, 1999).
I
also wondered in Chapter Twelve if Arthur would mention activities that
addressed intrinsic motivation as examples that had encouraged him to take up
creative writing. Arthur did not explicitly mention such activities; however,
they must have existed. If intrinsic motivation refers to sufficient levels of
novelty, autonomy and expertise (Stipek, 1998) for the student, then the
writing activities in his senior English classes must have addressed intrinsic
motivation. Sound direction about how to write well from compassionate teachers
must have provided him with expertise. A great variety of reading material and
class discussion, all food for his writing of thoughts and feelings, must have
provided novelty. The exhilarating freedom he had felt about writing down his
thoughts and feelings implicitly refers to autonomy.
Chapter Seventeen:
Conclusions—Thomas’ Theme
During
the first participant review session of Study II, I presented a thematic
statement that eventually became Essential Theme One. Through repeated
participant review sessions, and through free imaginative variation, the theme
transformed into the following: One teacher (English 9, 10, and 11) who demanded
the best of Thomas as a human being, and who more than valued, but loved, saw
Thomas as a unique person, encouraged him to be the best that he could
be, and since he had always, going back as far he can remember, wanted to
write, that encouragement translated into his wanting to be the best writer
that he could be. The fact that she was a high school English teacher is not
relevant. If she had been a math teacher, he feels the effect would have been
the same. Her interest in him, her demanding nature, and her more than just
valuing Thomas as a person made such a deep impression on him that to this day
his memories of her classes remain a source of joy and motivation.
Thomas said, “I recently wrote her a letter.
... She’s retired now. ... I felt ... after forty years [I] really ought to say
thanks.” He referred to her as “a fabulous woman.” He implicitly defined what
he meant by fabulous in comments such as “she was able to ... go beyond the
visual. Look, I wasn’t a pleasant child [laughs]. Let’s not kid ourselves. ... I
was always in trouble. ... I came close to jail two or three times. But she was
not prepared to accept that.” She had expected more. Thomas said, “I was being
a smart ass one day, and I remember ... she just glanced over and said you’re
better than that. And that was it. And it had nothing to do with writing. It
just had to do with not being a smart ass.”
Interestingly,
Thomas had appreciated her demanding nature. “Let’s call her a hard ass,” he
said. “She was very strict, [a] very ... structured kind of person. And, oh!,
brutally honest. Just absolutely brutally honest. And if you were being a
doofus, she would tell you.” Thomas’ appreciated her as someone who had valued
him as an individual, but more than that, as someone who had loved, seen
Thomas as a unique individual. “I was in love with this woman, not ... from
... a romantic perspective. She was so good at drawing out what I had, and
[she] had a specific interest in me as a human being, not as a writer. ... She
was more interested in me and my capacity to become ... whatever.”
Thomas
had loved to write before this lady became his teacher, so her encouragement
for him to be the best that he could be had translated into his wanting to be
the best writer he could be. “I could write,” he said. “I cannot recall a time
when I could not write.” He remembered that “when [he] got to school in grade
one, [he] could read and write.” Thomas told me “[writing] was fun.” He had
taken pride in his writing ability. His experiences in this English teacher’s
classes had taught him to not only live up to her expectations, but to live up
to his own—which had been high indeed. They still are. To this day, Thomas is a
perfectionist as a poet; his work does not enter the public domain until he
feels completely sure it is worthy and substantial.
Are you surprised that this English teacher’s
valuing him as a worthy person had a positive influence on Thomas? Likely not.
Selma Wassermann speaks about fine teachers who hold “deep respect for the
dignity of the learner—for his individuality” (1987, p. 177). Such a fine
teacher “communicates a genuine prizing and valuing of [each] student” (p.
177). In Chapter Twelve: Lukiv’s Principles of Instruction of The Master
Teacher: A Collection, I, too, speak about fine teachers who value and
respect students and who honour their individuality (2001c). Also, fine
teachers “maintain high expectations” (Kellough & Kellough, 1999, p. 45),
encouraging each student to be the best that he or she can be.
Are
you surprised that this English teacher expressed love for her students? Likely
not. In the words of one experienced teacher, “Good teaching is not a matter of
specific techniques or styles, plans or actions. ... Teaching is primarily a
matter of love” (as qtd. in Set the Pattern for You, 2002, p. 10; see, also,
Jackson, 2003; and Worboys, 2003). Thomas still appreciates his English teacher’s
fine qualities as an educator, proven in the fact that , forty years after
being her student, he wrote a letter thanking her. Her response, a letter that
he showed me, remains a precious reminder of the past.
Are you also surprised that Thomas referred to his
English 9, 10, and 11 teacher as an individual who had encouraged him,
whereas he referred to memories of her classroom as a source of
motivation? In view of my comments in Chapter Nine: The Nature of
Encouragement, perhaps you, like me, are not surprised at all. If, as I
mentioned in that chapter, to encourage means “to inspire with courage and hope”
(Encourage, 1994, p. 251), and to motivate means “to provide with a motive” or
to “impel” (Motivate, 1994, p. 480), then doesn’t that imply that, at least
generally, encouragement refers more to personal attention than motivation? In
that sense, then, don’t people inspire people, whereas stimuli
motivate them?
Chapter Eighteen:
Conclusions—Elizabeth’s Themes
1) Several teachers
encouraged Elizabeth to write, giving her lots of opportunities to write poetry
and stories, even to write plays that were performed at Christmas concerts for
the community. 2) Several teachers read her writing—even non-assigned work that
she brought to school that she’d written at home—aloud, to provide students
with examples of good writing, and sometimes those teachers had Elizabeth read
her own work aloud, to provide the same. 3) Memories of special events—for
example, Christmas concerts—encouraged her by providing a child’s (her)
perspective as resource material for later writing. 4) One teacher sent her
writing to author and feminist Nellie McClung, who praised her work, and later
in life, when Elizabeth realized the noteworthy stature of this individual in
Canadian history, she felt greatly encouraged. 5) A variety of reading
experiences (poems, stories, non-fiction), which included encyclopaedias that
her humble one-room school was able to inherit from an estate, helped instil a
love of stories and a quest for knowledge, which gave her subjects to write
about.
Phrases in these themes such as “greatly
encouraged,” “instil a love,” and “a quest for knowledge” are Elizabeth’s
choices, not mine. I wrote up tentative themes through my analysis. My peer
debriefer found them valid products of my qualitative data; in participant
review, so did Elizabeth (van Manen, 1990). She modified them through participant
review at the analysis and interpretation stages. A modification for any given
theme amounted to a change in a single word or many words, thereby establishing
their reliability (McMillan & Schumacher, 1997). Researcher-participant
agreement asserts a sort of reliability, researcher-participant-peer debriefer
agreement another sort.
Theme One
Several teachers encouraged Elizabeth to write, giving
her lots of opportunities to write poetry and stories, even to write plays that
were performed at Christmas concerts for the community. Here are excerpts from
my interview with Elizabeth that support this statement:
*****
D: Were there any
experiences in school…that encouraged you to become a writer?
E: Yes. …
D: Is there any place you’d
like to start?
E: I’d like to say [that
in] grade one, grade two, maybe even grade three, there wasn’t very much for me
as far as writing went. … I wasn’t encouraged at that time because you’re learning
how to write, learning how to do your phonetics. … So there wasn’t much
in the first three years. But when I got into four, five to eight, … certainly
every teacher I had … made a point of encouraging me.
D: Every teacher?
E: Yes. …
D: In what way did these
individuals encourage you?
E: Well, they would give
out a title, and ask … our English class to write about it. … And, of course, I
could quite easily. I never had any trouble finding any material in my mind to
put to the title.
D: You were never stuck
for ideas.
E: Oh, no.
Later in the interview:
E: I was asked to write a
play for the Christmas concert every year.
D: Every year.
E: Uh huh.
D: And that play would be
performed for the school?
E: Uh huh.
D: And right from nine
years of age and up [to 13] would you have been doing that?
E: Yes. … Well, maybe from
ten years and up. …
D: Did you find that doing
those sorts of things encouraged you later in life?
E: Oh, definitely.
D: Definitely.
E: Yes, because I found
that I was writing poetry, I was writing plays, I was writing stories, and I
found it was just as easy for me to write one as another. And, of course, if I
had a little inspiration, I could write it any way I wanted.
D: Whether poetry or fiction or drama. …
E: Oh, yes. … It made me
quite eager to do it, really. I got satisfaction out of it.
D: Did that eagerness grow
through those years?
E: Yes, it has.
D: What I meant was, did
that eagerness grow up through grade eight?
E: Yes. …
D: And when you think back
upon those events, and the eagerness, you mentioned that word—the eagerness you
had—do you feel that translated into encouragement later in life?
E: Oh, yes. I feel the
same eagerness now when I think of something to write. …
D: Now, is there anything
in particular about those individuals that stands out in your mind that you
find contributes to this encouragement you’re speaking of? For example, these
three [teachers] asked you to do assignments. Was there anything about those
individuals that sparked this encouragement?
E: Well, I think the fact
that they were interested in the fact that I liked to write. They liked to
encourage me.
D: So they were interested
in your interest.
E: Uh, huh. I think they
looked at it as a learning experience for me and a teaching experience for them
that they could instil this in someone, in a child at school. But, I don’t know
if you could instil it in any child. You see, a lot of children don’t really
have the feeling for writing, … which I
always had. But on the other hand, they couldn’t instil interest in mathematics
in me. Not a bit. …
*****
Elizabeth was the right seed in the right environment.
The encouragement to write that her teachers—through grades four to eight—gave
her remains, even seven decades later, an encouragement for her to continue
writing.
Theme Two
Several teachers
read her writing—even non-assigned work that she brought to school that she’d
written at home—aloud, to provide students with examples of good writing, and
sometimes those teachers had Elizabeth read her own work aloud, to provide the
same. The
following excerpt helps establish this theme:
*****
E: [In grades four through eight,
teachers] would read my work out to the class and say this is the way we would
like you to present your stories when you write.
D: Are you saying that teachers used
your work as an example for others?
E: Yes. They seemed to [often] do
that. … I think there must have been some way that I put things down that
pleased them. …
D: So, having your work read, as an
example, did you find that an encouragement to write?
E: Well, I think I must have had a
bit of ego. … I must have got some ego [boost] from it. [Reading my work aloud]
impressed me a little bit. I have to say that. … And, of course, with that sort
of ego I wanted to do more and more and more all the time. So I was writing an
awful lot. I was writing at home. I’d sit down and write.
D: Those were self-made assignments?
…
E: That I did at home?
D: Yes.
E: Oh, yes. They would be.
Mostly what I wanted to do, because I’d seen something and I would write
[about] it, and if I was asked [by a teacher] if I had written anything I’d
read it.
*****
Elizabeth
felt happy to read her work aloud to students when she was in grades four to
eight. Such endorsement of Elizabeth’s writing abilities spawned an
encouragement to write that yet drives her.
Theme Three
Memories of
special events—for example, Christmas concerts—encouraged her by providing a
child’s (her) perspective as resource material for later writing. This theme,
like the other four, highlights how events in school may manifest an effect on
students later in life (McMillan & Schumacher, 1997). The next excerpt
provides examples of the sorts of events that Elizabeth as an adult writer
could draw on while conjuring up works of fiction.
*****
E: [One teacher was] wonderful, just a wonderful girl
from [ ]. And when she came into our
community to teach at our school, she taught us all—what would you call
it—dancing … ethnic dancing. Russian. Dutch. Scottish. I did a lot of highland
dancing because of what she had instilled in us.
D: Would you perform … for the students?
E: Not for the students, but for the
community and the parents. We’d have these concerts at the [ ] Hall along with [ ] School, which was south of us.
D: You enjoyed those performances?
E: Yes, very much so.
D: Do you think those experiences you
mentioned have anything to do with encouraging you to become a writer?
E: I think they do. And I think the
memory of them helps a lot. Once you could keep them in your memory, you could
write something about them.
D: I see. It’s encouraging to have those memories
because you can write about those memories?
E: Oh, yes. It’s like going into a
little encyclopaedia. … The memory is there. The story’s there. … You can pull
it out and enlarge upon it.
D: Are you saying that memories from
school … [are] memories … you can use in your writing later in life?
E: Yes. … I go into that as a
resource centre, to pick out things that I knew as a child, but would never
know now, because I’m not in that atmosphere anymore. It’s there, and I’ve kept
it there, and I can use it.
D: School provided you with those
experiences?
E: I would think so. … One of the
teachers we had after [ ] was [ ]. She was a marvellous piano player. And my
mother insisted, quite wrongly, that I take piano lessons, which I took for
three years, and I still can’t play [well], you know. But there’s a memory. And
I’ll never forget that I … play[ed] at [school] Christmas concerts …
D: Are there any other
examples that come to mind?
E: Funny things happen,
especially at the Christmas concerts that were put on by the school. … Because
I could write a few dramas, I wrote. I always remember one that I wrote for a
school concert, and it was using nursery rhymes. I don’t even remember how I
correlated them now. But … there was one [part] which I gave to myself because
I was quite athletic, and I was Jack jumped over the candlestick. Jack be
nimble, Jack be quick. Jack jump over the candlestick. I didn’t get over the
candlestick. I knocked it over and set the curtains on fire. [laughs] Which is
another memory that I can always draw on, if I need it.
D: That happened at the hall concert.
E: Yes, the hall emptied very
quickly. [we laugh] I was dirt for a little while, but it was all right.
D: You’ve come back a few times to
these memories, experiences. … Resources, you called them.
E: Yes. …
*****
Elizabeth has written stories about
children. No doubt her experiences at school, coupled with childhood
experiences outside of school, have given her abundant material to help her
delineate/define children’s perspectives. No doubt memories of those
experiences have given her material to help her create realistic dialogue and
scenes and believable characters.
Theme Four
One teacher sent her writing to
author and feminist Nellie McClung, who praised her work, and later in life,
when Elizabeth realized the noteworthy stature of this individual in Canadian
history (Cranny
& Moles, 2001; and Fielding & Evans, 2000), she felt
greatly encouraged. Nellie McClung had written a comic novel, entitled Sowing Seeds in
Danny (1908), that sold 100,000 copies—a bestseller even today. This
successful writer, this international icon for the women’s movement, endorsed
young Elizabeth’s writing. Her teacher had sent her work to McClung
when Elizabeth was about 12 or 13 years old. During our interview, Elizabeth had forgotten
about her “contact” with McClung, but later she e-mailed me about it. Here is
part of that correspondence:
It was [a teacher] who embarked me
upon the idea of submitting some of my classroom writing exercises to author
Nellie McClung of Manitoba. … I did get a reply from Mrs. McClung—in fact … there
was more than one letter from her. At that age, I probably did not appreciate
the value of such a prestigious contact, but … I do now …!
I realise that this e-mail, as data, stands outside
the interview I conducted with Elizabeth. But for me to eliminate Theme Four
from the list of themes that define the phenomenon that encouraged Elizabeth
does not seem reasonable. Patton (1987) speaks about “document analysis … from
… correspondence” (p. 7) as an acceptable type of qualitative research.
I
admit that in Study I, I defended conducting interviews with, rather than
soliciting relevant text from, the participant:
Why did I conduct an interview as
opposed to having the participant write to me? Van Manen (1990) warns that “writing
forces the person into a reflective attitude—in contrast to face-to-face
conversation in which people are much more immediately involved” (p. 64). I
chose not to create a situation in which “this reflective attitude together
with the linguistic demands of the writing process” (p. 64) placed “certain
constraints on the free obtaining of lived-experience descriptions” (p. 64). I
chose instead to use well-established interview methodology.
Elizabeth’s interview, however, brought her so
emotionally and intellectually close to her childhood experiences at school
that her e-mail data, unsolicited by me, was natural for her to write;
likewise, it is natural for water to bubble from a fountain (New World
Translation, 1984, John 4:14). Really, “the linguistic demands of the
writing process” were no detriment to her telling, in relatively few words, a
relevant experience simply and, in her mind, accurately.
Note, too, that Theme Four did not
arise from a biased comment from me, nor did it arise from experiences outside
of school that had encouraged Elizabeth to become a writer. I applied the same
rigorous analysis to that e-mail as I did to the interview. Elizabeth verified,
through participant review, Theme Four as valid. In terms of reliability,
Elizabeth slightly altered the original theme I came up with, to make the final
draft “just right.” Through free imaginative variation, she verified the theme
as essential; therein, my interpretation stands as trustworthy (Guba &
Lincoln, 1982; see, also, Siegle, n.d.c). My peer debriefer found the theme
valid and reliable and viewed it as a natural consequence of Elizabeth’s
thinking about the sorts of experiences that had encouraged her to become a
creative writer. Elizabeth, my peer debriefer, and I, therefore, defined a
triangle of agreement: the theme is in.
I
relate, by the way, to Elizabeth’s feeling encouraged by Nellie McClung’s
comments. The encouragement I felt through my contact with Professor Robert
Harlow (see Chapter Thirteen: Tying up My Own Biases) had a profound effect on
me as an apprentice writer almost thirty years ago. Professor Harlow commended
me for what I was doing right in my fiction, and explained what I was doing
wrong. In terms of conflict, characterisation, theme, style, and other
elements, he was very specific. People in my social circle had read some of my
work, but I didn’t benefit much from general comments such as, “It seems pretty
good.” Specific commendation and direction from an established writer meant a
lot to me.
Interestingly,
McClung didn’t learn about her effect on Elizabeth; neither has Harlow learned
about his effect on me. I am reminded of a comment by McMillan and Schumacher
(1997, p. 26): “It is often said that we do not ultimately know the effects of
schooling because these effects may occur years later outside an educational
setting.” In participant review, Elizabeth confirmed that her contact with
Nellie McClung had encouraged her over many years of writing, and encourages
her even now, seven decades later; likewise, my contact with Professor Harlow
has encouraged me throughout my career as a writer, and encourages me even now,
three decades later.
Theme Five
A variety of reading experiences
(poems, stories, non-fiction), which included encyclopaedias that her humble
one-room school was able to inherit from an estate, helped instil a love of
stories and a quest for knowledge, which gave her subjects to write about. In
an e-mail, Elizabeth sent me the following:
Our little school was fortunate that
the school board—a Chairman, a Secretary and one or two Trustees—was far
sighted enough to obtain a set of Encyclopaedia Brittanica from someone’s
estate here in [ ]. We were the only school
for miles around with a set of encyclopaedias. I don’t know how many of my
schoolmates cracked those pages, but I know I was responsible for many of the “dog
ears.” They were additional text books for me.
Although this information stood outside the interview,
for the same reasons I defended Theme Four as valid and reliable, I defend
Theme Five.
I
began with a theme that stated that these encyclopaedias helped instil a love
of knowledge, which gave her subjects to write about. In participant review, however,
Elizabeth modified the theme to present a more accurate picture—a more reliable
picture. She found that reading a variety of material had instilled a love of
stories and a quest for knowledge. Words such as “love” and “quest” were her
words, not mine. Theme Five, through analysis, participant review, and free
imaginative variation, stands as valid, reliable, and essential.
To elaborate further: My objectivity,
with regard to this theme, and the others, lies in my remaining true to the
research question (van Manen, 1990), and my subjectivity lies in my remaining
true to Elizabeth’s lived experiences (van Manen, 1990). My peer debriefer
finds Theme Five, as in the case of the other themes, untainted by my bias.
Elizabeth, my peer debriefer, and I, then, define another triangle of agreement.
Theme Five is in.
Chapter Nineteen:
Recommendations
with Respect to Arthur’s
Themes
We
may not require all our students to become creative writers, but some students,
given the right environment, like a marigold seed given the appropriate
combinations of soil, nutrients, water, and sunshine, might germinate into a
poet or fiction writer, perhaps into a poet of the stature of Irving Layton or
Morley Callahan, or a fiction writer of the stature of Earl Birney or W. O.
Mitchell. Some students might germinate into great dramatists. On the other
hand, some students might germinate into poets, fiction writers, and dramatists
of humble ability. That is fine too. If we, as educators, want to think about
what that right environment might be, the themes from Studies I, II, and III
create a starting place. Let me begin with the themes of Study I.
Theme One—Silent Reading of Poetry
and Fiction
Teachers who offer their students a variety of silent
reading experiences through reading programs, literature programs, access to
class libraries, visits to school libraries, visits to municipal or otherwise
public libraries, visits to book fairs, and creative book displays may be
encouraging some students to become creative writers. Silent reading
opportunities encouraged Arthur. They encouraged me (see Chapter Thirteen:
Tying up My Own Biases). The Ministry lists a vast number of resources for
silent reading in each of its three guides (1996a, pp. B-9 to B-126; 1996b, pp.
B-9 to B-122; 1996c, B-9 to B-103).
Theme Two—Listening to Poetry and Fiction
Read Aloud and Listening to Songs
The Ministry’s (1996a, 1996b, 1996c) three guides do
not encourage Language Arts teachers to consider the benefits of singsongs and
do not address the benefits of teachers reading to students. But the
International Reading Association tells teachers to “provide opportunities for
students ... to be read to each school day” (Supporting Young Adolescents’
Literacy Learning, 2002; also see, e.g., Goodman, Goodman, & Flores, 1979;
and Koltin, n.d.). Teachers who provide, especially in the primary grades,
class singsongs, and teachers who provide quality oral reading of poetry and
fiction, may be encouraging some students to become creative writers. These
provisions encouraged Arthur. Jack Hodgins (1993) relates that one teacher
reading fine fiction aloud encouraged him to take up fiction writing (see
Chapter Twelve: Bracketing and Phenomenology). I had many similar experiences
(see Chapter Thirteen: Tying up My Own Biases).
Theme Three—Uninterrupted Language
Experiences
Teachers who allow students blocks of time, without
interrupting their sensory perceptions or their flights of fancy with questions
or other assignments, to enjoy language experiences such as videos, free
reading time, read-aloud poetry and fiction, and professionally-performed plays
may be encouraging some students to become creative writers. The Ministry
(1996a, 1996b, 1996c) refers to videos of movies and plays, novels, short story
and poetry collections, scripts, and electronic media that could serve as
content for uninterrupted language experiences.
Theme Four—Flights of Imagination
Teachers who allow students reasonable opportunities
to daydream; who openly value flights of imagination, or lateral-thinking
ecstasy; who display passionate interest in the connotative and imagistic “life”
of words; and who provide texts rich in connotative and imagistic words or
phrases may be encouraging some students to become creative writers. Many of
The Ministry’s (1996a, 1996b, 1996c) resources just referred to in Theme
Three—Uninterrupted Language Experiences could serve as connotative and
imagistic fuel for students’ imaginations.
Theme Five—Verbally Punning and
Joking and Informing Others
Teachers who allow, within the limits of reason,
students in class to pun and joke and verbally inform others about what they
have learned may be encouraging some of them to become creative writers. These
teachers provide a classroom stage on which students “manipulate language for
... expression” (The Ministry, 1996a, 1996b, 1996c, p. 3), which refers
precisely to what writers do with language.
Theme Six—The Freedom of Writing Down
Thoughts and Having Those Thoughts Valued
Teachers who passionately discuss with their students
thoughts and feelings based on poetry and fiction texts read in class, and who
openly value students’ attempts to write down those thoughts and feelings may
be encouraging some of them to become creative writers. The Ministry (1996a, 1996b,
1996c) speaks frequently about the benefits and pleasures of writing and the
need for teachers to value their students’ efforts.
Theme Seven—The Freedom of Choice
of Reading Material
Teachers who encourage students to explore literature
through freedom of choice and through easy access to literature may be
encouraging some of them to become creative writers. I refer to many avenues in
the subsection Theme One—Silent Reading of Poetry and Fiction that teachers
could use to provide literary freedom of choice, and The Ministry (1996a,
1996b, 1996c) lists a great library of literary resources that could also
provide that freedom.
Theme Eight—Sound Direction from
Compassionate Teachers
Teachers, notably compassionate, who provide students
sound direction about how to write well may be encouraging some of them to
become creative writers. The feedback these teachers provide helps students do
the very work of writing: “manipulat[ing] language for ... expression” (The
Ministry, 1996a, 1996b, 1996c, p. 3).
Chapter Twenty:
Recommendations
with Respect to Thomas’
Theme
Many
English teachers know a great deal about the mechanics of the language. Professor
Harlow, long-time head of the creative writing department at the University of
British Columbia, and author of the critically-acclaimed novel Scann,
made a comment to me in 1976 that helps me here (Lukiv, 2001d): “Dan, those
gyze in the English department understand language. They can dissect a sentence
and explain all the grammar. I can’t do that very well. But I know how
to write.” He
still does. But Language Arts teachers (English teachers included) who know
plenty about grammar and dissecting sentences and yet do not write
professionally as creative writers may find themselves wondering how to inspire
students to become professional writers, let alone to reach the literary
heights of D. M. Thomas, Margaret Atwood, John Hodgins, Wole Soyinka, Thomas
Akare, or Lindsey Collen.
Study
II gives Language Arts teachers direction. If I break Thomas’ essential theme
into its parts, the direction looks like this (confirmed through participant
review):
Part One
1.
Demand, from a humanistic point of view, the best from students;
2.
Value, love, see each student as sublimely unique;
3. Encourage students to be the best
that they can be, no matter what their gifts or deficits are;
(Notice
the focus on demand in “1” and encourage in “3.”)
Part Two
4. Application of “1,” “2,” and “3”
may encourage a student with creative writing ability or interest to become a
poet, novelist, or dramatist;
The next two points of direction
refer to benefits in a general sense that some students may experience due to
teachers’ application of Thomas’ theme in the classroom.
5. Application of “1,” “2,” and “3”
may encourage a student with any ability or interest—e.g., mathematics,
languages, history, physics—to develop that ability or pursue that interest;
and
6. Application of “1,” “2,” and “3”
may encourage students to develop positive, lifelong-learning habits.
Chapter Twenty-One: Recommendations
with Respect to Elizabeth’s
Themes
If
the themes of Study III define the essence of the phenomenon—namely, lived
school experiences that encouraged Elizabeth to become a writer—then these
themes may help teachers create classroom activities that will encourage others
to seriously consider creative writing as a vocation. As I mentioned
previously, that is known not as a generalization (see Chapter Nine: The Nature
of Encouragement), but as an extrapolation that should help teachers establish
a useful mode of practise. The same reasoning, of course, stands with to
respect the themes of and Studies I and II.
Theme One—Opportunities to Write
Poetry, Stories, and Plays
Teachers who provide students with lots of
opportunities to write within a variety of genres may be encouraging some to
become creative writers. Elizabeth recalled teachers’ providing titles for
which she would write a story or poem. These assignments refer to specific
direction that I referred to in Chapter Twelve: Bracketing and Phenomenology.
As I mentioned in that chapter: During each pre-study stage, I respectively
wondered if Arthur, Thomas, or Elizabeth would describe any creative writing
activities that were very, very specific as ones that had encouraged him or her
to take up creative writing.
As
for another example, although less specific: She wrote plays that her school
performed at Christmas. These were writing opportunities. Certainly, multitudinous examples of creative writing
exercises exist that teachers could offer students. I say “offer” because,
frankly, assignments that encourage or motivate one student to write may not
encourage or motivate another (Stipek, 1998).
In my experience as a creative
writing teacher, I have found that one student will balk at an assignment that
another embraces. Therefore, a teacher truly interested in encouraging students
to write and enjoy the experience should develop a portfolio of activities.
Chapter Twelve: Bracketing and Phenomenology lists a large number of creative
writing textbooks that contain many creative writing activities (see, e.g.,
Bickham, 1996; Block, 1979; Bryant, 1978; Bugeja, 1994; Cassil, 1975; Clark,
Brohaugh, Woods, Strickland, & Blocksom, 1992; Dessner, 1979; Dickson &
Smythe, 1970; Drury, 1991; Fredette, 1988; Hall, 1989; Irwin & Eyerly,
1988; Jones, 1978; Powell, 1973; Roberts, 1981; Seuling, 1991; Wakan, 1993; and
Wyndham, 1972; see, also, Rico, 1983). In that chapter, I also refer to
creative writing Web sites, which contain essentially the same sorts of activities
as do print materials (see, e.g., About Teens, n.d.; Horner & Khan,
n.d.; Love, n.d.a; and Shiney & Shiney, n.d.). The BC Ministry of Education
and many Language Arts curriculum guides also offer direction that should help
teachers develop a portfolio. See Chapter Eleven: Literature Related to the
Teaching of Creative Writing for more examples (see, e.g., Best, et al., 1998;
Bogusat, et al., 1999; Booth, Booth, Phenix, & Swartz, 1991; Jeroski &
Dockendorf, 2000; Sterling & Toutant, 1999; The Ministry, 1996a, 1996b,
1996c; Tuinman, Neuman, & Rich, 1988; Tuinman, Neuman, & Rich, 1989).
Teachers who provide publishing
opportunities (Lamb, 1984; Love, n.d.b.; Lukiv, 1996, and 2002a) may also be
encouraging some students to become creative writers. I say this because some
of Elizabeth’s plays that were performed at Christmas concerts began her
lineage of publication—a lineage that has not ended seven decades later. Presently she has begun formulating a collection of
short stories about rural people, composites of people dating as far back as
elementary school, that she hopes to publish shortly.
Theme Two—Teachers Read
Her Writing Aloud, as Examples for Students
This theme reminds me of one of Solomon’s inspired
statements, at Ecclesiastes 2:24: “A man [or woman] … should … see good because
of his [or her] hard work” (New World Translation, 1984). When teachers
read Elizabeth’s work aloud as an example, she knew that she had written good
work, a result of her hard work, and that at least her teachers had appreciated
it. To me, these readings were a sort of publication. Do you know a writer who
does not like his or her work publicized? I don’t. Some of her plays were
produced. All of these “publishing” events validated her efforts to write
poems, stories, and plays.
Publication:
This common denominator for Elizabeth’s play productions and her writing read
aloud, reinforce, for me, that teachers should consider providing a variety of
publication opportunities: display cases of students’ picture book stories;
students’ stories stapled/taped to classroom walls (Lukiv, 2002a); literary
journals of students’ works (Lukiv, 1996); play productions of students’
dramas; students’ writing read aloud before small-, medium-, or large-sized
gatherings; collections of students’ poetry or stories; sections of students’
writing in school annuals; and even professionally bound anthologies of
students’ poetry and/or fiction (Bouvier & Sorenson,
1976)—these describe a world of publishing opportunities that may encourage some
students to want to become writers. Teachers who read Elizabeth’s work aloud—in
one sense, then, who published it—obviously encouraged her.
I
relate to Elizabeth’s read-aloud experiences. In my third year at UBC, a long
time ago, I was majoring in mathematics and physics, but I was also interested
in writing. Although the course I took, English 301 (composition), explored
non-fiction as opposed to what I would call creative writing (see Chapter
Three: What Is Creative Writing and What Is a Creative Writer?), my experience
in that course nevertheless taught me that I had some ability to produce decent
writing. I’ll explain how I came to that conclusion.
Each of the other students in the
class was in the third or fourth year of his or her Bachelor of Arts program.
I, the science guy, stuck out as an oddball. Armed with a slide rule, a text on
electronics, and another on differential equations, I entered the classroom. I
had efficiently stapled the hem of my Fortrel pants to keep them neat.
During our first class, we spoke
about our majors and what writing experience each of us was bringing to the
course. When I spoke about my majors, some whispered jokingly to each other.
“What are you doing in this course?”
a fourth-year history student sarcastically asked me.
As a science student, with only a
first- and a second-year literature course and a second-year creative writing
workshop/course under my belt, I had far less formal training in writing than
my classmates.
“I
like to write,” I said.
He
frowned, somewhat condescendingly, and said, “One of my profs told me this
course would be a breeze in view of all the essays I’ve written in my history
courses. He told me that it would probably be a waste of time. But I figured it
would be an easy course to help me boost my GPA.”
After
the first essays had been marked, our professor brought them to class to hand
back to us. But he kept mine as the last one to return. He said, “This was the
only ‘A’ essay in the whole class. Although there are a few things that would
have improved it, I’m holding it up as an example. The essay discusses not just
one, but three subjects, and actually has something specific to say about each.
The rest of you need to learn to be specific in your writing, and to use concrete
examples to support your statements.”
Although he didn’t read aloud the essay,
whereas Elizabeth’s teachers had read aloud her writing, I felt that if my work
could serve as an example that actually had value, then it was not in
vain; my hard work could produce something worthwhile. That experience
encouraged me, at least to some degree (see Chapter Thirteen: Tying up My Own
Biases), to become a writer. Elizabeth’s theme-two experience encouraged her.
Theme Three—Special Events
as Resource Material
In our multicultural classrooms, the opportunities for
special events abound. Keith Osajima laments that “those who do not know about
or have never experienced a … family gathering of any sort in the
African-American community [have] missed something. For those who have never
heard a Native … storyteller or who haven’t danced the salsa, … [they’ve]
missed something” (1992, p. 92). We should have no need to lament. Astute
teachers who survey the cultural heritage of their students may create a wealth
of classroom events that could become the resource material for some students
who become adult creative writers.
Could
James Joyce (1916/1976) have written the bazaar scenes in “Araby,” a story
about a romantically frustrated boy, if he had not visited a bazaar as a child?
Could Dickens (1855-57/2005) have written so authoritatively about an English
debtors’ jail in Little Dorrit if he hadn’t known anybody, such as his
father, who had spent time in one? Could W. O. Mitchell (1947/1993) have
written Who Has Seen the Wind if he had not grown up on the Canadian
prairies? Could I have written “The Farm” if I
had not visited my grandfather’s farm as a boy?
*****
THE FARM (2004c)
Death that keeps grandpa silent
In a 25-year-old coffin, rotted,
I’m sure,
Releasing neither theme
Nor river-flow,
Just echoes, from the imploding
Timbers, or perhaps from a clotted
Coordinate of my brain or mind
Or heart—
His tyrannosaurus-cherry tree
That spoke in hums and whirs and
strange
Night voices that said, “Beware of
What you cannot see. Beware of
Death, little boy.”
And that olfactory-raping
Chicken coop:
Why was it so big? Like the barn?
Like grandpa’s bedroom and bed?
Like his temper that his mad wife
Sometimes unleashed?
The farm, and the horses,
They were big as the ocean,
Big as the whole universe.
The outhouse once used
Remained a fly’s paradise,
A terrible reminder that not
everything
Turns out fine,
Like the neighbour who fell off
A horse and ended up retarded.
“Have some mushrooms,” my
glee-picking
Half uncles would say.
“Come on, Danny, ya city slicker.”
They’d fry them—poisonous?
The kind that dissolve and
Rupture kidneys?—
Sizzled and black
In butter, with the acid smell
Of cooked onions everywhere
Like the chicken manure outside.
My jaw never opened for mushrooms,
Warts of the apple orchard.
Cow manure would get me,
Sometimes every hour,
As it squeezed into running shoe
Tread, to sleep like the bats in the
attic
At day.
The monstrous wasp-whirring
In the cream separator as
I’d turn the heavy handle with all my
Skinny-armed might—
I grew drunk almost, on the huge
sound
Of that mini metal beast.
“Stop that noise!” Reality always
Reminded me this was not
My universe,
Which made me wonder whether I
Actually had one.
I certainly had never heard
Of the word marginalized.
A razor-sharpening belt
That could have girded
Hercules,
A washboard-crater-
Driveway to this wonderful, horrible
Planet called “the farm.”
And the preserves,
Concealed and protected in Sheol,
Where 15-year-old cherries in dusty
jars
Lay still as boredom—
Still as eggs of prehistoric fish
Embalmed in rock.
O, the theme of it all,
The rusty tractor that
Smoked and scuttled and
Screamed.
But it’s the dungeon,
The cellar, that I see,
In the grassy hump between the house
And outhouse.
Grandpa, who baked pies like
A magician,
Who finally sent his wife to
The mental institution,
Floats in one of those jars,
Beside the cherry eyeballs,
Pickled in time,
Themeless, without the flow of
Fiction, or even non-fiction.
Grandpa, gone in the coffin
That must be going—
I loved his pies so much
I want to cry.
*****
One of Elizabeth’s famous stories
involves a child, an ice-bound adventure, and a cultural event. I present no
more details, to protect her anonymity. Could she have written that story
without her experiencing at least some of what that child experiences? I can’t
answer no! to that
question, but I leave it for the reader to ponder—and I further ask, “Doesn’t
an extrapolation of Elizabeth’s Theme Three imply that teachers ought to
provide students with an educational environment rich with special events?”
Interestingly,
Arthur (see Chapter Sixteen: Conclusions—Arthur’s Themes) found that several
special school events had played roles in encouraging him to become a writer:
poetry and fiction read aloud, a movie, a play. Jack Hodgins (1993) was
inspired to become a writer through one high school teacher’s reading aloud
Hemmingway’s The Old Man and the Sea (1952/1999); I had similar
experiences (see Chapter Thirteen: Tying up My Own Biases). I realise these
examples weren’t full-scale events as Christmas concerts were for Elizabeth,
but they were nevertheless special events, implying that the teacher who has
the knack of turning the ordinary into the extraordinary; of turning a poetry
read-aloud into a celebration of that poetry; of turning a novel read-aloud
into a likewise celebration; of turning a class that is sleepy-eyed on a dreary
cloudy day into a class that revels in the variety of clouds that come and go
like fog, winter, spring, summer, fall, and life too may be encouraging
some of their students to become future writers—writers with cerebral
storehouses of resources available to power many of their poems, stories,
novels, and plays.
Theme Four—Presenting Students’ Good
Writing to Established Writers
Teachers who present students’ work, good work that
deserves praise, to established writers for review, may encourage some of those
students to keep on writing, perhaps for the rest of their lives. Where can
teachers find local writers who might agree, without even receiving payment
(schools typically run on reduced budgets these days, although administration
might set aside some funds for author reviewers), to visit their classes to
pass on encouraging comments to student writers, or who might agree to read and
comment on students’ writing that teachers pass on to them?
Often
local bookstore owners, librarians, newspaper editors, and high school English
teachers can provide the names of authors living within their communities.
Local writer’s groups may have established writers as members. Faculty at local
colleges and universities’ English Departments may provide names. More
adventurous teachers may want to contact authors outside their communities through
the post or e-mail. Publishing houses will usually forward letters addressed to
their author clients.
In 1996, I contacted many authors to
acquire permission to use excerpts from their works in my Creative Writing
for Senior Secondary Students (1997). I wrote to their publishers who
forwarded my requests to the respective authors. My choice, however, now, in
2006, in the age of widespread e-mail-speed-of-light communication, would be to
do a search—a Google search, for example—of the author’s name and the word
e-mail: for example, “Robert Harlow” e-mail. That will likely help me
locate an e-mail address that Robert Harlow uses. The beauty of e-mail contact
resides in its efficiency. How quickly and cheaply one can contact a multitude
of authors who exist “out there,” many of whom, I’m sure, would offer insights
on students’ writing as Nellie McClung offered hers on Elizabeth’s work.
If the students’ creative writing
teacher, however, is a published writer, then that’s all the better. I trusted
Robert Harlow’s direction because of his success as a writer. In time,
Elizabeth learned about Nellie McClung’s literary stature; Elizabeth then
greatly valued McClung’s praise because of her success as a writer.
Creative writing departments at universities and colleges typically hire
established writers (Hollins Univeristy: Coed
graduate programs; n.d.; New York University: Creative Writing Program, n.d.; Stanford Creative Writing Program, n.d.; The
Creative Writing Program: Arizona State University, n.d.; UBC: Creative Writing
Program, n.d.) able to provide students with direction that they can trust.
Herein lays an argument for creative writers teaching creative writing at the
elementary and high school levels. But I don’t say the argument stands as conclusive
in view of the fact that none of my studies’ participants mentioned
encouragement that specifically came from a teacher-writer.
Theme Five—A Variety of
Reading Experiences
Arthur found that a variety of silent reading
experiences (poetry and fiction) promoted the wonder and joy of reading, and
that they encouraged him to become a writer. Elizabeth found that a variety of
reading experiences (poetry, fiction, and non-fiction) promoted a love of
stories and a quest for knowledge, and that they encouraged her to become a
writer. Clearly, Teachers who offer their students a variety of reading
experiences through reading and literature programs, access to class libraries,
visits to school libraries, visits to municipal or otherwise public libraries,
visits to book fairs, and opportunities to browse creative book displays may be
encouraging some students to become creative writers. Sometimes teachers
provide a variety of reading experiences to promote literacy (Lukiv, 2005e),
without realizing that these experiences may promote a love for creative
writing. Silent reading opportunities encouraged Elizabeth, and Arthur too (see
Chapter Sixteen: Conclusions—Arthur’s Themes). They encouraged me as well (see
Chapter Thirteen: Tying up My Own Biases). The Ministry lists a vast number of
resources for silent reading in each of its three guides (1996a, pp. B-9 to
B-126; 1996b, pp. B-9 to B-122; 1996c, B-9 to B-103).
Chapter Twenty-Two:
Further Research—
Hermeneutic Phenomenology
This
monograph launches a new area of study. I say new because my suspended
literature review (see Chapter Seven: A Suspended Literature Review) and
further literature reviews (see Chapter Eleven: Literature Related to the
Teaching of Creative Writing) located no hermeneutic phenomenological
investigations beyond Studies I, II, and III into what experiences in school
have encouraged other people to become writers. Comments about events in school
that encouraged or apparently encouraged some to become creative writers do
exist (see Chapter Eight: Creative Writers Who Were Encouraged in School—a
Literature Review), but none that I have found are based on in depth
interviewing. I encourage researchers interested in my research question to
consider a hermeneutic phenomenological approach.
Arthur,
now that he has lived through this kind of study, wishes he had done the same
kind in his graduate studies. He found the experience illuminating. The wealth
and truth of the eight themes astounded him. They filled him with wonder, and
the recommendations based on those themes validated his experiences, made them
seem worth studying. Thomas found his theme surprisingly accurate. Elizabeth
felt her themes truly described her. Thomas and Elizabeth also felt the
recommendations based on their themes validated their experiences.
I
have found the experience of conducting all three studies fascinating. It fills
me with wonder. I have taught senior high school creative writing courses for
nine years, generally basing my teaching on my own experiences and instincts.
But now I have Arthur, Thomas, and Elizabeth’s experiences too. I feel better
equipped to teach creative writing in the future. I consider Arthur’s eight
themes, Thomas’ single theme, and Elizabeth’s five themes alongside my own
experiences in school that encouraged me to take up creative writing as a
pastime and as a profession, and that body of information prompts me to think
about what might work for students, what might encourage some to take up
creative writing. I have no rules here, simply direction.
Other
researchers who add conclusions and recommendations through hermeneutic
phenomenological study of my research question to the body of this monograph
will add depth and breadth to that direction. Researchers could alter the
research question to consider university as opposed to elementary school and
high school experiences, or researchers could consider dramatists as opposed to
poets and fiction writers. Eventually, a body of knowledge, possibly even a “preponderance
of evidence” (McMillan & Schumacher, 1997, p. 391), based on
experiences from the continuum of education that poets, fiction writers, and
dramatists have had could crystallize into direction in Language Arts and
creative writing programs that better “germinates” future poets, fiction
writers, and dramatists.
One method for crystallizing this
direction lies in what I call Theory From Phenomenology, which may help
me formulate a covering theory (2004a). In the next chapter, I discuss what I
mean by that method.
Chapter Twenty-Three:
Further Research—Covering Theory
The body of knowledge from
my phenomenological studies could crystallize into theoretical direction based
on certain grounded theory principles (Dick, 2002). The grounded theory
approach, founded in formal text, in 1967, by Barney Glaser and Anselm Strauss
(The Discovery of Grounded Theory: Strategies for Qualitative Research),
swerved from traditional quantitative, hypothesis-testing methodology to a
qualitative, inductive methodology grounded in data (Babchuk, 1996). Sometime
after 1967, however, Glaser and Strauss apparently began to disagree on the
methodology of grounded theory, and many others have followed them into the
arena of discussion/argument/how dare you say that (Babchuk, 1996; Chalip et
al., 1998; and Glaser, 2002).
I liberally reference
direction I follow in this chapter to give voice to the authors I choose to
listen to, to provide authority beyond myself, and to provide the reader with a
map to follow (Babchuk, 1996) should he or she wish to read these references.
My goal, then: not to enter that arena I mentioned, but rather, to choose
elements of grounded theory that may guide me from phenomenology to
theory.
Phenomenological
research is primarily concerned with the study of essence, the description of
the essence of particular experiences, and not fundamentally concerned with
creation of theory (Burch, 1989, 1991). Therefore, to fulfill my research goal
of writing theory, I step beyond the phenomenological research of Studies I,
II, and III to a novel concept: Theory from Phenomenology. Grounded
theory typically depends on more than data, such as interviews, but on
phenomena (Davidson, 2002; Haig, 1995; Pandit, 1996; Kinach, 1995; and Myers,
1997). Logically, then, the themes of my studies could, although I won’t say at
this point they will, generate theoretical perspectives. I’m making
tentative statements that editors of prestigious journals might not want to
publish, but I’m not alone amongst researchers who would prefer to speak their
minds, or speak tentatively, thoughtfully, than to concern themselves about
whether their words meet strict guidelines of what gets into the journals
(Barritt, 1992; and van Manen, 1992).
Some
refer to the kind of data my phenomenological interviews generated as first-order
(Pogson et al., 2002). Rather than think in terms of order, I prefer to think
in terms of degrees of abstraction. The data to themes to theory refers
to increased levels of abstraction. Mathematicians describe a process of
integration (Nelson, 1998), which can take a one-dimensional formula to two
dimensions and then to three (Volumes of Solids, 1999), thereby increasing the
abstraction of the formula. For example, if with respect to r (radius of a
circle) you integrate 8πr (a 1-dimensional formula), which is 4 times the
circumference a of a circle, you get 4πr2 (a 2-dimensional
formula), which is the surface area of a sphere, and if with respect to r you
integrate 4πr2, you get 4/3(π)r3 (a
3-dimensional formula), which is the volume of a sphere (1999). For my
purposes, with respect to the original research question, the integration of
interview data = themes; with respect to the new research question (What, if
any, theoretical direction do these themes give to teachers of creative
writing?), the integration of themes = theory.
I
welcome researchers reading this integration approach who could offer
suggestions or concerns (Barritt, 1992) about my stepping from phenomenology to
grounded theory direction to contact me (lukivdan@hotmail.com).
If grounded theory is an emergent methodology, as Dick says (2002), then I’m
standing in the right ball park. I will need to develop my own style of
constant comparison between themes that emerge from phenomenological studies
and theoretical statements that may emerge (2002) from their themes.
These
themes, or as some grounded theory researchers say, categories or perhaps
concepts or understanding (Calloway & Knapp, 1995; Glaser, 2002; and
Introduction to Qualitative Tools, 1998), established through systematic
hermeneutic phenomenological methodology, would become the data I use to
construct theory, but construction would follow new systematic methodology,
defining analysis and interpretation in the grounded theory landscape (1998;
and Kinach, 1995). Of course, categories in grounded theory arise through what
many researchers call the comparative method (Glaser, 2002), whereas themes in
my phenomenological studies arose through phenomenological analysis and
interpretation (see Chapter Fourteen: Methodology). Whichever qualitative
methodology we consider as researchers, one goal of applying it is to bring us
close to what we are studying. Grounded theory direction, then, could bring me
close to what I would be trying to understand (State of the Art, 1998), namely
the phenomenological data (themes) and theory that may lie implicitly therein
(see Chapter Six: Qualitative Interview Data Is like a Poem); additionally, the
direction could help verify, make valid, the theory (State of the Art, 1998)—if
one does emerge.
The themes of my
phenomenological studies could parallel the abstract categories or less
abstract concepts of a grounded theory approach (Pandit, 1996). My objective:
to group the themes through connections between them (1996), and integrate them
(1996) into a covering theory. The quality of this inductive approach would
naturally parallel the quality of theory produced (Borgatti, 1996b). I could
discover a core category or theme that all or most other themes relate to
(1996b; and McCarthy, 2001). If the core category were considered the
vertebrae, these other themes would be the ribs. Here, however, I sidestep
grounded theory terminology such as open, axial, and selective coding (Babchuk,
1996; and Davidson, 2002).
I base that decision for
sidestepping on the premise that codes may relate to single words or phrases
(Dick, 2002) far more concrete than the phenomenological abstractions I call
themes (van Manen, 1990). I have other reasons too. Logic suggests that Theory from Phenomenology should retain,
as much as possible, “phenomenological” language, even the logic of Studies I,
II, and III. For example, those hermeneutic phenomenological studies explored
lived school experiences and then described themes that emerged (Bennet, 1998)
from those experiences (see Chapter Ten: Narrative Style and the Research
Question); Theory from Phenomenology
would explore those themes and then describe theory that emerges (1998) from
them. As I mentioned in Chapter Ten, this journey from exploration to
description defines a common journey for researchers (Neuman, 2006).
As for the language of my
hermeneutic phenomenology, it includes themes, but not open, axial, and
selective coding. I prefer, at least for now, the language of grouping of
themes, connections between themes, integration of themes,
and covering theory. I say “at least for now” because the actual process
of theory building from phenomenology may reveal to me a better language. My
proposal for such a study could allow for a fluidity of terminology; however, I
likely will not sidestep the use of the concept of a core category/theme that
themes relate to as a useful theory-building spine.
As for memos, I definitely
will not sidestep using those. Pandit (1996) used memos in his grounded theory
doctoral work to help him group and integrate what he called concepts and the
broader categories, and to keep track of concepts, categories, questions, and
possibilities. Actually, memos helped me analyze and interpret interview data
in my phenomenological studies. Borgatti speaks about memos as a means to
generate theoretical insight in grounded theorizing (1996b). Memos address what
Pandit (1996) calls internal validity (a credible establishment of
relationships) and construct validity ([Trochim, 2002b] enhanced through clear procedures
of operation).
In view of the relatively
small number of themes that Studies I, II, and III produced, I will not follow
Pandit’s (1996) example of using data analysis computer programs to help me
compare and contrast my themes. But I will, I think, follow his example of
comparing my theory to relevant literature, if any exists, once I establish
theory. Some researchers encourage a review of literature during analysis
and interpretation (Grounded Theory Research Design, n.d.); however, during
Study I, I conducted a suspended literature review after my
interpretation (see Chapter Seven: A Suspended Literature Review), to avoid, in
view of my neophyte status as a researcher at the MEd stage, biasing myself.
Pandit (1996; see, also, Davidson, 2002) worked similarly, reviewing relevant
literature after the theory emerged.
This order fits the spirit
of grounded theory, which does not allow “our theories ... [to] drive our
research” (Pogson et al., 2002, p. 6). Grounded theory researchers avoid
forming a priori hypotheses (2002). Actually, its methodology began, in part,
as a reaction against the preponderance of 1960s and pre-1960s education
research that quantitatively tested hypothetical premises (Grounded theory,
n.d.). Not surprisingly, then, I will avoid doing an extensive literature
review related to my theory until it crystallizes. This will help me keep
hypotheses and biases at bay. Curiously, however, just as I found no
hermeneutic phenomenological studies that investigated my research question, I
may find no literature that supports, contradicts, or extends theory I
construct.
Participant
review, which includes the specialized process called free imaginative
variation, and which verifies or appropriately alters the analysis and
interpretation of data (see Chapter Fourteen: Methodology) bolsters internal
validity. Therefore, at the stage of crystallizing my theory, I might consider
my conducting participant reviews with each of the participants of my
phenomenological studies, if possible, to see if the theory rings true for
their experiences. As in hermeneutic phenomenological research that values the
researcher’s analysis and interpretation along with the participants’ thematic
verification and/or modification, my proposed methodology would value the same
processes. This novel approach would place the theory generated at a high level
of validity.
I
enjoy this thought, because if I am going to spend great lengths of time
conducting phenomenological studies and then work through the time-consuming
method of crystallizing a covering theory (Pandit, 1996), then I want to end up
with high validity. Therefore, from the beginning of my research I have been
aware of the need for what I call good process. For example, I have made
sure my phenomenological studies have fit my original research question without
“the question being made to fit the research method” (McCarthy, 1999, Three
Stages of Developing the Research Topic, para. 1). I am matching this logic as
I step beyond phenomenology. Really, I am attempting to join up the
established, valid process of phenomenological research with valid grounded
theory direction.
In the name of good
process, here is my logic: 1) The topic of creative writing in school gave rise
to my research question, which sent me on a research design (Daniel, 1996)
exploration (I chose qualitative research), which sent me on a methodology
exploration (I chose hermeneutic phenomenology), which introduced me to how to
conduct valid research of my research question, research made valid in part
because of participant review; and 2) Likewise, my topic of themes of events
(phenomenological data) in school that have encouraged some people to become
creative writers has given rise to my new research question of What, if any,
theoretical direction do these themes provide for creative writing teachers?,
which has sent me on a research design (Daniel, 1996) exploration (I have
chosen qualitative research), which has sent me on a methodology exploration (I
have chosen direction from grounded theory literature), which is teaching me
how to construct valid theory (Pandit, 1996), the validity of which could be
enhanced considerably through participant review.
Those
readers familiar with grounded theory may notice that I have spoken about
participant review but not about saturation. “Saturation point is defined as
that point in data collection/analysis when no new features related to the
research question turn up in the most recently collected data” (Rintel, 2001).
Not all researchers agree about the validity of saturation: “It seems so
intense a process that I wonder,” Rintel says, “if anyone has ever actually
achieved saturation” (2001). In spite of such comments, many researchers treat
saturation seriously, especially with regard to a core category (Glaser and
Strauss: Developing Grounded Theory, n.d.). The logic of saturation lies in a
variety of interviewees who provide a variety of data, thereby providing
diverse aspects of the core category, enabling the researcher to deepen his or
her insight (n.d.; see, also, Davidson, 2002).
If saturation is to grounded theory,
then, I must add, verification and richness are to hermeneutic phenomenological
research. Participant review (including free imaginative
variation)—verification—ensures that the essential themes discovered
truly/accurately/reliably describe the essence of the participant’s lived
experience. Applying the principles of saturation appears possible in terms of
the interviewer finding a participant’s “same old themes” in new qualitative
(interview) data, however: 1) the phenomenological researcher has to respect a
participant who says, “That’s all I can remember; I have nothing more to say,”
and 2) the researcher may simply stop interviewing once he or she sees that the
data is rich, fruitful.
For example (with respect to “2”),
Study I is fruitful/rich in its number of essential themes, namely eight, and
Study II, although only one essential theme emerged, has richness too. The
breadth and depth of the single theme makes the study more than worthwhile in
my mind. Elizabeth’s five essential themes from Study III describe, too, a
richness that I find very satisfying. And verification gives the themes of all
three studies credibility.
Credibility
with regard to a covering theory that utilizes my studies’ themes as data may
also rank high through similar verification. As for richness: It will likely
arise from the diversity of experiences of my information-rich (Patton, 1987)
participants and their individuality (Stipek, 1998; and Zunker, 1998).
If my
covering theory approach, based on phenomenological data (themes), truly works,
then I can present two modes of direction to teachers: 1) direction through a
list of all themes from my studies (see Chapter Twenty-Five: A Checklist for Creative
Writing Teachers); and 2) theoretical direction (McEwan, n.d.). The list, as a
checklist, could direct teachers to consider activities or ways of dealing with
students. Those activities or ways might encourage some to become creative
writers, based on the premise, analogy (Kline, 1967), that they have encouraged
others. The theory could also direct teachers, although at a more abstract
level, to consider activities or ways of dealing with students that might
encourage some. The checklist and the theory
provide a context for extrapolation based on the experiences of
information-rich participants (Patton, 1987). I will further discuss
extrapolation shortly.
In my
phenomenological work, I have addressed validity issues in considerable detail.
I realize that research that does not fully address validity issues invites
criticism from, even rejection by, its readers. McKewan (n.d.) says, “If you
read only the introduction and the conclusion to a research study, ignoring
everything in between [which would include discussions about internal and
external validity], you may as well not read it at all.” I agree. A reader who
does not evaluate a study’s rigour and consider the researcher’s arguments in
favour of the study’s validity seems, to me, odd.
I
have read many studies that do not fully address validity issues, such as
comparability between classes or students (see, e.g., Atkinson, 2003; and
Sluyter, 2003), survey validity (see, e.g., Haynes, 2003), confidentiality and
anonymity and other ethical concerns (see, e.g., Haynes, 2003), researcher
effects or bias control (see, e.g., Christiansen, 2003), standardization
procedures for interviewing a variety of participants (see, e.g., Christiansen,
2003), questionnaire validity (see, e.g., Rauschenberger, 2003), and student
effects on each other (see, e.g., Rauschenberger, 2003). These studies invite
criticism. Therefore, where grounded theory structures guide me to locate
theory in the phenomena, I will address credibility (internal validity); I will
also address consistency (reliability) and confirmability (objectivity) (State
of the Art, 1998; refers to Lincoln & Guba, 1985; see, also, Siegle,
n.d.c), or I will formulate and apply other concepts of rigor to ensure the
study’s integrity (Morse et al., 2002).
I
did not use Lincoln and Guba’s (1985) terminology as explicit signposts in my
phenomenological studies. With regard to validity, generally I referred to
trustworthiness (Guba & Lincoln, 1982; see, also, Siegle, n.d.c) rather
than credibility. Essentially, however, I addressed credibility in terms of
taped and transcribed interviews, participant review, free imaginative
variation, bracketing, and peer debriefing; consistency (Siegle, n.d.c) in
terms of participant review, free imaginative variation, bracketing, and peer
debriefing; and confirmability (n.d.c) in terms of audibility, field notes,
contact summaries, memos, a field journal, bracketing, participant review, and
peer debriefing. But the repetition/overlap seems cumbersome. Herein lies some
of the trouble with qualitative researchers trying to straddle qualitative and
quantitative language to addresses validity and reliability issues (Morse et
al., 2002).
Lincoln
and Guba (1985) refer not only to credibility, consistency, and conformability,
but also to applicability (external validity), which really made no sense for
my phenomenological studies because generalization was not the goal. Finding
themes specific to the participants, however, was. Hence, rather than
applicability, I prefer to use the term extrapolation (Patton, 1987). I have
discussed this concept already (see Chapter Eight: Creative Writers Who Were
Encouraged in School—a Literature Review, and Chapter Nine: The Nature of
Encouragement). Extrapolation translates into direction from my studies for
creative writing teachers.
Extrapolation will arise
again if grounded theory principles can provide me with a means to generate a
valid covering theory (based on my phenomenological themes) of use in the
classroom; a theory that will guide teachers who want to create classroom
climates and events that may encourage some students to grow up to become
creative writers. I do not speak of an if x (if teachers provide certain
activities or interact with students in certain ways), then y theory (then
those activities or interactions will encourage some students [I speak,
of course, other than (beyond) Arthur, Thomas, and Elizabeth] to become
creative writers; Borgatti, 1996a), which relates to external validity, the
validity of generalizing the theory. Rather, I am speaking of an if x, then
perhaps y theory, especially if the theory rings true for all participants.
Such a theory would not describe independent and dependant variables, but it
would describe at least a “sense of process” (1996a, para. 7).
The
best theory would address classroom climate and events from kindergarten to
grade 12. My intent was to draw on elementary and high school events. I feel at
home with my intent because I have taught students in grades 1 through 4 and 9 through 12, and I am familiar with the
cognitive, emotional, and social make up of students in those grades. Another
researcher, however, might feel more at home with just elementary or just high
school experiences, based on his or her past as a teacher. That researcher’s
audience might be just elementary or just high school teachers. This reminds me
that skilled ethnographers of the same group of people might conduct different
interviews and, therefore, discover different data and, therefore, arrive at
different, although not contradictory, conclusions because different
ethnographers might be researching for different audiences (Ethnography, 1998).
Let
me now leave this discussion about the best theory to focus on good
grounded theory, which has four fundamental requirements that seem
excellent evaluative tools for Theory from
Phenomenology. The theory should 1) “fit the phenomenon” (described by the
themes that come out of my phenomenological studies); 2) “be understandable” (to
teachers in general, but especially to Language Arts teachers); 3) be “abstract
enough to be [useful in] a wide variety of contexts” (useful in all grades and,
I hope, in various school climates socially and economically); and 4) “provide
control, in the sense of stating the conditions under which the theory applies
and describing a reasonable basis for action” (the theory should give creative
writing teachers direction about what sorts of activities they could engage
students in or about how they could interact with students) (Davidson, 2002,
para. 7; see, also, Grounded Theory, n.d.). “A reasonable basis for action”
refers to practise, which seems paramount. Just as each action research cycle
means “practice informs theory which in turn informs practice” (Dick, 1998,
para. 4), Theory from Phenomenology
means participant experience informs phenomenology which in turn informs theory
which in turn informs practise, which can relate to what some call theoretical
applicability.
As I
have said, I prefer to leave out the term applicability, with its hint of
generalizability, in favour of extrapolation (Patton, 1987). It will take the
teacher beyond the phenomenological interviews of my studies, beyond the themes
of the studies, and beyond the theory as defined by the experiences of
information-rich creative writers. How? The themes as a checklist and the
theory will both stand as direction for teachers. The checklist and theory will
“take” teachers to their own students in their own classrooms to address
scholastic environments and activities. As I mentioned before (see Chapter
Nineteen: Recommendations with Respect to Arthur’s Themes), some students,
given the right environment, like a botanical seed given the appropriate
combinations of soil, nutrients, water, and sunshine, might germinate into
creative writers. If educators want to think about what that right environment
might be, the themes and theory from the studies will direct teachers with
respect to appropriate practise.
The
next step in my work as a researcher may be to test the extrapolating power
of the theory. I might consider sending out a survey to a sample of
creative writers to find out if the theory rings true according to their
experiences in school. I have not yet decided whether to follow a quantitative
or qualitative paradigm. I will explore this possibility in the next chapter.
Chapter Twenty-Four:
Further Research—Survey Research
I
have formulated Theory from Phenomenology
methodology by drawing on grounded theory principles (see Chapter Twenty-Three:
Further Research—Covering Theory), although what I call covering theory
is not true grounded theory (Baker, Wuest, & Stern, 1995; Glaser, 1995;
Becker, 1995; Simmons, 1995; and Stern, 1995). I want to see if I can
synthesize, through an inductive process, the themes of my phenomenological
studies into a covering theory that could direct teachers interested in
creating classroom settings that may encourage some students to take up
creative writing as a vocation. I will confirm, if possible—if the participants
of my phenomenological studies are available—the truth of the theory through
participant review, just as I confirmed the truth of the themes in each of the
phenomenological studies through participant review.
But
my series of studies of the phenomenon of what school experiences have
encouraged creative writers will not end at Theory
from Phenomenology. I wish to conduct one more study, namely survey
research of a sample of creative writers, to investigate or “test [the] theory’s
predictions” (Neuman, 2006, p. 34) or the worth of the covering theory
according to other writers. If teachers are going to extrapolate my covering
theory, to apply it in their classrooms, to “extend known experience
[based on the theoretical expression of those experiences of the participants]
... to arrive at a useful conjecture [a useful mode of practise]” (McMillan
& Schumacher, 1997, p. 7), then they may want to see that the theory
applies to more than just my phenomenological studies’ participants.
This path, from my point
of view, looks epic in scope, but all great journeys begin with shorter ones.
If Study I was Point A on my phenomenological landscape, then Study II placed
me at Point B, and Study III places me now at point C. I look forward to the
journey ahead—the great adventure of my further researching writers’ relevant
lived school experiences and sharing my findings with other researchers and
classroom teachers. As in pure scientific research, my work may gain me
surprisingly new, even astonishing insights (Kiener, 2002) worth sharing.
Stebbins (1995) refers to
this process of study following study, “as if [they] were in a chain leading to
cumulative, … or inductively generated theory” (p. 21). He notes that “sociologists
typically conduct one or two field studies, which may or may not be related,
and then retire to their offices to write” (p. 22). He refers to “the result[:]
… our understanding of an area of [study] that has gained a good start through
exploratory research is commonly arrested thereafter owing to neglect, for it
is rare that someone else takes up the project where the initial researcher
stopped” (p. 22). During my MEd studies, I purposely came up with a research
question that would launch a career in research, for me, that would last many
years. I recall Dr. Madak, my supervisory chair, telling me, after I’d said to
him that I’d wanted to explore a phenomenon that I could continue exploring
once I’d completed my degree, that he wished he’d continued at the PhD level
what research he’d started in his master’s program.
A researcher who wants to
make his own mark may find that some graduate schools expect graduate and
doctoral students to “test [or extend] their teachers’ [mentors’] work”
(Glasser & Strauss, 1967, p. 11) rather than explore their own passions.
Such a researcher may want to dig in his heels and consider a series, a
concatenated (Stebbins, 1995), approach that enables him to establish his body
of knowledge throughout his career. To test or extend a famous professor’s work
draws attention, frankly, to the professor and his or her work, but not to the
graduate or doctoral candidate.
In a similar sense, if a
young, energetic student writes a brilliant thesis or dissertation on some
aspect, say, of Margaret Atwood’s poetry or fiction or both, the work may land
the student a post in a university’s faculty of literature, but the work will
likely not bring the researcher notoriety. The work, on the other hand, may
indeed make Margaret Atwood all the more famous. Sometimes, too, charismatic
professors influence graduate and doctoral students to test or extend their
theories (Glasser & Strauss, 1967), drawing attention to the charismatic
professors rather than to the work of the students.
My studies are based on my
interests, my passions, and not on an agenda handed me from any particular
university’s research slant. I thank the University of Northern British
Columbia for allowing me to conduct MEd research that reflected my and not its
faculty of education’s agenda. My supervisory team allowed me to start on a
path that, I hope, will help teachers encourage some students to become
creative writers, thereby contradicting the “widespread perception that
knowledge created by [researchers] is not used in practice” (Boland et al.,
2000, Learning Theory, Knowledge Representations, and Knowledge Transfer, para.
1). I witnessed this perception repeatedly as many students in my recent MEd
cohort expressed concern over “ivory tower” (Neuman, 2006, p. viii) researchers
whose work lies cocoon-like, educationally dormant, without influence in everyday
classroom activity. Transformational knowledge, on the other hand, “moves” from
the researcher to the classroom teacher who actually uses that knowledge to
help him or her instruct students.
Shriberg (2002) speaks of “transformational
leaders [who] focus themselves and all stakeholders on long-term, shared
personal … commitments” (p. 45). He speaks of leadership at the university
level that promotes ecological sustainability for all concerned—for all
university faculty, other staff, and students (2002). His language reminds me
that education researchers should help teachers apply their research in the
classroom. Such researchers would become transformational leaders.
I
could, as a transformational leader, see that my studies are published in a
number of printed settings, to ensure that a wide variety of teachers have
access to their direction. That means publication must go beyond the journals
that, generally, only education professors read. To date, actually, I have each
of and part of each of Studies I, II, and III published in one of more of Academic
Exchange Extra, Mentor: The Online Publication for Nova Scotia’s
Educators, Arts North, Connected Magazine [online
supplement], SchoolNet Africa, The Journal of Secondary Alternate
Education, The Teachers.Net Gazette, and BCTF Lesson Aids
publications.
Also,
as a transformational leader, I could run workshops for teachers, helping them
apply my studies’ direction. If wisdom, in one sense, is not simply a product
of knowledge but of knowledge applied (Draw Close, 2002), then my
efforts could help teachers make wise choices—with respect to their applying
the themes and theory of my studies—in their efforts to encourage students to
take creative writing seriously. I could run workshops at my own school, McNaughton
Centre, and at my school district’s yearly professional development days. There
are provincial- and national-level conferences, too, that invite researchers to
“display” their work.
Publication
of my studies and workshops about their findings will offer teachers
opportunities to think about how to “extrapolate.” From these studies or
workshops, teachers who want to encourage some students to take up creative
writing as a vocation may gain a sense of what sorts of activities, what sorts
of extrapolations, make sense. The survey’s results and conclusions may add
considerable weight, or usefulness, to the covering theory (based on Theory from Phenomenology; see, again,
Chapter Twenty-Three: Further Research—Covering Theory) as an intellectual
point of reference for teachers. With respect to the theoretical direction,
teachers may gain a sort of class smarts, like the street kid who learns street
smarts (Hawley, 1993), in terms of their creating a classroom “event in time”
(Waterman, 1998), even a variety of “extrapolated” classroom events.
As in the previous
chapter, extrapolation, here, does not relate to an if x (or w, to use a
different symbol), then y (or z, to again use a different symbol) theory
(Borgatti, 1996a), which would relate to external validity (McMillan &
Schumacher, 1997), the validity of generalizing the theory. Population and
ecological external validity (McMillan & Schumacher, 1997) would equate my
respondents and their experiences in school to the larger pool of other
creative writers and their experiences in school. For example, if I took a
random sample (Ferber, Sheatsley, Turner, & Waksberg, 1980c) from a
sampling frame (Ferber, Sheatsley, Turner, & Waksberg, 1980b) of, say, all
the creative writers of Canada, and all respondents stated that the theory
matched experiences they had in school that had encouraged them to become
writers, then that means that probably all or at least most creative writers in
Canada (population external validity) would have had during their elementary
and high school years the same types of encouraging classroom experiences
(ecological external validity) that the theory describes. The implication:
Teachers who want to encourage some students to become creative writers should
definitely apply the theory in their classrooms.
But
random sampling will not be a feature of my survey, which, for a number of
reasons I will shortly explain, will use a non-random sample of
purposive/information-rich respondents (Patton, 1987; see, e.g., Arnold &
Ketter, n.d.). My proposal for a survey study will discuss non-random sampling,
just as it will discuss how I will ensure confidentiality/anonymity for each
respondent (Ferber et al., 1980c; and Ferber, Sheatsley, Turner, &
Waksberg, 1980a; see, e.g., Arnold & Ketter, n.d.; and McElrath &
McEvoy, 2001), a subject given considerable weight in graduate courses in
surveys (see, e.g., Godfrey, 2002).
Shortly
I will explain that a random sample and a complete sampling frame are not
possible for me to formulate, erasing the possibility for generalizability
based on population and ecological external validity. Given that statement, my
survey could speak of an if w, then perhaps z theory, especially if the
theory rings true not only for all participants of my phenomenological studies (see Chapter Twenty-Three: Further
Research—Covering Theory), but also for many survey respondents.
Extrapolation of that theory, then, in terms of teachers creating appropriate
classroom events and circumstances, draws on if w, then perhaps z. The
implication: Teachers who want to encourage some students to become creative
writers should consider applying the theory in their classrooms.
Therefore, as mentioned in Chapter Twenty-Three, such a theory would not
describe independent and dependant variables, but it would describe at least a “sense
of process” (Borgatti, 1996a).
By
sense of process I refer to activities, events, and teacher-student interaction
that may encourage students to become creative writers. To say that all or most
creative writers have experienced such activities, events, and teacher-student
interaction would, as already mentioned, constitute generalizability. Such a
bold statement, if global, would require a random sample of creative writers
from a sampling frame beyond the writers of my hometown, Quesnel, beyond my
province, British Columbia, and, quite frankly, beyond Canada, my country.
Granted, many studies use random samples (see, e.g., Barbados Study, 1997), but
such samples are not always possible (McMillan & Schumacher, 1997). My
study will be a case in point.
How
could I acquire the sampling frame for just my hometown? The Quesnel Writers’
Group, which I helped establish in 1979, presently has a list of members who
write, but many people in the area who do not belong to the group also write. I
am one example. As for others in my area: Who are they? Are some “invisible”
because they write under pseudonyms, as I sometimes do? I cannot
comprehensively answer either question. Therefore, a random sample of my area
is not possible (Trochim, 2002i).
The
difficulty in answering those questions grows exponentially as the geographical
area increases. Other variables add difficulty. For example, the Burnaby
Writers’ Society, of BC, advertises that “membership ... is open to anyone, anywhere”
(Burnaby, 2003, p. 487). That means members may not be established writers and
they may not live in Burnaby. The question would remain, who make up the
sampling frame of established writers in Burnaby?
Who
make up the sampling frame for British Columbia, for Canada? I know
much-published creative writers who belong to no writers’ groups, guilds, or
leagues at the municipal, territorial, provincial, or national level. Will the
Canadian Poetry Association (Canadian Poetry, 2003, p. 487), the Canadian
Authors Association (Canadian Authors, 2005), the Writers Guild of Canada
(Writers Guild, n.d.), and The League of Canadian Poets (The League, 2003, p.
490) enable me to establish a comprehensive sampling frame at the national
level? No. Not even The Quesnel Writers’ Group can enable me to list such a
frame at the hometown level. Other researchers, however, have taken random
samples from available sampling frames, such as Adams, Matto, and Harrington
(2001), who randomly sampled from “social workers nationwide (NASW [National
Association of Social Workers], 1999), from … 65,996 members in their database
who indicated they were in direct clinical practice” (p. 365), to study “convergent
and discriminant validity of the Traumatic Stress Institute Belief Scale
(TSI)-Revision L (Traumatic Stress Institute, 1994) as a measure of vicarious trauma
in … clinical social workers” (p. 363). Such a study affords excellent
possibilities for external validity, for generalizing to a large body of social
workers.
In view of what I have discussed
about random sampling from a sampling frame, which is necessary for externally
valid (i.e., with reference to external population and ecological validity)
conclusions (McMillan & Schumacher, 1997) within the bell curve-probability
realm of statistical interpretation, generalization becomes an impossibility
for my survey. (As a point of interest, note that random sampling in a survey
that reaches for generalizability must address what to do about non-respondents
possibly biasing the statistical pool [de Leeuw, 2005; and Lesser et al.,
2001].)
Clearly, for my survey research, non-random sampling becomes the reasonable
alternative (Developing a Survey, n.d.; see, e.g., Hare & Skinner, 1999).
Hence, extrapolation, the fruit of
non-random sampling, replaces generalizability. Researchers who make sweeping
conclusions—in short, generalizations—from non-random samples can mislead the
public, especially when these statements enter the public domain. For example,
Brown and Booth (in press) discuss a famous study by Arlie Hochschild (1997),
who concluded from a non-random sample that many mothers and fathers avoid the
demands of domestic life by spending many hours in the workplace (Brown &
Booth, in press), a conclusion that implied a nation-wide phenomenon.
Hochschild’s research, published in her book entitled The Time Bind, has
been referenced dozens of times in academia, but other studies have not
supported her research. Why not? As Brown and Booth (in press) point out, “the
generalizability of her findings is limited by her nonrandom sample of a small
number of workers in a single firm” (p. 6). People who make decisions based on
grandiose generalizations may find themselves embarrassed according to Matthew
15:14 (New World Translation): “If, then, a blind man guides a blind
man, both will fall into a pit.” Therefore, I want to reflect some modesty in
my use of the word extrapolation. In the words of Williams (1996), “good
researchers recognize and acknowledge the limitations of their work” (First
Project: Experiments, para. 7).
For
my survey, non-random sampling, as in the case of my purposive/information-rich
(Patton, 1987) respondents, will define a group of
successful—established—writers, and will, I hope, lead me to some modest
conclusions. By successful, I mean my respondents will have proven their
commitment to their vocation through their own letters of recommendation—their
own substantial credits, as in the case of Arthur, Thomas, and Elizabeth. For
poets and fiction writers, I refer to a substantial body of published works.
For dramatists, I refer to a substantial body of produced or published plays.
I
won’t resort to snowball sampling, although researchers frequently “snowball”
(see, e.g., McElrath & McEvoy, 2001). I wouldn’t want to snowball through
fringe writers, with little professional experience, referring to likewise
fringe writers. Ironically, researchers often use snowball sampling to locate
fringe groups (Qualitative Field Research, n.d.). Granted, I could use snowball
sampling to locate established writers through established writers, but the
process isn’t necessary. Established writers are easy to find. I will
purposively choose such writers, just as I purposively chose them for Studies
I, II, and III.
Therefore, the survey will not
require a screening question to determine which respondents are appropriate for
the survey (Trochim, 2002i); however, one contingency question (Trochim,
2002j), to root out biased respondents, could be: Have you read any of my
published phenomenological research studies or articles that refer to them? I
would not mention that the studies have explored
experiences in school that encouraged some to take up creative writing. Even
that statement could bias respondents who have not read my work to think that
some school experiences should have encouraged them.
A “yes” to my question would mean the
respondent would not continue with the survey, due to possible bias effects
from his or her reading my research or references to it. Just as history effects
(McMillan & Schumacher, 1997) could affect respondents in particular ways
that adversely affect the internal validity of a study, bias effects could also
adversely affect its internal validity.
The survey could focus attention on
the covering theory, which will likely be a short, simple statement that “covers”
the themes from my hermeneutic phenomenological studies. In fact, “a simple
statement of the observed relations” (McMillan & Schumacher, 1997, p. 8) is
preferable to a complex statement, and brevity is preferable to wordiness. Such
a statement not only helps the reader understand the theory but also helps the
survey avoid certain problems. For example, a lengthy theoretical statement
might, if the survey asks respondents to read the statement and respond to its
various parts with respect to their own experiences, open the door to recency
and primacy effects (Krosnick, 1999).
Variety amongst
respondents will depend on a non-random, stratified purposive sampling;
some researchers might synonymously use the term “maximum variation sampling”
(McMillan & Schumacher, 1997, p. 398); others, the term quota sampling
(1997). McCaffery et al. (2003) “purposively selected [a] sample of women from
four ethnic groups: white British, African Caribbean, Pakistani and Indian” to “examine[
] attitudes to human papillomavirus (HPV) testing” through qualitative
methodology (para. 1 [Abstract]). I will want to contact poets, fiction
writers, and dramatists, likely in equal proportion. How many in each stratum?
I’m not sure, but I will keep the number modest, in line with this statement: “It
is better to do a small study well than a large study poorly” (McMillan &
Schumacher, 1997, p. 299). But I won’t keep the number too modest. Too few
respondents may translate into my obtaining too little data (see, e.g.,
Cicero-Reese & Black, 1998) to address the worth of my covering theory
beyond my participants’ experiences, although I should point out that some
studies with small samples have yielded useful information (Decker, Bailey,
& Westergaard, 2002).
Whatever the number of
respondents, I will, however, need to consider the implications to the study
with regard to nonresponse (de Leeuw, 2005; and Trochim, 2002d). For example,
will those from my sample who do not respond describe a group largely made up
of individuals who believe no experiences in school encouraged them to become
writers? That exists as a possibility; one Canadian novelist I spoke to told me
he felt that no experiences in elementary or high school had encouraged him to
become a writer. Another possibility: Could some respondents describe a group
discouraged (Birney, 1966) rather than encouraged by experiences in school to
become creative writers? For me to find answers to these and other relevant
questions may require my interviewing nonrespondents about why they did not
respond to the survey.
Given
the non-random stratified purposive sample of respondents for my study, each
stratum will define a type of writer rather than a statistically representative
sample of a type. I refer to McCaffery et al. again: “As is usual in
qualitative research, participants were not selected to be statistically
representative of their ethnic and socioeconomic group; rather, they were
selected to represent a range of [participants]” (2003, Discussion, para. 6).
There exist many research
directions I could take to survey creative writers and analyze their responses.
I could even, for a non-random sample, take a quantitative approach, using
statistical analyses of respondent’s answers to Likert-type, dichotomous,
nominal, and/or ordinal questions (Trochim, 2002j). Such questions, set in an
interview guide or self-administered questionnaire, would define a structured
survey format (Trochim, 2002a). I could determine statistical significance of
the responses with regard to an analysis of omnibus correlations—shotgun style
(McMillan & Shumacher, 1997)—of variables defined by questions based on
various parts of the covering theory, or, for that matter, for a more
first-order (see Chapter Twenty-Three: Further Research—Covering Theory; and
Pogson et al., 2002) analysis that tosses out reference to a covering theory,
of variables defined by questions based on the themes from my phenomenological
studies.
I
could, on the other hand, follow a qualitative approach that analyzes
respondents’ answers to open-ended questions that allow them to describe
relevant experiences. Many researchers unable to randomize from a sampling
frame consider qualitative survey data to gather information, not for the
purpose of generalizability, but for direction, or for the sake of new
insights. Some researchers design a survey to allow for open-ended responses
(Trochim, 2002h) to specific questions, and refer to this type of survey as
semi-structured (2002h). Even some mail-in surveys have used this open-ended
format (see, e.g., Alvarez, & Deverell, & Penn 2003).
Open-ended questions,
although more avante garde than traditional closed-ended types (e.g., true and
false, Likert, multiple choice, ranking) can provide relevant, reliable, valid
information (Krosnick, 1999). This information can breathe humanity, a sense of
real people with real thoughts and feelings, into a study (see, e.g., Alvarez,
& Deverell, & Penn, 2003). Abe, Talbot, and Geelhoed (1998) created survey-opportunities
for respondents who had participated in a program designed to help
international undergraduate and graduate students adjust to university by
inviting them to have an open-ended talk about “their experiences with campus
life” (p. 542). These opportunities provided valuable information (1998).
Wollin, Dale, Spenser, & Walsh (n.d.) used open-ended prompt questions to
gather information about people with multiple sclerosis (MS) and their family
members. For example, “the information about MS I would like to receive now is…”
(Study Design, para. 2). Miller, MacKeigan, Rosser, and Marshman (1999)
qualitatively surveyed patients with respect to their demands affecting
physicians’ prescriptions, using an open-ended forum.
Krosnick (1999) refers to “a
number of recently rediscovered studies [that] found that the reliability and
validity of open-ended questions exceeded that of close-ended questions (e.g.
Hurd 1932, Remmers et al. 1923)” (1999, Questionnaire Design, para. 3). Further
in the name of reliability and validity, I would need to code comments to
open-ended questions carefully (Developing a Survey, n.d.). Likely, I would
group codes to form themes. Themes could be compared or contrasted to the
covering theory. New insights could lead to extensions or modifications or
contradictions of the theory (Glaser, 1992; and Glaser & Strauss, 1967).
Findings, descriptive in nature, would “explore relationships … in an
explanatory way” (McMillan & Schumacher, 1997, p. 296).
Any survey requires
rigorous groundwork. That means I must: 1) establish face and content validity
(McMillan & Schumacher, 1997); 2) consider focus group input (1997) ; 3)
pre- and field-test the survey (Ferber et al., 1980c; and Ferber et al.,
1980a); 4) consider survey (Trochim, 2002f) and researcher, even subject, or
respondent (McMillan & Schumacher, 1997), effects; 5) standardize the
survey form within a particular mode of delivery (1997); 6) discuss reliability
concerns (1997); and 7) decide on a methodology for analysis and interpretation
(1997). Studies that do not address these points draw criticism. For example,
Keith’s (n.d.) study about “an administrative look at the ramifications of
accommodating various departments’ views of how administrative literacy is to
be defined” (para. 1) uses a survey instrument, but does not discuss points 1
to 5. Morasco (n.d.), however, discusses pilot-testing (field-testing; point 3)
his character evaluation survey, thereby establishing at least one element of
the survey’s internal validity.
The preceding paragraph
describes the need for “rigorous, systematic, and objective [or, for that
matter, subjective (as in the case of hermeneutic phenomenological)]
methodology to obtain reliable and valid knowledge relevant to education
activities and programs” (Eisenhart & Towne, 2003, Changes Over Time Based
on Public Input: Scientifically Based Research Standards, Ai). My goal: “to
build systematically on the findings of [my] research” (2003, Bv).
Unlike studies that use
already established surveys that publish explicit information about content
validity and reliability (see, e.g., Comley & Banks, 2000; Forsythe, 2004;
French, n.d.; and Miller, 1997), my study will require discussion about my
self-constructed survey’s validity and reliability issues. I should add,
however, that established, commercially available surveys do not necessarily
preclude problematic validity or reliability issues (McMillan & Schumacher,
1997).
Point 1: Face and Content Validity
I will need to determine
whether the survey truly studies respondents’ experiences in school that
encouraged them to take up creative writing (Palmquist, n.d.c). I could
establish face validity by presenting my survey and methodology to a researcher
familiar with survey research, to confirm that the survey appears reasonable in
its purpose and design (Palmquist, n.d.d). But content validity (Reliability
and Validity, 2003) should logically establish itself.
Let me explain: I will
present the covering theory to respondents, preparing them to make, if possible,
statements of convergence (one or more parts of the theory relate to
experiences they had, and those experiences encouraged them to become creative
writers) and/or divergence (one or more parts of the theory relate to
experiences they had, but those experiences did not encourage them to become
creative writers). Because the theory will have already passed the rigors of Theory from Phenomenology, designed to
ensure validity, and because convergence and divergence “reflect[ ] the
specific intended domain of content” (Palmquist, n.d.e), content validity
should naturally assert itself; however, just as researchers ask appropriate
colleagues/others to verify that content validity exists in their studies (see,
e.g., Hanson, Randolfi, & Olson-Johnson, 2002; Howard & Weiler, 2003;
and Arnold & Ketter, n.d.), I will, in the name of modesty (New World
Translation, Proverbs 11:2), likewise do the same.
Point 2: Focus Group Input
At the pre-field stage,
respondent focus groups allow the researcher to gather information about a
topic (How to Conduct Pretesting, 1997). My phenomenological studies will have
already established themes of relevance that define the phenomenon (the topic)
of lived school experiences that have encouraged the studies’ participants. Theory from Phenomenology will have
established a covering theory that defines the phenomenon. Therefore, I will
not require a respondent focus group.
Point 3: Pre-Field- and Field-Testing
Still at the pre-field
stage: Some researchers employ cognitive pretesting (Krosnick, 1999), referred
to by some researchers as cognitive laboratory interviews (How to Conduct
Pretesting, 1997). Respondents, in face-to-face interviews, describe verbally “whatever
comes to mind as they formulate responses” (Krosnick, 1999, Pretesting, para.
4) to the survey. Using formal, hermeneutic phenomenological methodology, my
studies will have already described “whatever comes to mind” for the
participants as each responded to my research question: “What, if any, lived
school experiences encouraged you to become a creative writer?”; however, with
respect to the survey, cognitive pretesting could reveal what problems
respondents have “with the questionnaire” (How to Conduct Pretesting, 1997, p.
4). I would record field notes, during
the interviews that detail such problems. Contact summaries and self-addressed
memos, describing my observations, conclusions, and concerns, would provide me
with direction about modifications needed in the survey.
In recent years,
pretesting (pre-field- and field-testing) has new direction beyond
conventional, simplistic pretesting (Krosnick, 1999), in which researchers’ “impressions
of the respondents’ experiences in answering the questions” (1999, Pretesting,
para 1) tend to vagueness. Researchers can lack concrete knowledge “about what
went on in respondents’ minds when answering questions” (para. 2). Behaviour
coding (1999; see, also, How to Conduct Pretesting, 1997), part of this new
direction, would be a valuable tool to help me analyze transcriptions of a
number of face-to-face taped survey interviews at the field-testing stage. The
transcriptions could reveal parts of the survey that respondents find
confusing. Krosnick (1999) points out that “Presser & Blair (1994)
demonstrated that behavior coding is quite consistent in detecting apparent
respondent difficulties and interviewer problems. Conventional pretesting also
detects both sorts of problems but less reliably” (Pretesting, para. 5).
Behaviour coding addresses “the respondent’s ability to form an adequate
response” (How to Conduct Pretesting, 1997, p. 5)—and highlights problems that
both respondent and interviewer might have with particular questions (1997).
Contact summaries, memos, and field notes would help me focus on “respondent
difficulties and interviewer problems.”
Another pretesting tool,
respondent debriefing (How to Conduct Pretesting, 1997), like other elements of
pretesting, helps establish internal validity. As part of the field-testing,
respondent debriefing helps the researcher “determine whether concepts and
questions are understood by respondents in the same way that the survey
[researcher] intended” (How to Conduct Pretesting, 1997, p. 6). An interview
guide would assist the researcher, especially if he had “a clear idea of
potential problems so that good debriefing questions [could] be developed” (p.
7). Field notes, memos, and contact summaries would offer further assistance.
My limited budget for the
study (Ferber et al., 1980b) will dictate my conducting respondent debriefing, behaviour
coding, and cognitive pretesting myself. My budget will also dictate to what
extent I will be able to use interview debriefing, which refers to third
parties’ querying interviewers about problems they see in the survey (How to
Conduct Pretesting, 1997). In view of my budget, I could modify interview
debriefing, turning it into a self-debriefing. Also, I could use a peer
debriefer, a colleague, to query (interview debrief) me about problems I see in
the survey. In both self- and interview debriefing, an interview guide along
with field notes, contact summaries, and memos would enable me to clarify
questions and direction in the survey that still need reworking. In the end,
pretesting, likely ending with interview debriefing (or self-debriefing), should
help minimize the number of confounded results.
Point 4: Survey, Researcher, and
Subject/Respondent Effects
Many effects in survey
research confound results. Not surprisingly, then, considerable criticism
exists in the world of surveys (Deary et al., 2002). Therefore, I must fully
address these effects, thereby enhancing the survey’s validity. Pretesting
enhances the same; in fact, 3 and 4 overlap, in view of the fact that
pretesting attempts to root out survey effects.
Surveys that use unbiased
questions (Ferber et al., 1980b; Trochim, 2002e; and Trochim, 2002g), referring
to an absence of “leading [or slanted] questions” (Kalsbeek, 1998, p. 10), and
that avoid “unclear … wording” (p. 10; also see Developing a Survey, n.d.),
enhance internal validity by helping to minimize survey effects. Also, because
the order of questions may introduce bias (Ferber et al., 1980b; see, also,
Stinson, 1999) and because long surveys wear out respondents, confounding
results (Ferber et al., 1980b; see, also, Stinson, 1999), question order and
survey length effects must be addressed.
Here is another word on
bias. Although French (n.d.) ranks as an
undergraduate researcher, she accents her own researcher-credibility by
discussing one threat to the internal validity of her study: intersubject bias.
She uses a commercially available survey—Cheney’s 25-item Organizational scale
(1983). She defers reference to the survey’s effects to its maker, which I find
a little disappointing, but her addressing threats to the internal validity
with reference to the physical circumstance of respondents completing surveys “near
one another” (French, n.d., p. 22) shows good sense on her part. I, too, want
to show good sense in addressing my survey’s internal validity.
For my survey, respondents
will need to access long-term memory of events in school. Although the work of
such recall could discourage some respondents from bothering to complete the
survey (More About Mail Surveys, 1997), my appeal to their diligence in the
name of pedagogy and my study’s encouraging a new generation of creative
writers may provide incentive. The personal relevance of the survey, in terms
of what school-related events encouraged respondents to become creative
writers, should also provide incentive (Stinson, 1999). Hence, positive subject
effects may assert themselves in respondents who find walking down memory lane
to answer the questions exciting and highly motivating. This novelty (positive
subject) effect (McMillan & Schumacher, 1997) may actually increase
internal validity as respondents diligently search their memories for relevant
experiences.
Problematic subject, or
respondent, effects (McMillan & Schumacher, 1997), however, may arise
through comments in a semi-structured section of the survey if respondents
create, rather than simply remember, events. To keep the study, then, out of a
folklore domain (Borgatti, 1996b), I will ask respondents to make sure that
responses truly reflect their experience(s), encouraging them to
contemplate response-accuracy through their reporting facts/details. This
request focuses not on “generalization or opinion” or
imagination,
but on “respondents’ accounts of actual events” (Miller et al., 1999, Methods,
para. 3). Just as the interview guide for my phenomenological studies helped
participants remember “actual events,” a thoughtfully constructed
semi-structured section could likewise help respondents.
Problematic researcher
effects—which, in this case, could also be called survey effects—should be
reduced if the survey does not reveal any of my biases. Also, if I use e-mail
surveys, which would fit well into my parsimonious budget, researcher effects
such as an interviewer/researcher could inadvertently create through gestures,
voice inflections, and facial mannerisms would not exist. McFadden and Winter
(2001) speak about “social interactions [which can create researcher effects]
lead[ing] to biases in responses to survey questions” (p. 1). Additionally,
e-mail, in terms of the researcher removed from the respondent, should reduce
the possibility of subject effects such as social desirability and the
Hawthorne effect (McMillan & Schumacher, 1997), even reducing the effects
of the Heisenberg Uncertainty Principle (see Chapter Fourteen: Methodology). E-mail
surveys, then, have some advantages over person-to-person surveys.
Researchers
who do not explain their efforts to minimize survey, or other relevant, effects
(see, e.g., Bowman et al., 2002; Chairs et al., 2002; Comer, 2002; Haugen,
2001; Mark et al., 2002; and Rohs et al., 2002) invite criticism for their
studies (see, e.g., Center for Child Care Workforce, 2000). In a graduate
course in research methods that I took at the University of Northern British
Columbia, Paul Madak, then chair for the education department, commented on
how, surprisingly, even established researchers sometimes publish articles that
do not sufficiently address validity issues (see, e.g., Söderfeldt, Söderfeldt,
& Warg, 1995). I want to address validity issues to ensure the survey “holds
water”—to ensure I am researching what I say I am researching (McMillan &
Schumacher, 1997), namely the worth of the covering theory for a sample of
creative writers. Naturally, then, I plan to sufficiently discuss internal
validity in my survey study.
Point 5: Standardize the
Survey Form within a Particular Mode of Delivery
I will need to consider
the appearance of the survey, along with the appearance of the letter of
introduction—of transmittal (McMillan & Schumacher, 1997)—and follow-up letters
to respondents. A professional appearance (Trochim, 2002c) invites respondents
to take surveys seriously. Of course, the survey, letter of introduction, and
follow-up letters must be standardized.
As for the mode of
delivery, I have already referred to e-mail (Ferber et al., 1980c) and its
advantages in terms of economy, minimizing researcher and subject effects, and
ease of contact. As an independent researcher, I lack university or
corporate sponsorship (Ferber et al., 1980b). Although I could possibly afford small financial
incentives, to motivate as many individuals as possible to respond to the
survey (Lesser et al., 2001)—a customary practise in survey research—there
exists an awkwardness in my using e-mail for contact and survey transmittal and
using the post for mailing a financial incentive. Also, if I appeal to the
respondents in the “elevated” name of pedagogy, introspection, and my
study’s encouraging a new generation of creative writers, a nominal “incentive”
(for example, a toonie: $2.00 CAN) may insult more than motivate.
Other modes of delivery:
telephone (see, e.g., Scarpellini, n.d.; and Annie E. Casey Foundation, 2003),
post (More About Mail Surveys, 1997), and face-to-face interviews (Krosnick,
1999; also Stinson, 1999). Unlike other researchers, however, who can afford
several interviewers (see, e.g., McElrath & McEvoy, 2001), I will not be
able to afford any. Even my using the postal system, and especially my using
the telephone (i.e., long distance calls), may create a financial burden.
Pros and cons exist for
any mode of delivery, just as pros and cons exist for any research methodology
(McMillan & Shumacher, 1997). Although I have not yet chosen conclusively
what mode of delivery I want to use, I must admit that e-mail looks inviting
for several reasons I have already mentioned and for other reasons as well: It
allows for lengthy responses, allows respondents time for thoughtful responses,
and it lends itself to a quick turnaround time (Trochim, 2002d).
Point 6: Reliability Concerns
The reliability of my
survey’s structured section—should it have one—could be established by my
administering and re-administering it to (testing and re-testing it on) a
sample of creative writers. I could compare the second set of responses for
each respondent to the first set (Palmquist, n.d.a; also Reliability and
Validity, 2003). Granted, test/re-test data draw into question whether the
respondent has changed (diachronic reliability) over the time between tests
(Reliability and Validity, 2003):
For example, in a
follow-up study one year later of reading comprehension in a specific group of
school children, diachronic reliability would be hard to achieve. If the test
were given to the same subjects a year later, many confounding variables would
have impacted the researchers’ ability to reproduce the same circumstances
present at the first test. (Palmquist, n.d.f, para. 5).
Understandably, many program evaluation surveys deliberately
study skill or knowledge development through pre/post assessment (see, e.g.,
Curriculum: Program Evaluation, n.d.), and, clearly, skills or knowledge can
change over time (Palmquist, n.d.f), with regard to history or maturation
effects (McMillan & Schumacher, 1997) rather than just through program
effects, thereby confounding results; however, my survey will not test skills
or knowledge. My survey will explore memories, which, I predict, due to their
relevance to what encouraged respondents to become writers, likely won’t
change. Such a statement implies diachronic reliability.
My test/re-test process
could generate a reliability stability coefficient (McMillan & Schumacher,
1997). McMillan and Schumacher (1997) recommend establishing reliability “before
the research is undertaken” (p. 243) through “individuals who are similar to
the subjects in the research” (p. 244). I could contact established creative
writers, administering the survey on two different occasions, arriving, through
quantifiable measures, at a reliability stability coefficient.
My peer debriefer (McMillan
& Schumacher, 1997) would not need to make a comparison between the test
and re-test responses for each person, searching for discrepancies between his
tallies and mine, in the sense of interrater reliability (Palmquist, n.d.b).
Tallies of answers for a structured section would not reflect subjective
observations, but, rather, objective counting or reading of numbers and
subsequent totals; therefore, any sort of interrater reliability quotient would
not be necessary.
As for a semi-structured
section, a reliability stability coefficient would not make much sense. A
semi-structured question could ask: Are there any examples of experiences in
school that encouraged you to become a creative writer? If yes, could you
describe them in detail? A respondent might present different events on
different occasions; however, such a difference does not imply unreliability.
In my phenomenological interviews (Studies I, II, and III), I probed until the
participants ran out of experiences to talk about. If I administer the survey
through e-mail, I won’t be present to repeatedly probe respondents to think
about their experiences. If I were able to repeatedly probe, no doubt a
partial list of experiences would become a complete list. A partial list, it
seems to me, would translate into a reduced number of themes rather than
unreliable themes.
Why do I say rather
than unreliable themes? I doubt that any two experiences reported by one
respondent would contradict each other in the sense that one experience
supports a theme that contradicts a theme supported by the other experience.
During Study I, I encountered no contradictory statements in any of the
interviews; likewise for Studies II and III. To err on the side of caution,
however, I could nevertheless look at reliability as a function of
contradictory statements. Although a reliability stability coefficient—as
already referred to—may not make mathematical sense, contradictory
statements/experiences in a semi-structured section could define a level
of unreliability. On the other hand, a discussion of a semi-structured
section—yes, it would be a challenge “to summarize and interpret” (Interviews,
n.d., Disadvantages, bullet 3)—could reveal, rather than unreliability, new
insights, even an extension or modification of the theory, given that follow-up
questions give respondents an opportunity to explain the nature or possibly the
meaning of contradictory statements.
One aspect of reliability
remains that I would like to mention: quixotic reliability (Palmquist,
n.d.f). A structured section for the survey could follow the following logic:
Each respondent could state for each part of the covering theory (assuming I
will be able to divide the theory into parts according to an inherent logic)
whether it: a) converges with any of his or her “encouraging” experiences (an
example: Let’s say the theory in part says, “Teachers who allow students time
to daydream encourage some to become creative writers.” A respondent may say, “Yes,
teachers who allowed me time to daydream did encourage me [convergence] to
become a creative writer.”); b) diverges from his or her experience (an
example: Let’s say the theory in part says, “Teachers who openly value student
writers’ hard work encourage some to become writers.” A respondent may say, “Teachers
did openly value my efforts to write, but they had no effect on me [divergence]
in terms of encouraging me to become a writer.”); c) leaves him or her
undecided with regard to convergence versus divergence; or d) represents
experiences he or she never had in school. That logic, in a well-constructed
survey that addresses survey effects, should eliminate quixotic issues.
Convergence: a.
Given a part of the theory
in question, would a respondent quixotically find it converges with his or her
encouraging experiences, meaning that he or she should have labelled that part
of the theory b, c, or d? Arthur, Thomas, and Elizabeth readily recalled
experiences that apparently had encouraged them, and they readily through free
imaginative variation were able to determine if those experiences, expressed as
(essential) themes, had truly encouraged them. Therefore, respondents should
easily and non-quixotically see whether a part of the theory converges with
their encouraging experiences, especially if my survey, in some formal process
akin to free imaginative variation, enables respondents to think about the
noteworthy degree of significance of those experiences.
Divergence: b.
Would a respondent
quixotically find a part of the theory diverges from his or her experiences,
meaning that he or she should have labelled that part of the theory a, c, or
d? Arthur, Thomas, and Elizabeth readily
came up with what they thought were relevant experiences. They readily
determined through free imaginative variation which ones, in terms of themes,
turned out to be not relevant (incidental). Therefore, respondents should
easily and non-quixotically see whether a part of the theory diverges from
their experiences, especially if my survey, again in some formal process akin
to free imaginative variation, enables respondents to think about the lack of
significance of those experiences.
Undecided: c.
Would a respondent
quixotically record “undecided” for a particular part of the theory, meaning he
or she should have labelled that part of the theory a, b, or d? The survey
should give the respondent opportunity to reason, “Yes, I had similar
experiences to those referred to in that part of the theory [ruling out a need
to choose d], but I’m not sure if they encouraged me or not.” With such an
opportunity, respondents should readily see whether confusion regarding
convergence (a) versus divergence (b) applies. If confusion exists, then c
would be the non-quixotic choice.
Experiences the Respondent
Never Had: d.
Would a respondent quixotically
record that the part of the theory in question represents
experiences he or she never had in school, meaning he or she should have labelled that part a,
b, or c? Each of my three participants (Studies I, II, and II) were not at any
loss to recall specific events that apparently had encouraged him or her. That
observation conversely suggests to me that any thoughtful respondent should
easily and non-quixotically evaluate whether a particular part of the theory
describes experiences he or she did not have.
Quixotic issues in a structured
section for the survey, then, according to my four previous paragraphs, should not
exist; neither should they exist in the open-ended nature of a semi-structured
section. Respondents would simply detail any relevant experiences. I see no
similarity here to the classic example of the researcher asking, “How are you
doing today?” and the respondents typically saying the same cliché: “Fine”
(Palmquist, n.d.f). That’s quixotic. Experiences relevant to my research
question, however, as shown in Studies I, II, and III, are unique and specific
and easily recalled without quixotic overtones. Really, quixotic issues should
be eliminated through my addressing survey effects and my conducting pre-field-
and field-testing (the pretesting stages).
Point 7:
Methodology for Analysis and Interpretation
A semi-structured section
of the survey could ask each respondent to Describe, if any exist, school
experiences that encouraged him or her to take up creative writing. This
section of the survey would allow for respondents to comment in their own
words.
A qualitative analysis of
comments for the semi-structured section could draw on hermeneutic
phenomenology’s search for themes (see Chapter Fourteen: Methodology)—assuming,
of course, that themes arise from the data. Bracketing out bias, as in my
phenomenological studies (see Chapter Twelve: Bracketing and Phenomenology),
would protect the integrity of my analysis. A peer debriefer would evaluate
whether any of my bias appeared to drive the analysis. Interpretation (which
refers to the process of free imaginative variation), in terms of establishing
essential and tossing out incidental themes (see Chapter Fourteen:
Methodology), too, would likewise benefit from peer debriefing. Traditional,
person-to-person participant review, which would confirm that themes from any
respondent’s survey comments truly reflect his or her experience, however,
could prove to be impractical, especially if the sample were large in number
and respondents lived a distance from my home.
If I conduct the survey
through e-mail, perhaps a modification of the
face-to-face/researcher-to-participant sort of participant review could be
replaced by back-and-forth e-mail communication between me and respondents.
Such a process, however, would limit the size of the sample, in view of the
considerable amount of time participant review, including free imaginative
variation, generally requires. I could work with, say, a sub-sample of five
respondents at a time, repeating the survey over and over with new sub-samples
of five, until I have a total sample of, say, 50. In view of the intensive work
of my analyzing and interpreting the open-ended responses of even just five
respondents, in the context of Bogdan and Biklan’s (1992) advice that
single-participant studies are more manageable than those with multiple-participants,
would require a lot of energy, time, determination, and, I think, patience. My
survey study may take a long time for me to complete, perhaps years.
Final interpretation could describe a process of
verification, in which, in part, I make comparisons and/or contrasts between
parts of the theory and themes that respondents’ experiences give rise to. For
example, if the theory logically could be divided into, say, parts T1,
T2 and T3, and a particular respondent has essential
themes E1, E2, E3, and E4, then 12
comparisons and/or contrasts are possible:
T1 with E1, E2, E3, and E4; T2 with E1, E2,
E3, and E4; and T3 with E1, E2,
E3, and E4. If Ti (i = 1, 2, or 3) and Ej
(j = 1, 2, 3, or 4) are equivalent statements—for example, T3 reads
very similar to, say, E2—then such statements, from my point of
view, would represent convergence. Experiences that gave rise to T3
would be similar to the experiences that gave rise to E2.
Convergence would represent support for the theory—providing my peer debriefer
found none of my bias driving my verification. Final verification would rest
with the respondent’s confirmation of or rejection of my “convergence”
conclusions.
Suppose the same
respondent has incidental themes I1 and I2. If Ti
(i = 1, 2, or 3) and Ir (r = 1 or 2) are equivalent statements—for
example, T1 reads very similar to, say, I2—then such a
statement, from my point of view, would represent divergence. Experiences that
gave rise to T1 would be similar to the experiences that give rise
to I2, in the context of I2’s incidental status. I would
comment on I2 in the survey’s conclusions section just as I
commented on incidental themes for my phenomenological studies in their
conclusions sections. Simply put, I2 would represent divergence from
the theory—providing my peer debriefer found none of my bias driving my
verification. Final verification would rest with the respondent’s confirmation
of or rejection of my “divergence” conclusions.
A respondent’s themes,
however, could express neither convergence nor divergence. That means that none
of the experiences that gave rise to the aforementioned T1, T2
and T3 are similar to the experiences that could give rise to a set
of, say, E1, E2, E3, E4, I1,
and I2. Nevertheless, such dissimilarity could shed new
light on what events in school encourage some students to become creative
writers. E1, E2, E3, E4, as
essential themes, could stand alongside the list of essential themes from Studies
I, II, III and any others I conduct as new direction for teachers, in the sense
that if theme Ej (j = 1, 2, 3, or 4) is based on events that
encouraged a particular respondent, then classroom activities based on theme Ej
may likewise (analogically) encourage others. That last sentence essentially
describes the logical/analogical sense of my phenomenological studies (see
Chapter Eight: Creative Writers Who Were Encouraged in School—a Literature
Review). I would comment on Ej in the survey’s conclusions section
just as I commented on essential themes for my phenomenological studies in
their conclusions sections. Ej could, of course, modify, extend, or
alter the theory.
With respect to convergence and divergence,
that mostly takes care of methodology for analysis and
interpretation of qualitative data produced by a semi-structured survey
section. Also with respect to convergence and divergence, methodology for
analysis and interpretation of quantitative data produced by a structured
survey section could produce notable results. Tallies of convergence versus
divergence versus undecided versus not-relevant-to the
participant’s experience for each part of the covering theory could provide
quantitative data about the degree of relevance the covering theory has for
each respondent as well as for all respondents; however, I am not sure whether
or not I will include a structured section.
My using only a
semi-structured section implies, to me, a certain attractive logic. For
example, a phenomenological point of view in terms of an analysis and
interpretation of a semi-structured survey that simply asks respondents to
concretely describe, if any exist, lived school experiences that encouraged
them to become creative writers should produce useful results. A phenomenological
point of view for Studies I, II, and III produced useful themes/data; those
themes should stand as a good source of data for Theory from Phenomenology. The result, then, of my applying a
phenomenological approach, in terms of analysis and interpretation, to a
semi-structured survey section? Likely, themes. Useful themes. I will think
about such (attractive) logic in the days ahead.
More about Convergence and
Divergence
Convergence
refers to respondents’ “encouraging” experiences that support one or more parts
of the covering theory. Divergence refers to experiences that respondents had,
but those experiences did not encourage them, and therefore stand in a sense as
contradictions, rival hypotheses (Miles & Huberman, 1994), negative or discrepant
results (Project Methodology, n.d.), or disconfirming evidence (Lesson:
Qualitative Research, 1998). Convergence provides theoretical support.
If the null hypothesis were H0 = no support of any part of the
theory will be found, then any convergence implies H0 can be
rejected. I do not, however, speak with
reference to confidence intervals in the context of probability and Type I or
II errors.
Divergence provides
disconfirming evidence. If the respondents provided only disconfirming
evidence, then my survey could not, according to their experiences, reject H0.
Note: The original participants (Studies I, II, III), through participant
review, would have already confirmed the theory’s validity according to their
school experiences. To minimize the double-barrelled effect (McMillan &
Schumacher, 1997) of respondents searching for convergence and divergence
simultaneously in a structured section—should I use one—creating a definite
possibility for respondent confusion (a negative survey effect), I would need
to design the survey to deal with convergence and divergence separately.
By
the way, would an analysis of the covering theory, with respect to convergence
and divergence, ignore the themes of my phenomenological studies (e.g., of
Studies I, II, and III to date)? Remember that the covering theory would result
from an analysis of the themes of the studies (see Chapter Twenty-Three:
Further Research—Covering Theory). With respect to the research question of what,
if any, theoretical direction do these themes give to creative writing
teachers?, the integration of the themes = the covering theory. Therefore,
an analysis of the covering theory, in an implicit sense, does indeed address
those themes as elements of the theory, just as the analysis of a poem or short
story or novel’s particular thematic statement implicitly addresses the poetic,
dramatic, or narrative elements that gave rise to that statement (see Chapter
Six: Qualitative Interview Data Is like a Poem).
Chapter Twenty-Five: A
Checklist for Creative Writing Teachers
Once again in the spirit of extrapolation, in the sense that
what events in school encouraged Arthur, Thomas, and Elizabeth to become
creative writers may likewise encourage others, here is a checklist based on
the results of my three studies:
In the first person point of view,
each teacher should ask him/herself whether or not:
·
I promote the joy and wonder of silent reading of poetry and
fiction____
·
I promote the joy and wonder of listening to poetry and
fiction fluently read aloud____
·
I promote the joy and wonder of listening to songs____
·
I promote the wonder of uninterrupted language
experiences____
·
I promote the intrigue and wonder of flights of imagination
fuelled by the connotative and imagistic value of words____
·
I promote the excitement of verbally punning and joking____
·
I promote the excitement of students’ informing others about what
they have read____
·
I promote the joy and exhilarating freedom of writing down
thoughts and feelings based on poetry and fiction read, and I openly value
those thoughts and feelings____
·
I promote the exhilarating freedom of choice of reading
material____
·
I promote the satisfaction and excitement of receiving sound
direction about how to write well, and I do so compassionately____
·
I demand, from a humanistic point of view, the best from
students____
·
I value, love, see each student as sublimely
unique____
·
I encourage students to be the best that they can be, no
matter what their gifts or deficits are____
·
I provide lots of opportunities for students to write poetry,
stories, and plays____
·
I provide opportunities for students to use their writing in
performances (e.g., public reading, plays)____
·
I read students’ good writing—even non-assigned work that
they bring to school—aloud, as examples for others____
·
I have students read their own good writing samples aloud, as
examples for others ____
·
I provide special events—for example, concerts in which
students are the performers—that may become memories students use as writing
resource material ____
·
I present students’ writing to established writers who praise
the works and/or provide helpful direction____
·
I provide a variety of reading experiences (poems, stories,
non-fiction), in the hopes of instilling a love of stories and a quest for
knowledge, providing students which subjects to write about____
The
more checks a teacher has, the more closely his or her school-based events
exemplify, collectively, the phenomenon of what events in school encouraged
Arthur, Thomas, and Elizabeth.
Chapter Twenty-Six: A Last
Word
In
Chapter Eleven: Literature Related to the Teaching of Creative Writing, I said
that many curriculum and Language Arts guides address how to teach poetry and
fiction writing. If creative writing, therefore, stands as a formal Language
Arts ingredient, then direction for teachers about what sorts of activities may
encourage students to view creative writing seriously merits attention. I
present this monograph, then, as reading that merits the attention of Language
Arts, in particular creative writing, teachers. This Monograph One, I hope,
merits the attention of qualitative researchers too, especially those
interested in a phenomenological perspective. Thank
you for reading this work, the product of five years of reading, writing,
researching, thinking. The “ride,” for me, has been an adventure. I began with
an exploration into lived school experiences. I described the themes I saw. I
plan to explore those themes through Theory
from Phenomenology and describe the theory that I see. I plan to “elaborate,
extend, or test [that] theory” (Neuman, 2006, p. 35) through a survey that
Neuman (2006) might describe as explanatory research. As he says, explanatory
research should: 1) “test a theory’s predictions or principle”; and 2) “elaborate
and enrich a theory’s explanation” (p. 34).
Monograph Two, designed to include further phenomenological studies of
creative writers (perhaps another fiction writer and two dramatists), and
possibly Theory from Phenomenology
and a survey of creative writers, will, I hope, provide me with another
worthwhile ride and, in turn, provide Language Arts teachers with more useful
direction.
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Appendix A: Ethics
Information (Study I) LETTER OF
INTRODUCTION FOR THE POTENTIAL PARTICIPANT Dan Lukiv -------------------- -------------------- Canada Telephone: -------------- E-mail: lukivdan@shaw.ca March 15, 2002 Dear
(_____________): Thank you for your
time. The purpose of
this study, which will complete my Master of Education program, is to explore what,
if any, school experiences in school encouraged you to become a creative
writer. The goal of this study is to discover themes in your experiences
and to publish my conclusions and recommendations, possibly in education
journals and/or magazines, for the benefit of teachers who wonder what sorts of
activities in school have been known to encourage at least one person to become
a creative writer. I would like to
interview you because I know that your poetry has been published in some of
Canada’s finest literary journals and that you write a poetry column in a
well-established publication. I respect you as a poet, and I know that others
do too. You are definitely a member of Canada’s community of poets. I would like to
interview you, asking what, if any, experiences in school encouraged you to
become a creative writer. I will tape record the interview. An interview will
be a set of data. One interview may be sufficient. After an interview, I will
transcribe the data, which I will analyse, looking for possible themes. Other
data could include relevant artefacts—poetry, stories, journal entries, or art by
you. Your input will help me further analyse data. Our interpretation of data
and themes will determine which themes are incidental and which ones are
essential. In accordance with
established research ethics, you may withdraw from the study at any time. Your
involvement remains voluntary. Potential benefits
from the study are many fold. It should deepen your understanding of what
school-related forces or circumstances encouraged you to take up creative
writing; it should likewise deepen my understanding of myself; and it should
delineate themes that surprise, enlighten, or inspire readers of the study.
Those themes, to be discussed in the conclusions section, should give rise to
recommendations for teachers of creative writing. I will take care
to protect your anonymity. In the study, I will keep references to you general.
For example: “The participant lives in a small Canadian city, has enjoyed
success as a published poet, and has received a formal university education at
the graduate level.” I will keep all
data transcriptions, analysis, field notes, contact summaries, and
interpretations on disks. These disks, any relevant artefacts, interview tapes,
and related textual matter will be kept locked in a filing cabinet at my home. When my Supervisory
Committee considers my study complete, I will return to you any artefacts I
have, and I will erase all disks and tapes. Also at that time I will provide
you with a copy of the completed study. I will keep an
audibility file locked in that filing cabinet for a period of five years. It
will contain a transcription of relevant data, a record of data management, and
a record of analysis- and interpretation-related decisions. Then I will
destroy—shred—the audibility file. You are welcome to
contact me through snail mail, e-mail, or telephone about any questions that
arise. If any ethical dilemma arises during the study, I will gladly work with
you to find an ethically prudent resolve. If you, however, have any complaints
about the study, please contact the Vice President of Research at the
University of Northern British Columbia: 250-960-5820. Please fill out
the attached herewith Informed Consent Form after you have had the opportunity
to ask me questions about the study. You and I can sign the form in the presence
of each other. Thank you for your
interest in this research, and for your assistance. Sincerely, Dan Lukiv Informed Consent Form Please circle the correct response: Do you understand that you have been asked to be in a
research study? Yes No Have you read a
copy of the attached herewith letter of introduction? Yes No
Do you understand
the benefits and risks involved in your participating in this study? Yes No
Have you had an
opportunity to ask questions of and discuss this study with Dan Lukiv, the researcher? Yes No
Do you understand
that you are free to refuse to participate in or to withdraw from the study at any time without giving a
reason? Yes No
Has the issue of confidentiality been explained to
you? Yes No
Do you understand
that you will have access to the information you provide? Yes No
This study was explained to me
by:________________________ I agree to take part in this study. __________________________ _______________ Signature of Research Participant Date __________________________ Printed Name __________________________ ______________ Signature of
Researcher Date Appendix B: An Interview
Guide I
will begin the first session by establishing neutrality and rapport (Patton,
1987). I could ask questions such as: (a) “How long have you been a writer?”; (b)
“Do you have a favourite piece that you have written?”; (c) if the answer is
yes: “What do you like about that piece?”; (d) “What do you like to write
about?”; and (e) “Do you have any advice for up-and-coming writers who are just
starting their apprenticeships?” My
research question forms the foundation of the study (van Manen, 1990): “What,
if any, lived school experiences encouraged you to become a creative writer?” I
could present the question in a variety of ways. For example: (a) “Could you
give me an example of an experience in school that encouraged you to become a
creative writer?”; (b) “Could you give me another example of a school
experience that encouraged you?”; and (c) “You have mentioned several
experiences related to your being in that teacher’s class: Do you recall any
other experiences from that class?” I may
need to use probes to draw out the experience in concrete terms. Patton (1987)
provides examples: (a) “When did that happen?”; (b) “Who else was involved?”; (c)
“Where were you during that time?”; (d) “What was your involvement in that
situation?”; (e) “How did that come about?”; and (f) “Where did that happen?”
(p. 125). Sensory questions could, if necessary, probe into what the
participant saw, heard, tasted, smelled, and touched (Patton, 1987). Examples
of sensory probes could be: (a) “As you reflect on that experience, do you “see”
anything in particular?”; (b) “Do you “hear” anything?”; (c) “Do you “taste”
anything?”; (d) “Do you “smell” anything?”; and (e) “Do you physically “feel”
anything?” Feeling
questions, in the Carl Rogerian tradition (Egan, 1998), will, if necessary, probe
“to understand the respondent’s emotional reactions” (Patton, 1987, p. 118). I
may need to ask Rogerian-style questions such as: (a) “How did you feel during
that experience?”; (b) “Do you mean that you felt (_______) about that
experience?”; and (c) “It appears to me that you felt (_______): Is that true,
or did you feel another emotion?”
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[1]
In the interest of my credibility as a researcher (McLean et al.,
1997), a colleague who holds an MEd (not a peer debriefer for any of my studies)
and who is very familiar with ethical issues in qualitative studies read my
proposal for Studies II and III to verify that its ethical considerations and
methodology fully reflected all ethical considerations and methodology of the
original study (Study I), which he also read, and which had received official
approval from the UNBC Ethics Department.
[2] I defined lived experiences concretely through establishing an
interview guide, which kept me objectively focused on my research question and
the nature of the participants’ lived experiences (van Manen, 1990). Answers to
the questions in this guide helped define experiences in terms of where
(spatiality) and when (temporality) they happened, how they emotionally
affected participants (I could call this emotionality), and who was present
(relationality) (1990). See Appendix B for the interview guide.
[3] My peer debriefers for my template study
(Study I; my MEd research) were my three supervisory committee members. For
Studies II and III, I, as an independent researcher, found an individual who
holds an MEd and who is very familiar with issues of bias in qualitative
studies to serve as a peer debriefer. Like my supervisory committee members, he
understands how a researcher’s bias can “skew” interviews and “muddy” the
analysis and interpretation of qualitative data. I am happy to say that no peer
debriefer found bias in any of my studies’ interview questions and comments. If
bias, however, had been found, all participant’s statements arising from my
biased questions or comments would have been deleted. I am also happy to say
that no peer debriefer found my analyses and interpretations tainted by my
bias.